Penname: OldSchoolDool Real name: Laura
Member Since: July 30, 2006

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It's your heart, not mine, that's scarred by purplebelt Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 8
Summary: Ryan snaps at Jim in the break room.

Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Ryan
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 659 Read Count: 3415 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2007 Updated: February 11, 2007
Reviewer: OldSchoolDool Signed
Date: February 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: It's your heart, not mine, that's scarred

What a great idea for a story, one I could actually see happening on the show.  We know Ryan has no trouble speaking his mind, even to Jim.  I also loved that you picked up on the vibe in the break room scene in Ben Franklin, where it was clear that Ryan and Kelly are actually the functional couple, while Pam and Jim are spinning their wheels and playing games.

 Great idea!

Pole Position by ExtremelyGruntled Rated: T [Reviews - 15] 6
Summary: Thrown together during one of Michael's work functions, Pam finally lets Jim know how she feels. Post-The Negotiation and contains mild spoilers for upcoming episodes.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2976 Read Count: 6939 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
Reviewer: OldSchoolDool Signed
Date: April 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know what I love about this?  It's exactly how it would (should) unfold on the actual show.  'Cause as much as we want to follow them home and watch them make out, it probably not going to happen.  Since the viewers are supposed to be kind of "flies on the wall" of the office, it's realistic that we would be able to witness the conversation during the challenge, but then nothing again until Monday morning, when both are acting strangely and we think we know why, but then it turns out to be something different.  Awesome idea, especially since most fics tend to take the documentary conceit out of it.

 

I hope you're planning to continue! 

Six Feet Under by larrymcg Rated: T [Reviews - 198] 63
Summary:

This is an idea I've had for a long time. It is inspired by the very end of the Six Feet Under series finale (hence the title), and it seems that the 55 word style would be perfect for it. Each chapter will focus on a different Office character. 20 chapters are planned.

I do not own these characters, and would not do this to them if I did. No copyright infringement intended.


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1154 Read Count: 66464 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2007 Updated: November 15, 2007
Reviewer: OldSchoolDool Signed
Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

This is beautifully done!  Angela crying the hardest at Oscar's funeral really got to me.  For some reason, the dynamic in the Accounting corner fascinates me!  Question: What made you decide to change some of the dates of birth?  For most of them, I see you've stuck with the actor's birth year, but you made Toby, Dwight and Phyllis younger.  It just surprised me, because Toby and Dwight definitely seem more like they're 40 than 32, to me.  Just wondering!