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Haa! This is so hilarious!! You totally got Kelly's voice down.

This line made me laugh the most:
I would set her up with Oscar, but he is too busy being awesome and gay.

10

I love this. The last line is perfect!

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you!

10

EEEE, I love this! so angsty but sweet! It's good as a standalone, but I'm very glad to see the "tbc" at the bottom!!

Author's Response: Yaay! Thanks for reading, dear!

10

This was so beautiful. It made me cry more than once. I love the ending, and this also was one of my favorite parts:

(He would tell her, if the words would come, that he liked feeling her body against his in that moment. Because the inward curve of her hips matched his own contours perfectly. And he had always liked the idea of people being jigsaw puzzle pieces. He liked being put together. He liked the idea of filling in someone’s missing parts and them filling in yours. He liked feeling filled in for once.)

Beautiful work!

10

Aww, angsty with a sweet ending. Thanks for writing this.

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I really loved this. My favorite part was the slow build of sweet tension in the hotel. The touching and the hugging and the kissing *swoon*

10

Heee! So cute and sweet! Daddy!Jim is totally hot.

And this made me laugh out loud:
“She’s the one who called you Equestraphobic.”
“Excuse me?”
“Donkey hater,”

10

I love this chapter. The tension between Jim and Pam is so palpable. And I loved Michael's reaction to them: 
Michael tries to form some sort of appropriate comment, offering only: “Heeehhhhhhhaaaahr…”

Hehe, I can totally picture that, as Michael sometimes totally spazzes when he wants to say something but doesn't quite know what. Like in "The Merger" when Karen says to Michael, "What are you, a robot or a Martian?" and Michael just goes, "M-, Aaaah....."

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Loved this story. The ending was really sweet. I like how they came to an understanding at the end without using so many words.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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I liked this. Your prose was really beautiful. But for a little bit of constructive criticism, I thought Jim and Pam were a little too wordy to be really in-character. And I think the capitalizing the words during their fight was a little bit much, and kind of bothered me on the formatting side, enought to kind of take me out of the story.
But otherwise, this was really good.

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Wow, so beautifu. I loved how you say so much in so few words, and how the two of these were tied together wih a happy ending!
This line made me tear up: Such a beautiful boy. Capable of love with rare depth. She wonders how anyone could turn down that gift.

Author's Response: Thank you Puffing Noise. That boy just makes me tear up...had to end it happily - after all, it was T-giving and I'm not nearly as tough as the writers on the show!

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Hee! What an awesome idea for a crossover! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks, PuffingNoise!  :)