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Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

Leave it to Michael to say that tactfully.

I think if Michael made an announcement like this, Jim would quit on the spot, Pam or no Pam. Bad enough he's humiliated in public by the documentary, but then to have Karen dump him practically in front of the whole office, and Michael come out and underscore it...no. That's too much for anyone, even someone as long-suffering as Jim. I know you worked hard on this part, but I'm not buying it. Maybe if you left out Michael's little speech I might.



Author's Response: Yeah, my first draft didn't have Michael saying that, but my friend that read it said that Michael wouldn't actually have that much tact, so I made it more awkward.  Perhaps I need to find a happy medium.

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