MEMBER'S CHOICE TOP NOMINEE - Jim and Pam must interact in network sponsored live chats to promote their documentary. Angst (and maybe some smut) ensue.
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10 I've lurked for a while, but I had to register just to tell you how much I like this story. It's really compelling. Can't wait for the next chapter!
10 Great new chapter! I got pretty scared Pam would slip up and confuse her windows (probably because I'm always worried about doing that), but I guess their secrets are still safe for a little while.
10 Waking up to find a new chapter was awesome! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Glad I could make your morning. Thanks for the review!
10 Dear lord the angst! This has GOT to be cleared up! Although I wouldn't be opposed to Jim and Pam running away to Chicago and living happily ever after since it's my favorite city on Earth. Could Jim ever be a Cubs fan?
8 Very cute. I'd love to see you write something longer.
Author's Response: Yeah, I got that a lot on fanfic.net... this is actually the shortest one I have written currently. I have this fear that if I start a long story, I\'ll never finish it =P\r\nThank you very much for the review!
10 This was incredible. You have fantastic insight into the characters. All of them were just the right length, too.
10 Adorable! Michael is spot on.
Yet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)10 Thank goodness you didn't finish this last week when I was PMSing or I'd be a blubbering mess at my desk right now. Wonderful work.
Author's Response: Oh man...well it's a good thing I didn't wait to write this until next week -- it would have been even MORE angsty...lolol. I hadn't thought of that! Thanks so much for the feedback Andys_Gal!
10 This is incredible. I was rooting for Pam to get back with Roy for a little while there during season 3, so I enjoy reading a sympathetic Roy POV. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You know, if there weren't a Jim in Pam's life, I would have liked to have seen how Fancy New Roy and Pam could have made things work.
10 This story continues to be great. In addition to the plot, I love the way you structure the chapters. Opening with the explanation of the “dead zone” and wrapping up with the destruction of it? You’re a pro.
Author's Response: Wow.. Thanks so much for your review and your kind comments.
10 Aw, good for Bob Vance and Phyllis.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to make them happy because they're awesome!
10 Gah! Want. More.
Great job so far.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Andys_Gal! I thought I would post a chapter a day...yeah, right. I had to just get this out...so it was like, what...three days? Well, it was all done from the start, so it was just a matter of refining and posting. Anyway, I hope you stayed with this story and thanks again!
10 I've really enjoyed reading this. You do a great job establishing the characters with just a little snippet.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Andys_Gal! I really appreciate the review and I am glad you have enjoyed reading it. I kind of liked the idea of just giving a little insight through another person\'s eyes, someone you probably wouldn\'t expect :)
MEMBER'S CHOICE - Katy and Jim are still dating during Jim’s “Email Surveillance” BBQ. When Pam sees them together it lights a fire under her.10 Can't wait for the next installment!