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Reviewer: paradigm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 11:23 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Thank you for giving us Scrantonicity concert!

Reviewer: paradigm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 11:12 pm Title: On The Fifth Day of Christmas

Man, I hope these presents aren't from Toby.

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 10:25 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas

Thanks Moxie...that's just what I needed tonight.  Happy Jam.  Looking forward to the 9th day.  And any back story on the origins of the name Parma?

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 10:02 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas

Yum.  Understatement of the year.

Oh, jeez, where to start?

Scruffy!Jim.  Yes.  Definitely.  The beard burn is soooo worth it.
FNB hair & red blouse.
Karamel Sutra -- better than Pretzel Day

And I adored Pam's teasing Jim about the person sending the gifts “I got here first.”  Love me some Assertive!Beesly!!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 09:33 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas

Yay!  A new chapter & a date! Pam's restraint is quite something, I must say. ;)

Reviewer: Nestani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 04:26 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

I'm completely and utterly hooked on this story. Can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: Willow Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 04:17 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

I know I have said it a hundred times already, but I love this story.  Can't wait for 8!

Author's Response: Thank you, Willow - I'm so pleased you like it!!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 03:59 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

Okay, I read all seven installments in one sitting.  This is so ridiculous good.  And so hot.  I am having exactly the same anticipation as Jim with all the deliveries.  Yay for all the kissing.  I really CANNOT wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: Yay!!  A blue ribbon!  You have made my night, and I will definitely be working on getting Chapter 8 done tonight! :-)

Reviewer: Cally, London Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 03:51 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

I absolutely adore this story - Jim & Pam are so real and I love the gifts... so well thought out, so clever.  Your stories are amazing - thank you! 

Author's Response: Wow - thanks for all your compliments!  It makes staying up all hours of the night writing worthwhile!! :-)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 03:15 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

So sweet and funny and romantic and yet still mysterious, too!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 02:39 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay, I honestly didn't expect for Pam and Jim to be here at this point. I thought they could hold off until the 10th day, but hell, this is a million times better.

These two are just too adorable. Thanks!

cheers.

--Lex 

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 02:26 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

God I love this story!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 12:23 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

Ah, moxie - the best! The kissing and the stubble and the banter and just....sigh.  This was absolutely awesome.  Next installment....???

Reviewer: chicgeek Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 12:19 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

So cute! I am starting to really love Parma! Great job of introducing a new character!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 12:14 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

Delurking to say I absolutely LOVE this story. You've created quite the balance between angst and romance. I check far too many times a day looking for an update, but really, this is just wonderful!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 08:41 am Title: On The Fifth Day of Christmas

"the swift kick Jim needed to set things in motion" Go Mark! And go Karen! No, really, I mean it, just go. Go to NY with your fancy friends and let Jim and Pam get to it. Next chapter!


Author's Response: I'm sure Karen will do just fine with her NYC friends.  Jim prefers things a little simpler, and with more cleavage. ;-)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 08:34 am Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas

Follow Mark's advice! Kiss the hell out of her! Looks like Karen's becoming a nuisance. Those rebounds are great for a while...

Author's Response: I think Mark's wisdom just hasn't been showcased enough on this show.  There's a reason he's always had a girlfriend...

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 08:29 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas

French? Ben gay rubs? Do you stay awake at night thinking this stuff up? Great stuff. This line - “You need to just get her out on the court, man. A little one-on-one and your smack talk would sort the two of you right out.” Took me right back to "The Fight" when he picked her up in the dojo. They need a little physical contest that leads to more touching and then leads to bed. There, I said it. ;)


Author's Response:

They need a little physical contest that leads to more touching and then leads to bed. There, I said it.

Yes, you did.  And it needs to be said more often.  :-) 

Do I stay awake thinking this stuff up?  Yea, but it's really no trouble.  No trouble at all. 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 08:27 am Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

Scruffy!Jim!!!  YESSSS! 

And I noticed that Parma knows Pam's name -- hee!  (As if there was any doubt!)  Thank you soooo much for Day 7, it is a fitting follow-up to Day 6 and well worth the wait. 



Author's Response:

And I noticed that Parma knows Pam's name

You are very observant, grasshopper. ;-)  Now I wonder if Jim noticed that.... 

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 08:27 am Title: On The Second Day of Christmas

So, when will Karen be getting the heave-ho? Another chapter as sweet as - well - Dove chocolate! Yum...

Author's Response: Karen's not leaving - all three are going to end up joining a commune in Wilkes Barre....

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 08:25 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas

And he desperately hoped she was the one who sent the white box As do we all, Jim, as do we all. Angsty Jim listening to music and hoping she's doing the same. God, I love his girly side! Looking forward to day 2...

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 07:09 am Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

Aw!  YAY!  I loved this chapter so much.  First, this is the best Jim/Pam morning wake-up I've ever seen written.  So comfy. 

I like how Jim and Parma are like practically BFFs now!  And I loved the kiss and what she said here:   “I want this to be my second chance,” is just so perfect.  LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: Clare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 06:35 am Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

ooooooooh so sweet Moxie. I loved it! Was it her? Was it her??!! The stubble...yum.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 06:21 am Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

Excellent chapter. Loved this line: this one without a doubt the best kiss he could ever remember, because it tasted of promise, of happiness and of her.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 05:12 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas

I can see our patience is being gradually rewarded. Cuddled up, sleeping JAM...ah. Still fun and sweet - each chapter is like a new trinket. Thanks, Moxie!

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