Summary: We were deprived of many of Jim and Pam's relationship firsts over the summer hiatus. Here's one: Their first time. Yeah, that first time.
Spoilers: Season 4, vaguely, and the Summer Vacation promo spot.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1259 Read Count: 4043 ePub Downloads: 0
Penname: AvilaGrace Real name: Grace
Member Since: October 16, 2007
Bio:
Bio:
I've been writing since I could chew.
I'm a university student at FSU, majoring in Family and Child Sciences with a minor in Child Development. :)
I love the color green and my iPod classic. So sue me.
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[Report This] Published: October 20, 2007 Updated: October 20, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed 
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Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: In the Light
8 Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: In the Light
I really like this story. I think a lot of times when people write about this topic they focus on the smut and not so much on the fact that it's all about their love and commitment to each other... I think you did a good job balancing the two, and it's more how I would have pictured this happening than any other story I've read. Good job!! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m glad you liked it, and glad the intimacy worked. I definitely didn\'t intend for this to be a smutfic; wanted to focus more on their feelings and emotional connection rather than the physical. Thanks for a great review :)
Summary: Michael accuses Dwight of borrowing one of his favorite DVD's two years ago... and not returning it. Unable to prove himself innocent, Dwight gets his hands on the rough footage from that day and makes everyone watch to find the real culprit. But when a terrible secret Jim has kept from Pam comes to light, can the two new lovers survive?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8689 Read Count: 14204 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8689 Read Count: 14204 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: January 24, 2008
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Cold Open and Act One
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Cold Open and Act One
Act two please.
Author's Response: lol... Ok, then! That\'s hilarious. You must be fantastic at dinner! lol... thanks!
Summary: What if Jim had broken up with Karen at Phyllis' wedding? What if he had decided to go after Pam when she left with Roy?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Michael, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4021 Read Count: 16025 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Michael, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4021 Read Count: 16025 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: October 27, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: October 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: The Cruel and Gentle Things
Date: October 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: The Cruel and Gentle Things
Haha, I really like the ending. Way to lighten the mood a bit!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!
Summary: Three conversations take place under starry skies. Four lives are forever changed.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8934 Read Count: 11657 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8934 Read Count: 11657 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2007 Updated: November 09, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: i've done what i could for you (and i do know what's good for me)
Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: i've done what i could for you (and i do know what's good for me)
I like this. Please update!!!
Summary: what you get when you mix happy, expectant JAM with drunk, pissed Roy.
Please review. That would be awesome blossom. with a little extra awesome.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7035 Read Count: 17455 ePub Downloads: 4
Please review. That would be awesome blossom. with a little extra awesome.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7035 Read Count: 17455 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2007 Updated: December 13, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
:( Can you please update this so I can be happy again? Haha. I like this story, it's good.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Hi! I really like the premise of the story, but I wouldn't mind if it were a bit longer. I get so excited to read it but then it seems to stop right when i get really into it. Still cant wait for the next chap though!
Author's Response: Thanks! I actually just changed chapter 4 and it has now doubled at least twice in length. So hope that helps :)\r\nI have a lot on my mind for chapter 5. It may end up being the longest one. I don\'t know yet. We\'ll see.
Summary: 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19942 Read Count: 55554 ePub Downloads: 16
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19942 Read Count: 55554 ePub Downloads: 16
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Catalyst
Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Catalyst
okay, now a new chapter would be nice.
Author's Response: Lol, probably not though. School owns me this week :(
Summary: Post-Finer Things, Pam reminds Jim what's really important.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 936 Read Count: 4686 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 936 Read Count: 4686 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: November 04, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I would like to see her answer, please.
Author's Response: Well, maybe I should write a corresponding part then? :)
Summary: Jim's had the sales call from hell, but the day's about to get better......
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Precious Metals
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5969 Read Count: 19597 ePub Downloads: 6
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Precious Metals
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5969 Read Count: 19597 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2007 Updated: November 17, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Presentation
Date: November 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Presentation
Aww cute, I like this.
Author's Response: thank you, AvilaGrace - I hope the rest of the series entertains as well!! :-)
Summary: Rating will chnge in later chapters.
A what if sort of thing that has been floating around in my head for a while. What if Pam and Jim had a family and she had left them unexpectadly to return three years later with a baby? Will Pam and Jim find their way back to each other?
