Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.I haven't reviewed before but since this story is winding down, I just have to tell you what a great story it is. You do the characters really well and I've really enjoyed this and all your other stories!!
NOOOOOO!!!
If I were Pam, that is what I'd be thinking. Awesome job. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: I think Pam\'s pretty justified, myself. One can only take so much Jaren! Thanks for reviewing!
Alright, I'm intrigued. I like the use of flashbacks. :)
Author's Response: Flash forwards. Thank you very much. I\'m glad you liked it.
Where is Jim? Is he dead? Killed by the weird neighbor and his wife?
Good work. :)
Author's Response: Giant question mark about Jim and I ain\'t telling! :P The neighbor and his wife....interesting...
Ok, so following it so far... but the last flashforward was confusing... hm... who are these people? not the paramedics, right? hm...
its the neighbors! the man and his wife! i swear. don't lie. :)
Author's Response: I just realized today how confusing it\'s probably going to get. I\'m going to have to have \'previouslies\' at the beginning of every chapter. Paramedics? I don\'t think so. I don\'t think a paramedic would be dragging her to the bathroom or that her partner would be a rapist...hopefully. I\'m not saying anything else though. You\'ll have to stock me down on AIM or keep reading. :D
Author's Response: I just realized today how confusing it\'s probably going to get. I\'m going to have to have \'previouslies\' at the beginning of every chapter. Paramedics? I don\'t think so. I don\'t think a paramedic would be dragging her to the bathroom or that her partner would be a rapist...hopefully. I\'m not saying anything else though. You\'ll have to stock me down on AIM or keep reading. :D
Is there life and love after Jam?This story breaks my heart... but in a good way, I guess. Its really good but still sad.
I hate thinking that Jim and Pam would break up.
Author's Response: Yes, I definitely hate thinking that they would break up katiedid531. But I just can\'t keep my mind from wandering in that direction. I\'m glad the heartbreak is at least a good heartbreak. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
that was so sweet and moving. i loved it!
Author's Response: I love that you loved it! Thank you so much!
this is so weird... but i live in grand rapids and its strange to have jim live there too. :)
can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Oh, GR is my former hometown...well, Allendale - I\'m a GVSU alum. I adore it! :) Thanks for checking this out; hope you enjoy!
Set between S2 and S3 - fallout from Casino Night.That was beautiful! Great job for your first story! I really enjoyed it for all its angst, especially the last part. Keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed the angst, I'm a sucker for it myself. :)
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