Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.
8 I really enjoyed this chapter- more Jim and Franny(aka Frank) it was sooooo adorable- and very Jim. I like that he is relating to both of them not just Pam, and it seems like you are heading toward having him admit his love for Franny first. At least that's my hope! I'm really curious to see what happens next and if he will give himself permission to move on.
8 This was a really good, cathartic chapter. It was time for them to be more open with each other and you pulled it off beautifully without resolving everything. I can definitely see them finding their way into a stronger, real relationship.
Can't wait for the next update!!
8 I really, really loved this chapter! It's probably my favorite so far. You did a really nice job of capturing them getting back to each other and realizing the depth of feeling that is there. I can't wait for the next update this is wonderful.
Question: will we get more background on Megan? From an earlier chapter I got the impression Jim's grief was based as much on guilt as it was love-- perhaps a little more even?? Just wondering and would like to see that fleshed out.
Author's Response: You are absolutely right. We will get to Jim\'s guilt while we also get to some of Pam\'s issues that Roy created. I\'m not sure how far off that is though, maybe in two or three chapters.
7 Very cute and it sounded like Pam, but I guess I don't understand while she would be nervous telling her mom, or even why she would wait so long. I thought it was established that she was really close to her mom... I did like that Jim fainted when she told him- that was great!
Please update soon.
9 Really great start-- I can't wait to read the rest. It really sounded like both of them and the fact that they just didn't come out and clear everything up was a good way to do it.
Please update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you dreamscribe. I really wanted to make sure they were both a tad vague, awkward and unsure about it all. I'm glad that came across.
I won't drag this out long - I promise.
Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.9 Aww... really sweet, nice ending to a great story! Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response: You\'re so welcome! It was fun! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
9 Wow-- definitely "steamy"! Can't wait for more. Closure for the epilogue-- happy ending???
I've really enjoyed this story.
Author's Response: Hope you enjoyed the happy ending! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, dreamscribe!
8 Excellent chapter- Pam's continuing confusion on the question of Jim's feelings is spot-on. The fact that she isn't confused about Roy or the fact that she stopped the wedding gives me hope that we will get JAM in the next chapter??? (hint-hint beg-beg)
Update soon Please!
Author's Response: Oh, I\'m sure I\'ve got a little tasty Jam-sicle up my sleeve ;-) Pretty soon. Patience, grasshopper! Thanks so much for your review!
The Dunder Mifflin Company is vacationing on a Caribbean cruise. Jim and Pam are hoping for a romantic vacation but will Michael's outrageousness and some jealousy get in their way?
Takes place in Season 4 and is mostly focused on Jim/Pam.
7 This is really a great story- sorry I haven't really reviewed before now. This was a great chapter, I loved the parasailing and sharing ice cream. Keep it up!-- (that's what she said)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you've been reading and that you reviewed. I'm also glad that all of the fun I'm having writing this is showing. (: Reviews like yours are the best and they mean so much to an author! Keep 'em comin'!
8 Really excellent, I thought it really stayed in character for both of them. I loved it. Smut and heart both.
Author's Response: Thanks dreamscribe70! Smut and heart is the best combo, right? I so appreciate your review!
7 Very interesting, I loved the imagry with the colors in the first section. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you - I\'m actually most pleased with that section. It just flowed easier me thinks ;)
8 Yes, more-- this is fascinating Jim insight I want to know about the other 4 and more fluffy/smut with Pam... Please??
Author's Response: Who doesn\'t like fluffy Jim/Pam smut? Hopefully I\'ll be able to get you some more soon... Thanks for reviewing!
7 Please, please, please I need a new chapter- this cliffhanger is killing me-- you said fluff so that means this is going to be happy... right? Right?!
I love it, I want more!!!
Author's Response: Now THAT is the kind of review I\'m talking about! Thank you! I\'m glad you love it!
Mad skills indeed!! you are a tease;-)
More please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll write more, if I get more reviews... ;)
7 That was a nice chapter. I think I might have liked more detail on what they discussed to get a feel for where they were both coming from- but I liked this anyway, moving on to date#2- let the fluffy reign.
Author's Response: Okay, I thought about adding details to that paragraph, but in the end, I like how open it was. I think I\'m going to tweak a few things in this chapter anyway, so if I get some sudden burst of inspiration, I will add details about their conversation. Stay tuned!
8 Soooo cute that she smacked him on the side of his face with the cabinet door!!! loved it.
Please post soon, I want to see how Date #2 ends!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I love reading these!!!
Really cute and loved that they can 'play' together without getting bogged down in drama.
I am a huge fluff junkie so bring it on! I'd like to see them have a date where no one is injured ;-)
Please update soon.
Definitely still with you and excited to read your finale!!!
8 Great chapter, I read Jamgela's review and totally agree with her. More would be great. I will also do my best to continue to review, cuz I don't want you to stop with this either!
8 Awwwwwww... so sweet, so cheesy!!!! I love it! Great chapter, bring on more.
A little spin on "Dinner Party." What if Jim and Pam got stuck bringing Michael back home with them at the end of the night?
9 Sooooo cute! I loved this, it was so Pam and Jim. When left with no alternative their mutual protective instincts took over knowing full well the night would never end. Perfect, babe.
9 Sooooo cute! I loved this, it was so Pam and Jim. When left with no alternative their mutual protective instincts took over knowing full well the night would never end. Perfect, babe.
Passion, possession, and paint in the wee morning hours.
9 Wow! wonderful imagry in this. I can totally see Jim and Pam in it.
Author's Response: Excellent! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, dreamscribe70! So glad you enjoyed it!
Very cute chapter, Jackson is totally adorable, exactly as I imagine any child of Jim and Pam... please update soon- I still want to know more about this internship that Jim is struggling so much with!!!