Spoilers through 'Branch Wars' I guess.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14990 Read Count: 10758 ePub Downloads: 2
A what if sort of thing that has been floating around in my head for a while. What if Pam and Jim had a family and she had left them unexpectadly to return three years later with a baby? Will Pam and Jim find their way back to each other?
Spoilers through 'Branch Wars' I guess.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14990 Read Count: 10758 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Mothers and Daughters
Date: November 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Mothers and Daughters
I think the best part of this chapter was finding out that Michael's baby's name is Ryan! Lol.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Thoughts on forgiveness
Date: November 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Thoughts on forgiveness
The kids album is adorable... Hehe. And I love this story, so update soon.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: December 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The decision
Date: December 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The decision
AWWW! screw finals! i want this story!
Author's Response: haha believe me I would much rather be working on this story than on King Henry the IV, but I have to pass stupid college lol.
Summary: A take on what might happen if Pam and Jim go to an art festival together...
...then a follow-up on all the ramifications of their attendance.
Set late season two.
Categories: Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16379 Read Count: 18215 ePub Downloads: 1
...then a follow-up on all the ramifications of their attendance.
Set late season two.
Categories: Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16379 Read Count: 18215 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2007 Updated: January 30, 2008
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Now faith is replaced with a logic so cold
Date: November 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Now faith is replaced with a logic so cold
mm i like it. i can't wait to see where it's going. it reminds me a lot of Boys and Girls because basically the same thing happened. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, it started off in my head along the lines of Boys and Girls...but don\'t worry, it\'s going to be quite different...\r\n\r\nThanks for commenting!
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed 10
Date: November 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: We're moving forward
10 Date: November 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: We're moving forward
I love this story (and this chapter!) My only question is why they're doing a lunch date at noon if the fair is from 10-4? That seems like an odd thing for Jim to suggest, since she wants to go to the fair so badly... Probably should have suggested breakfast? haha. Anyway, great chapter. Great story! Poy/Ram was really realistic. I hate Roy. Blah.
Author's Response: Mmm. Good point...I guess my line of thinking was that even Pam wouldn\'t want to walk around a fairly small art fair for 6 hours. Plus it\'s two days long...perhaps she was thinking she\'d go twice...? (Oh but now I\'ve said too much!) \r\nI\'m so glad you\'ve enjoyed it so far!\r\nPS - I can\'t stand Roy either.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: December 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: But holding ourselves back
Date: December 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: But holding ourselves back
Not a fun place to end, my friend.... Cute Chapter, loved it. I don't even have any constructive criticism, and that's like my forte, so.... Good luck on finals. Write another chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, I figured a little cliffhanger might be kinda fun. :) Thanks for the well-wishes...hopefully I get sick of studying and turn to fanfic as my solace...chances are pretty high... Thanks for your review, I\'m really glad you\'re enjoying it so far!
Summary: What happens when Jim, Pam and Roy discover www.jamfancentral.com?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32621 Read Count: 77836 ePub Downloads: 21
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32621 Read Count: 77836 ePub Downloads: 21
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2008
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: January 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: A Struggle Neither Wins
Author's Response:
Date: January 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: A Struggle Neither Wins
Hmm... sorry I'm just now reviewing--you've been amazing about writing chapters and my life has been so hectic I've sucked about reviewing them. So, let's see.
I'm not sure if I liked this chapter or not. I don't really know how Roy was "spying" on Pam... I understand why he would read/post on the message boards, but I don't see it as spying at all. And honestly, I don't think their messages did a great job describing why everyone loves Jim and seemingly hates Roy (I don't; I just think he was wrong for her)... There weren't many concrete examples, if that makes sense. I mean, why would Roy believe all of those things if there isn't a specific time mentioned (other than the one in SandyDee's, I didn't see any). Just a thought.
I think the final two lines were pretty in character. I've had a hard time judging whether or not I think your story is recently, so that was good.
Also, and this is just a nitpick but it's my pet peeve, you said, "Trojan 15, whoever that was, seemed to be one of his biggest supporters and they were right." < In that sentence, it should be he or she was right. They is plural (regardless if you know the gender of the subject or not) and should never be used singularly.
Overall, not my favorite chapter, but I'm anxious to see where you go with it!
Author's Response:
Hey AGrace-- Thanks so much for your review! I appreciate your feedback and rely on reviews like this to help me keep on track. I think what I was going for here (and maybe wasn't successful at) was how black and white and simple Roy sees things. He "spys" on Pam by checking the site to make sure there hasn't been any "funny business" with Jim. He's not really looking for anything concrete...just to check up on Pam. That seems like the border-line jealous, posessive boyfriend thing Roy would try to do.
