9 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
This was wonderful. I love how the ending is hopeful, but still complicated, and it's clear that they have a long way to go before things will really be ok, but they're starting to head in the right direction.
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2006 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this. Pam deserves to feel sad and jealous after all that's happened, and Jim is just the person to try to make it all better.
8 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely. I really adore the line, "why should it be Karen and not her? Karen never broke his heart."
It sums up the wonderful complexity of this situation so well, and very much sounds like something our poor Pam would think. Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. And I think the title is perfect!
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sniffle* That was great. I really needed that.
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for writing this. :)
Author's Response: You're welcome--thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1
that made me feel better.
Author's Response: Me too. It was ridiculously cathartic.
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 10:40 am Title: Chapter 1
oh this was beautiful! i absolutely loved the last two sentences. every girl needs a jim.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like those sentences too :)
...I know I wish I had a Jim...
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1
ah - the glimmer of hope I really needed today! thanks!
Author's Response: Glad to help out!
8 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah, Roy more attentive, but still clueless. And much as I want Pam to be strong and not cry, I think Jim might need her to need him in some way to get him to realize there's stills something there. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks! As much as Pam's working hard to hold it together in front of Jim and be all it's-all-good, she's gotta be just torn up inside. And after everything, I can just imagine Jim being unwilling to act on his instincts about what's going on in her head until she's able to give him a clear sign of what that is.
Date: November 16, 2006 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, where's the rest?! :-)
Author's Response: :) Hmm. "And then they figured it out and lived happily ever after." Ok? :P
This is all Pam and Jim were willing to tell my about this particular line of events. It's just a blank after that--I have no idea how they fix things. But they do. They have to, right?
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooo, i really liked this. i mean, really. i want moooooooooore!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry to leave you hanging, but I really feel like this is where this one ends, but I've got a couple more ideas for digging around in Pam's brain, so maybe I'll get around to actually writing those down now.
9 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so, so lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess now that I've delurked, I really have no excuse for not starting to leave feedback for all the wonderful stories I've been devouring here lately, like yours. :)