A day at the zoo with the Halperts.
10 Aw, this is so cute. Fics like this make me happy. Great job, I could totally see this happening!
10 Oh, wow. This was so good. Usually their fights seem kind of forced in fic, but this was perfect. I love the ending. Great job.
"And there it was again. An inevitable daydream, of sorts, completely transfixed by her beauty, the words she was saying never processing through his brain."
Wow. I love this chapter so much, especially the comparisons between how Pam's life used to be with Roy, and how it is now with Jim. Great job! Keep writing! =) --n
Author's Response: thanks n ! :D
AMAZING job! Like I said, you have improved so much in the short time you've been doing this and I think this chapter says it best. You have really found a voice with your writing, and I'm totally proud. =)
Author's Response: dude, i have to thank you, youre the one who talked me into writing ! :) but thanks so much !
OMG. I don't even know what to say to that picture, lol. Thanks, I think? But this chapter was way cute! Like I told you already, I love happy!JimandPam. =)
Author's Response: yes, thanks be to google ! :D
9 This is great. A lot of cute little behind the scenes moments between them. I hope there's more soon!
10 This is so brilliantly done. The whole thing cracked me up, especially: Kelly the pop star! Creed on Cribs! And Michael's "weather report" was just so... Michael. Fantastic job!
Author's Response: Ha, thanks! I tried to make it as goofily plausible as I could. Thanks for the review!
10 Wow. This... is amazing. It's so beautifully written. I especially love this part:
"He feels detached and immersed at the same time, in the world but not of it. He thinks of boring days at work, spinning around in his chair until colors run, and then standing suddenly, feeling his feet, so firmly on the ground, and his head, light and wobbly."
Thanks for sharing it with us, great job!
Author's Response: Sweet, thanks a lot for your comment!
10 Oh, I love this. Seriously, that was the best twist ever. I thought Michael had given him advice too! I really like the "someday..." at the end; it's so great that these two characters finally have a definite future, together. Fantastic job, b.
Author's Response: thanks, n ! i totally thought "nicki's gonna be sooo happy i wrote a new story !" the whole time i was writing ;D tag, you're it ! WRITE MORE ! :P
You don't want to wake up one day and realize that both of you are unhappy because you weren't the person he thought you were. There's no way you can compete with Fantasy Pam.
10 This is lovely. Just a really beautiful and believable assessment of their relationship. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
10 Aw, I like it, b. I can't wait to see what the other four presents are... hopefully that will be soon, hint hint. --n