MEMBER'S CHOICE - It's Michael's Birthday. Pam remembers. It's a whole lot different than it was just a year ago.I'm a newbie here and I'm reading back into the older stories. I really enjoyed this, you captured Pam's insecurity really well.
It's fun to read this and know it all turned out okay, too. *grin*
Author's Response:
[b]jazzfan[/b] I am the most awful person ever. I can't believe I never replied to this review. I'm so glad you liked it.
This story still makes me tear up when I read it. I'm a bit of a sap. :)
Post finale Jim/Pam. That's all I can say without spoiling people. I'm very late to the party, but I had to add my comments. This was wonderful, and I can really see this as the way it happened more than all those fancy dinners and steamy bedroom scenes. It's so in character for both of them. Awesome.
It's Valentine's Day 2008....Awwww, this is awesome. Made me grin.
The story of Jim as a father and the legacy he leaves behind.
Wow, I loved this story. Very well done.
The road to perfection isn't paved in gold.I'm so glad the mods featured this again, because as a somewhat new reader here, I might never have found it. This was a wonderfully done story, and an interesting changeup from the cliched "first date went great" mantra.
Very believeable, and the characterizations were excellent. Brava.
Tandem Writing. A die-hard Jammer and a not-so-Jammer write alternating paragraphs to write a coherent story... Bwahahahahahahaha!
It's about damn time -- not only for Pam & Jim to go on a date, but for me to get in on this whole fanfic writing thing. I hear it's the next big thing. *snort* Pam's momma didn't raise no dumb girl. Very cute.
Very cute. And believeable.
Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.I just read this whole thing. Wow.
And now I want to slap Pam silly.
Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.
I was really excited to see another of your Cold Opens pop up, and I was not disappointed.
*claps loudly*
Author's Response: lol... thanks so much!
Bwahhahaha. You are a genius. Thanks for improving my Monday morning about 3,000%. I snorted tea when I read this:
DWIGHT
No! No... I can....
(beat, then sigh)
Alright.
(low, peeking at Jim)
I have a small package.
Author's Response: Lol.. Thanks, Jazzy! Glad I could make ya snort!
How dare you have a life? I'm so glad to see you have one of these up again. *cue Michael* Nobody writes Michael quite as well as you do, and Jim's talking head was hilarious as well.
Viaggravation, maybe? *giggles* Okay, maybe not. Awesome CO.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks Jazzy! Viaggravation is not bad, I may use that for another C/O!
OMG, you've done it again - I always smile when I see another one of these pop up. I especially loved Pam's encouragement of Meredith. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jazzy!
You hit such a perfect nuanced feel of these characters in your stuff - I can absolutely hear them saying the dialogue. Awesome. (I laughed out loud at Pam cheering for the Phillies.)
Author's Response: Thanks, Jazzy!
(Is it wrong that when I connected that the episode in two weeks is called Murder, that I hoped you wrote it?) I can't blame Pam a bit for her reactions - surely she could use the insanity plea. Well done again.
Author's Response: Wait, what? Are you serious? I had no idea an episode called Murder was coming up! Oh, that's strange. And I wish you were right that I wrote it, Jazzy! Boy, I wish you were right! Thanks!
Good stuff. The little monologue from Michael about Star Trek - gold.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jazzy!
Aw, you're got a sweet side, kgreene. I like it - nicely done, as always.
Author's Response: Awwww... shucks. Thanks Jazzy!
Woot! Loved it. I was so happy to see a Cold Open update - made my morning. Seeing Dwight deal with the Jam pregnancy is going to be all kinds of funny. And of course Dwight would suggest a hummmer (or a tank). Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks Jazzy!
They really should be paying you to write for this show. You know this type of scene is going to happen, and I can't see them getting it any more right this what you've given us.
JIM
(nervously)
Don't call him... um... Surely
And
Unca Dwight
had me howling, but really the whole this is utterly believable. Glad you're back and onto this one.
Author's Response: Thanks! I would love to see a scene like this. And I\'m glad you found it true to form. Thanks again!
Woot! I'm so glad you're back, and this is hilarious! I can just see the look on Pam's face at the end. I sure hope the actual show explores this dynamic.
Author's Response: Thanks Jazzy! It\'s good to be back. I think they will have a great deal of fun with the Jim/Pam/Dwight troika (love that word). I know I have a few more ideas in that vein.... Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks Jazzy! It\'s good to be back. I think they will have a great deal of fun with the Jim/Pam/Dwight troika (love that word). I know I have a few more ideas in that vein.... Thanks so much!
9 Very cute, as usual. Thinking it's going to be a "no cookie" night for Pam though... I'm beginning to worry about you if you're having dreams of Jim in makeup, kgreene. Everything okay? *grin*
Author's Response: LOL... That's good, Jazzy. Actually, I had to make that part up later, my dream didn't have a real ending. Wise guy... lol...
You're not rusty at all, I was really excited to see you were "back". I can see Michael in every. single. scene. How do you do that?
And this was inspired:
CREED
Insulin? Insanity Clause? Intubation tube?
Everyone stares at Creed.
CREED
I used all those the other day.
Author's Response: Thanks, jazzy! I'm glad you liked! I don't know, I just felt like it wasn't flowing well... I'm happy you didn't think so.
I. am. dying. here. I swear, you write Michael and Dwight better than anybody. I could just see the expressions on their faces. Still giggling...yeah, I'm 14. Maybe 15.
Author's Response: lol.. thanks so much, Jazzy! That is a great compliment! Well, if you're 15 then I'm 12... lol..
*dies laughing*
Too bad Michael doesn't watch Judge Judy.
Author's Response: lol..That Michael is something, isn't he?
These are really good, very well written and I'd like to see the shows that came after.
Author's Response: Thank you! Boy, I'd like to see these shows too...