Reviewer: Madison Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: October 03, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, that was really good. Sad, but really good. Thanks.
Reviewer: Muggins Signed 
7 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 01:53 am Title: Chapter 1
7 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2007 01:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice quiet angst. I like the callback to Jim crossing his fingers in "The Fire".
Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh I love reading older stories again - totally like 'second drink'. :) This one is just as lovely as I remembered.
Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
My god, this is gorgeous and so sad. I swear, whenever you post something, I always brace myself to be blown away - and you never disappoint. Great job here.
Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
9 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad but just gorgeous! :) This is a beautiful line: "He just looked down at the endearingly crooked part in her hair and felt something familiar that made his right hand squeeze his left elbow even harder."
Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: November 28, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just lovely!
Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1
9 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Sad, but beautiful!
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, sad and poetic. I'm a sucker for things like this. Thank you.