Jim and Pam are Jim and Pam, only...not really.That was really hot!
I'm loving every second of this!
Author's Response: thank you!
Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.Enough seperation already. It's like torture.
The Dunder Mifflin Company is vacationing on a Caribbean cruise. Jim and Pam are hoping for a romantic vacation but will Michael's outrageousness and some jealousy get in their way?
Takes place in Season 4 and is mostly focused on Jim/Pam.
Why do these chapters keep ending? Are you trying to kill me?
Author's Response:
Wow, you are just too cool, man. Thank you so much! I'll make the next one longer just for you ; ) haha!
Thank you so much again! You're reviews mean so much!
I'm interested. I think you should get over that writer's block real soon.
Author's Response:
I think I should too! I'm writing this so I can hopefully cured of it soon! I'm trying!
I'm also glad to hear that you're interested in this! Thanks for the review! : )
While I believe the Veggie is the best Quiznos sandwich I really love this story. I think it's a great concept and I wish your chapters wouldn't end. Please give me something to read soon.
Author's Response: I've never had the veggie! To tell the truth I've never even had the one Pam loves in the story. I just went on quiznos.com and looked at the sandwiched. I saw that name and to me it seems like something she would like. Haha! Anyway, thank you so much for your review! It made me smile and I'm glad to hear that you are finding it so enjoyable! I'll hopefully have the next chapter soon. Thank you so much again!
I think this chapter was written really well even though I'm not sure what to think of Pam at the moment. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this next.
Author's Response: Well thank you so much! And hopefully you'll warm back up to her soon! Thanks for sticking with me and giving me so many helpful suggestions! You're the best!
That was great. Totally made Pam seem less childish in my opinion. Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! You need a Dundie for how fantastic you are, man. You're the best!
What I really loved about this chapter is that he's really long but it never felt long. There was no plain filler or anything that dragged on longer than it should. I had a lot of fun talking to you while you were writing it especially seeing you hit double your usual goal. I'm also a giant sucker for fluff so all smiles here. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You really are my best supporter on here and it's so great! (: Thanks so much for your review; I'm glad you ended up enjoying it! I'll be sure to write the next chapter and talk to you and the same time again; it kept me awake AND it was fun. (:
I didn't want it to end. It was just really that good.
Why was there stopping?!?!?!??!?!?!? There should never be stopping!!!!!!!!!....at least not at that point. I know they're not ready to have sex but really...two teenagers....it wouldn't have ended there.
I really can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Sorry :0) We will get to that \"good stuff\" at some point, glad you enjoyed.
My absolute favorite chapter yet! I can't wait till she comes home.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks a bunch, you always give nice reviews, glad you liked it. It was a nail biter at first, but I enjoyed it.
Wow.
Author's Response: This is my favorite kind of response.
I'm sad we had to miss so much of Pam's pregnancy and their daughter's birth. There is so much there but I really love Jim noticing his actions and that they're all okay. I'm glad they could move on.
Author's Response:
Sorry for skipping over everything dear. I've never been good at writing pregnancy anything that didn't sound really cliche and dumb. And I also kind of felt like it would hurt the tone of the overall piece so I decided to leave it out.
But I really appreciate your reviews, they mean a lot :o)
Really beautiful.
I think I'm really liking where this is going. I love the old video of them with William. It's sweet and still incredibly heart breaking.
Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you, that was what I was going for! Thank you for taking the time to review as well ISayOye.
I don't think I have words....just more. Lots more please.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks ISayOye! Glad you liked it!
It only took me 3 days to finish it (stupid work) but here's a little Post-Dinner Party action. Fluffy and short, just the way I like it.
Obvious spoilers abound. :)
Why are you ending this? It's too cute to just be over.
..and I agree about summer breaks. They suck.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you ISay. I think there's probably more fluff in my future because there can never be enough so hopefully the next one will measure up okay. :) Thanks again for taking the time to review.
Oh thank goodness. I was getting depressed thinking that something this hot and extremely cute was going to be a oneshot. I really can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad to save you from depression ;-) And thanks for your review!
I heart fluff too. This was a great story to wake up to. Thank you.
I love this chapter in so many ways. Put it in to human form and I will have it's babies!
I think I started yelling at Elly when I finally got to the end of this chapter. How can you end a chapter this good with an ending like that? There's something very cruel about making me have to use my imagination. I've been loving the story so far but I don't know how much torture I can handle. Please write more soon.
Author's Response: Funny you should say that... Elly yelled at me!\r\n\r\nHang in there I promise there is more to come
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