Date: June 04, 2020 03:38 am Title: Thursday, October 2, 1997
Awww, even if there's 'nothing too exciting' in Pam's life, they're so adorable and cozy with each other! I'm here for it!
And I agree with Pam — staring at Jim all day not a bad thing :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're enjoying the story just as much as I am writing it!
Date: June 03, 2020 08:19 pm Title: Thursday, October 2, 1997
A delight as usual Beth! The treat portion in the middle seemed especially relevant and I got a good chuckle from it.
Author's Response: That was my favorite part of that chapter!
Date: June 03, 2020 05:30 pm Title: Thursday, October 2, 1997
Very cute. Nice to see them just enjoying spending time with each other. I kinda liked that Jim was able to catch a peek of the diary. Perfect comeback for him. Keep doing everything you're doing Jim.
I also like that Pam wants to make sure they're both on the same page about things. Keep communicating like that. Can't wait to hear what happens after this dorm dance.
Author's Response: I love forcing them to actually communicate with one another. So different from a lot canon where they seem to forget to communicate the important things.
Date: June 03, 2020 04:17 pm Title: Thursday, October 2, 1997
LET ME BUY YOUR ICE CREAM, DANGIT
Omg. This made me giggle.
Author's Response: It was my absolute favorite line from this chapter!
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2020 03:35 pm Title: Sunday, September 28, 1997
This is so so cute!!! I love the coy hints and how just adorable they are. Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2020 01:54 pm Title: Sunday, September 28, 1997
You can hear the happiness and excitement in Pam's voice so clearly in this chapter. Love it!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: May 07, 2020 10:12 am Title: Sunday, September 28, 1997
I love this chapter so much! They both are so adorable and happy - well, the way I prefer my Jam :)
Author's Response: Me too:) although I keep adding angst into the mix in my stories, so I don't know what that's about!
Date: May 07, 2020 09:37 am Title: Sunday, September 28, 1997
They're a mess and I love it. This chapter made me smile, so keep up the good work.
Author's Response: A mess indeed!
Date: May 07, 2020 03:45 am Title: Sunday, September 28, 1997
I love how they kind of slipped from friends to a couple, but didn’t talk about it... That’s very cute. Nice to have it cleared up though and to have them officially on the same page.
Author's Response: It definitely took them a bit to get there!
Date: May 06, 2020 05:22 pm Title: Sunday, September 28, 1997
Very cute. Pam pausing to run to Jim's room to ask that was adorable. They're just lovely together. Jim being the first one to say he loves her seems fitting. As does her mild freak out. It's a much nicer freakout this time around don't get me wrong.
Some things happened? Ok, I'll just use my imagination on that one, but I think it's at least safe to say they're doing a bit more than just making out now. Nice images there. Still loving how much fun college age Pam is having with Jim back in her life.
Author's Response: This Pam is much better than the Pam with Roy.
Date: May 06, 2020 04:59 pm Title: Sunday, September 28, 1997
*throws jelly beans and wishes she could give more than 5 to a story*
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, wow thank you!!!!
Date: May 05, 2020 03:42 am Title: Monday, September 8, 1997
I think they’re right about the bench too!
Ahh, nothing is more butterfly inducing than lots of handholding early on in a relationship. This was so, so sweet!
Author's Response: It's the standard will they/or will they not mentality for sure! Thank you so much!
Date: May 04, 2020 08:24 pm Title: Monday, September 8, 1997
Nice, glad to see things looking up for our adorkable duo.
Author's Response:
adorkable - accurate
Thanks for the review!
Date: May 04, 2020 06:12 pm Title: Monday, September 8, 1997
Much more mature version of Pam here. Yes relationships take work, but the good ones are the relationships where you want to put in the work. When you do that the rest comes naturally. As this is seeming to do. Lovely update.
Author's Response: Love your thoughts here. Thank you for reading!
Date: May 04, 2020 05:20 am Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
What a chapter.
What.
A.
Chapter.
Honestly, it made me giddy and happy for the whole day. Thank you so much for that :)
Author's Response: AW! I love that you loved it! Thank you!!!
Date: May 03, 2020 08:26 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
Ahhhh! Yay! Go Pam! This was all kinds of adorable! What a build up to get them to this point, but I feel like there’s a lot of great stuff still to come...
Author's Response: So much build up ahah. I'm glad we're getting to the good stuff!
1 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2020 06:27 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
I've finally caught up on this fic and YAY they've kissed, etc.!!!
You've done a great job transitioning high school Pam to college Pam in your writing. She still sounds young, but definitely more mature (and yet, a ways to go!).
And I love 'When Harry Met Sally'!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Finally kissed part 2! But way better this time! Thank you for reading and for the awesome feedback on my writing!
Date: May 03, 2020 04:12 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
I have only one critique of this chapter. We seem to go backwards in time. Last chapter it was September and now it's August again. Just something that stuck out.
Other than that, absolutely lovely. Jim bringing a chick flick is a great move by him. Though he could have probably brought any movie and I doubt they would have watched much of it, keyed up as they were. Yeah, just a good fun chapter here. Can't wait to see where they go from here on out.
Author's Response:
Oh shoot thank you for that catch! I fixed the date!
Thanks!
Date: May 03, 2020 03:22 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
(Kevin): Nic~e.
Now lets just hope they can look eachother in the eyes in the light of day.
Glad to see they are progressing, looking forward to the next one.
Date: May 03, 2020 03:07 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
Yaaaaay!
Ah, this made me so very happy!
I also love brave Pam :)
Great job, as per :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2020 09:17 am Title: Wednesday, September 3, 1997
Just so long as an errant Karen or Katy don't make an appearance and steal Jim, I think they'll be fine.
I enjoyed the update, even if it was short. I'm glad to see things moving in what I think we can all objectively agree is the right direction!
Date: April 26, 2020 06:09 am Title: Wednesday, September 3, 1997
Yes steps being made so that's nice to see. Somehow I get the feeling that Pam is going to be the one to kiss him first this time around. It might be a quick unsteady peck on the lips that leaves Jim slightly gobsmacked or she could just dive right in an snog him, or something in between. I do think that whenever they get to that kind of point, there will be no stopping them or tearing them apart. The way you've got things setting up makes it so easy to envision how things would go so that's fun.
Date: April 26, 2020 03:59 am Title: Wednesday, September 3, 1997
“Yes, next steps are coming in slower, but I’m really okay with it. I think that’s the beauty in this.” This. So much this. Somehow you wrote the perfect review to this chapter... in the middle of the chapter. I can’t say it any better.
Also, thank you sending my spiraling into memories of all my teen relationships every time I read this. The whole thing makes me feel so damn nostalgic & I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It also throws me into my memories every time I write an update. It's definitely fun!
Date: April 20, 2020 12:00 am Title: Sunday, August 31, 1997
“I remember my face getting warmer like I had gone on a run (also, ha, unlikely)” It’s stuff like this that makes the diary format you’re writing in so fun. It works so well!
Oh bless sweet little Jim and all his intense emotions so very much. No wonder Pam feels all flustered after an interaction with him. So adorable!
Author's Response:
Thank you! College Pam is cracking me up as I write her!
Poor Jim though for sure! We all know he's an intense guy and caught up in his emotions.
1 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2020 10:27 pm Title: Sunday, August 31, 1997
Lovely, just lovely!
I hope Pam figures out that all of this means sooner than later :)
Author's Response: I hope so too:)