10 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2017 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
A flashback! Nice! (And a wedding. Awww!). Love this chapter, too!
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Ooooooooooooooh loved it
Date: February 14, 2008 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
They got married. Seriously, my face is breaking my smile is so huge. SO happy!
oh my god, that moment in the kitchen flashback is so sweet and perfect it really has me in tears. they are so perfect and sweet and happy together, and now they really are in canon also and its just so happy.
Now, because of course, there is no romantic moment that can't be ruined by chemistry, when Pam was talking about how long its been since she drank champagne, my brain starts calculating her BAC. Oh yeah, trust me, that takes you out of the moment.
ya know if anyone ad to be the girl that jim slept with in his old bedroom, glad it was pam.
Date: November 23, 2007 11:26 am Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
I recently read this story on another site and just came back here to re-read chapter 4. I love this story, Moxie!
Date: August 17, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
I missed this one for what ever reason but now that I've read it what can I say..... You really connect with these characters. It's unbelievable. You've got me reading again. I think it was a lost art for me that I'm re discovering! LOL
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9 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Thanks again for another lovely story Moxie. I enjoyed meeting Jim's family
Date: January 29, 2007 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
well, first off, i want to say i am only haflway through while writing this, so yeah. but also, i laughed when jim's sisters name was the same as mine. and then, i laughed with the middling mother... she meddles a lot better than my mother... my mother isway more annoyingwith her meddling. oh well. more reading now
Date: December 28, 2006 06:30 am Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Oh. Soooooo sweet! Thanks for brightening my dull mood. You're the best! And so is Jim's Oracle Mom!
Date: December 26, 2006 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
woohoo! the awesomeness of this! the characterization, the dialogue, the delight! LOVE!
Date: December 22, 2006 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Oh how I love some wedding night JAM! Dwight as a groomsman -- too freaking much!!! An ingenious job with working Jim's POV into this fic, BTW. When I read the first few lines, I was afraid you'd skipped ahead of 'the good part' HA! Then when I got to the flashback, you didn't disappoint, Moxie! Merry Christmas!
Date: December 22, 2006 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Jim and the princess fantasies was such a cute ending! I just loved this chapter - both what happened Thanskgiving night and then of course, the wedding night. Thank you for such a warm, sweet chapter to brighten up my rainy day!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm always happy when I see you comment, kaystar! I'm glad to have helped cheer up your day - it's been raining here since yesterday. If only it were snow....
Date: December 22, 2006 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
“I'm glad,” he replied with a smile, “I suppose now is a good time to mention the whole list of princess fantasies I'm dying to try out.”
Naughty boy! Great finish, with a nice dose of steam and banter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much - I have no idea where that line came from, I blame it on the muse of Jim Halpert!
Date: December 22, 2006 11:05 am Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Oooo! YAY! Thank you Moxie! EXACTLY what I wanted to see!!! Lovely job with this. And the picture at the end? So perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks, xoxoxo! I was hoping it wasn't too cheesy - I felt I had to make sure you and Colette were happy with it. :-)
Date: December 22, 2006 07:09 am Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Ooh - this was exactly what I was hoping to get to see after Larissa caught them kissing in the kitchen! This was great Moxie!
Author's Response: thanks, amyryd - I couldn't leave you all wondering what the heck had happened!
9 [Report This]Date: December 22, 2006 05:12 am Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
A fantastic chapter. I absolutely loved the picture of them napping together. So sweet. Is there really more? Woo hoo.
Date: December 21, 2006 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What She Causes
Oh, I'm so glad that you went back and showed us what happened in the kitchen!!! I loved the rest of the story, but when Larissa saw them kissing and then just went back to the card room I practically died cause I wanted to see what happened!
Great writing and interesting idea. I really liked it!