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Reviewer: Jonah5 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awwwww, very sweet!  Love the repeating of the casino night line.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 5

I needed you to hear it.  Again.

Brilliant solution! I didn't buy the long speeches they gave each other on the couch--I would break those up, insert more long, awkward pauses, make it sound more like Jim and Pam. But replaying the Casino Night confession was a great idea! Totally worked.

And Pam in Jim's lap? Oh, yeah......:D 

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