10

Aw, the was the cutest, sweetest thing ever.

I love the idea of writing a letter to yourself to open later in life. I've done that, but I don't get to open it yet! :]

The last sentence had me 'Awww'ing. Great job!

10

I loved this! It was perfect! The last line just had me grinning to no end. Great job!

"I’m not sorry Roy’s here in the hospital......actually I’m pretty pissed he fell down because I really wanted to hit him…and it just seemed wrong to do it once he was already lying there…”

PERFECT!

10

Oh, my. My heart just felt for Angela. I have to say, Angela is certainly the most misunderstood character on the show.

I loved it. I love the song 'Samson', which is what drew me into the story. I listened to it while reading.

The first two sentences were my favourite.

'Angela has this friend.



Her name is Noelle and they’ve been close for a long time now.'

Absolutely marvelous.

10

I just wanted you to know that I made an account just to review this. I could not tear my eyes from the screen. This has got to be the best fanfiction I've ever read. I loved the humor when Jim was thinking about Roy and when he was talking with Frank. The entire story was amazing. My favorite parts were when Pam was yelling up the stairs to Frankie about the Christmas tree, when Jim was writing Pam his Thanksgiving note (so cute), and the very end of it, when Frank was giving Jim permission to marry Pam.

'Years from now when I looked back on this day, I knew I'd remember it as one of the most emotionally taxing of my life. I'd gotten permission to marry the girl I loved from a man who would die only eight hours later.' That was the best sentence in the entire story.



This story touched me in so many ways. I felt the pain and hysteria in Pam's voice every time you wrote her. It was truly terrific. I loved how some sentences were simple, and some were more descriptive. Just the right amount of imagery and descriptiveness. It was fantastic.

I'm so favoring this. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.