Penname: overpaid Real name: Jessica
Member Since: June 08, 2007

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Paper Cut: The Office Murder Mystery by Ellelque Rated: MA [Reviews - 162] 47
Summary:

Someone is dead in The Office, and everyone is a suspect.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36808 Read Count: 27562 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2007 Updated: August 06, 2007
Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10
Date: August 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours

Great breakup and Jam moment.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10
Date: August 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Phone Calls

Well Little Miss Karen is sure looking suspicious.  I need to keep reading.  You have me hooked.

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Date: July 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam

That was great, but I can't believe that Jim is the only questionable suspect.  Can't wait for chapter 13.  I hope others start leaving reviews.  The story is great so far.

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Date: July 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen

Great job on all the minor characters!

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Date: July 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Interrogations - Ryan and Kelly

Great job with Kelly.  Here non-stop talking seems so true to the show.

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Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Interrogations - Andy and Dwight

I can't wait for the next chapter.  Andy sure seemed nervous in his interview.  I guess we'll have to see what Angela says in her interrogation before trusting Dwight was with her.  Please keep the chapters coming!

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Date: July 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Interrogations - Toby

Hmm.... Why would Toby say Jim didn't like Roy?  Just a possible cover for himself?  The suspense is killing me.

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Date: July 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Gathering the Suspects

I'm loving the story so far.  It's so suspenseful.  I don't want the story to end, but I want to know who did it.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10
Date: July 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Interrogations - Jim

Jim was pretty calm during all that.  I can't believe that the officers don't see this as a setup.  Can't wait for more to come (twss)!

15 Drunk Girly-Girl Reviewers + 1 Jim Halpert = Lifetime Ban From Chili's by Muggins Rated: K+ [Reviews - 14] 4
Summary:

Way back in April, I wrote this for fun. It's about my favorite reviewers from Girly-Girl. Everything everyone says is taken literally from their own reviews* (albeit taken completely out of context).  Oddly enough, Jim remains dressed throughout the story.

*Except poor LisaHoo... I just kept adding stuff to her comments because, well, she rocks! 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3125 Read Count: 3653 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2007 Updated: July 27, 2007
Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10
Date: August 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: 15 Drunk Girly-Girl Reviews + 1 Jim Halpert

That was hilarious.  Great idea to use your reviewers in a follow up.

Paper Cut II: Ryan's Folly by Ellelque, BaraJam, lebow Rated: MA [Reviews - 36] 14
Summary: Another death in the Office.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17485 Read Count: 8528 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2007 Updated: December 12, 2007
Reviewer: overpaid Signed 9
Date: November 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Closing In

Good thing the police showed up when they did.

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Date: November 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Trapped

Another twist.  This is getting interesting.

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Date: November 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Confrontation

I think Pam throwing of the robe is a great description of what Pam would do in this situation.  Wow.  I can't believe Toby's the bad guy.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 9
Date: September 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Film

A strange turn of events, but the suspense is building.  I was wondering why there was so much Jim and Pam, but I see how it fits into the last paragraph.  I love Jim's finally thought.  I hope he is okay.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 9
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Investigation

You know you can always count on me for a review.  I think the story is great so far.  I don't find it as suspenseful as the last mystery, but I'm sure that will come as the story continues.  In the last story I felt scared for the office employees, now I'm just waiting to hear more.

Author's Response: I don't know, I think I just lost it in this one.  I may have to have a murder attempt on someone or something. LOL

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10
Date: September 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Interrogation

Who would the inteded victim have been?  I can't wait to find out.  Great job with Creed's character.

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Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Detective

Interesting firing going on.  Now there seems to be so many suspects.  Can't wait for Chapter 4!

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 9
Date: August 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Paranoia

Keep up the great story.  I love how you make Dwight so full of useful information.

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Date: August 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

Great story so far.  Can't wait to see what happens and if Ryan was the only intended victim.