Thanks, also, for the grammar reminder, but my intent was to try to sound like i was in Roy's head. I need to work on that more.
Thanks again, and I appreciate you interacting over on the blog!
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: January 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Patrick Beesly's Inbox
Author's Response: So glad you liked this chapter! I'm excited to work through the Booze Cruise from a different persepective. Thanks so much for the review.
Date: January 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Patrick Beesly's Inbox
Booze cruise, yay!
I think there are some things about Pam's defense that actually incriminate her feelings for Jim, and I like that. I love the turn you've taken here--I'll be honest, I was a little weary the last few chapters, but this one was awesome.
Author's Response: So glad you liked this chapter! I'm excited to work through the Booze Cruise from a different persepective. Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: January 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: The Color Of The Sky
Date: January 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: The Color Of The Sky
I love libby.... this is weird... haha.
Author's Response: I like her too. I'm having conflicting feelings about what I need to do in this story. Thanks again for your review.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed 9
Date: December 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Marissa Updates Her Blog
9 Date: December 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Marissa Updates Her Blog
You crack me up with this whole intricate thing. I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed 8
Date: December 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Put Aside What Was True or Untrue
Author's Response: Pam's got her reasons! Thanks again for your review!
8 Date: December 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Put Aside What Was True or Untrue
Hah! I just went there and my first thought was, "Who's the idiot that picked Roy!?" Oh man, I love this story.
Author's Response: Pam's got her reasons! Thanks again for your review!
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed 10
Date: November 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Far Too Simple Beauty of the Promises We Made
10 Date: November 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Far Too Simple Beauty of the Promises We Made
I love this story... I hate Roy, but you almost make me like him. almost...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad I can help you maybe almost see something good in the guy.
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: November 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much. You know, I feel good having started a story I'm excited about too. I hope you enjoy this one.
Date: November 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I always love your stories!! And I'm so glad you started a new one. this one is so orignial and amazing so far.
I literally LOL'd at the "coloring classes"
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much. You know, I feel good having started a story I'm excited about too. I hope you enjoy this one.
Summary: My version of what Jim and Pam may have been talking and thinking about away from the cameras during the first few episodes of Season 4. An effort to fill in the blanks
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10926 Read Count: 29137 ePub Downloads: 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10926 Read Count: 29137 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2007 Updated: March 31, 2008
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed 8
Date: November 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out where things went a bit off. I've tried to edit that section. I really appreciate the feedback!
8 Date: November 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Haha! love the ending. And I totally never realized the Pamela Anderson thing until Pam said it in Fun Run!
It was a bit confusing, toward the end though, when you said Jim had "taken one step back." It makes it seem like he's moving away from her, not toward her. Might want to change your diction for that. :)
Good story! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out where things went a bit off. I've tried to edit that section. I really appreciate the feedback!
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: December 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
Date: December 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
Aww cute!!!!! I love this story
Author's Response:
I was going for cute, hoping to cut things off just this side of precious. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Summary: A story of loss, love, and inspiration.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31217 Read Count: 64717 ePub Downloads: 8
A story of loss, love, and inspiration.Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31217 Read Count: 64717 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2007 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed
Date: December 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Mrs. Halpert, in the Art Room, with a Secret
Author's Response:
Date: December 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Mrs. Halpert, in the Art Room, with a Secret
Oh man.. the last part made me want to cry. my heart got a bit heavy there... I feel that way about writing when anybody reads my stuff. I can't imagine the emptiness I would feel if it didn't excite me when someone said "hey, this is really good." if you truly love something, that stuff does excite you, and I think it's more that Pam is trying hard NOT to care about design and art more than she really doesn't love it anymore. If she didn't love it anymore, I doubt she'd be so reluctant to show it off.
And two kelly/ies.... wow, you are a brave soul.
Great chapter! (hope this review excites you!)
Author's Response:
It does, it does! And now, AvilaGrace, I'm going to admit to you and everyone else in the circle that I didn't even realize the two Kelly(ies) deal until I read this review!!! Oh my God! But you may have just given me an idea....
Anywho, you totally nailed where Pam's head is right now. Her confidence has been shaken and she doesn't want to love something that's betraying her and eluding her. Our girl's really struggling with this whole thing and she's in a bit of denial. But it's only chapter 4, so who knows what might happen! Thank you so much for the review.