Penname: dunder mifflin this is pam Real name: steve
Member Since: August 11, 2008

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Philly Jam by Dundie All-Star Rated: T [Reviews - 118] 49
Summary: An AU set in Philadelphia in which Pam moves into Jim's apartment building. General spoilers up through the end of season 4 are subject to appear.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36219 Read Count: 51297 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: October 02, 2008
Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: August 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day

I'm so glad I found this fic!!!!

I think my favorite thing about is the concept of 'lucky jim.' Because when you think about it, Jim is such a nice, laid back, funny guy, that it seems like everytime he talks to someone it puts them in a good mood, which makes it seemingly believable that he could contribute to their productivity.

The other thing that makes this click for me is the dialougue. I find a lot of good fics on this sight that are ruined by dialogue that I have a hard time believing, or I find out of character. I love how you reference past episodes, like in the poker game, to make it feel very beleivable!!!!

AWESOME WORK!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!! I never thought about that \"lucky Jim\" parallel, but it\'s totally true!! You are wonderful for pointing that out! And I also really strive to keep the dialogue in character, and use the references to the show to my advantage, so I\'m really glad it\'s paying off. So glad you\'re enjoying it, and thanks again for the review!!

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: August 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Next Time

Another Awesome Chapter!!!! I Absolutely love the way you did the whole sixers game!!!!! Another awesome chapter for dialogue, and I think you hit Roy's reaction absolutely perfect, espeacially with the warehouse guys!!

I can't wait to see Roy confront Jim next chapter!

Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I\'m glad you liked the way I handled those two scenes; they gave me the toughest time when I was writing them. Especially the basketball scene, because my knowledge of basketball is not so much. :D Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 9
Date: September 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Bruises and Bandages

Another really good chapter, I felt like the hospital scenes were pretty believable and realistic.

Too bad Pam can't go with Jim, because I would LOVE to see Jam in LA.

Oh well....


Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! The hospital scene was a bit challenging (thank goodness EmilyHalpert knows about all that medicine-y stuff), but I\'m glad it came across as realistic. And I did ponder them going to LA together, but then I realized I\'d have to write about another town I know nothing about, lol. We might still get to see some of Jim in the LA setting, but nothing too extensive. Thanks again; really glad you liked it!!

Gifts by Vampiric Blood Rated: K [Reviews - 141] 54
Summary:

It's been three years since Jim accepted the promotion to New York.  After two years of silence, Pam sends Jim a gift.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11817 Read Count: 35777 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: October 16, 2008
Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: August 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Delivery

I am so glad I found this story, two things really make it click for me so far. Your portrayal of Pam is right on I think, and the way you described Jim's relationship with Karen was basically the way I've always wanted to but have been unable to express in words. PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, dmtip.  I'm glad to hear you think I got Pam and karen right.  There will be a couple more chapters before this story is marked complete.  Thanks for the attagirl!

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: August 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: What Might Have Been

WOW!!!! talk about suspense, I can not wait to see what Jim finally decides to do. Can't wait for the next chapter! This one was great!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!  I have the next chapter kind of laid out in my mind, so I hope it won't be too long till it's written up.  I'm glad you're enjoying my little yarn.

Timing Is Everything by jazzfan Rated: M [Reviews - 92] 39
Summary: Now completed. Set into Season 3, Jim moves to Stamford, can't forget Pam, and gets into some real trouble.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33419 Read Count: 49547 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: November 05, 2008
Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: September 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Just in Time

This was another awesome chapter. I'm so glad to see Jim and Pam finally coming together. I'm so scared for Pam to figure out about the gun though!

I really liked the way you did your dialougue.

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks dmtip, I really appreciate your comments. I\'m new to this so I\'m not sure I always get the dialogue right, so it\'s good to hear I do at least part of the time. (also tx to Vampiric Blood for her help in that department)\r\n\r\nI do think poor Pam is going to get her own emotional roller coaster about this.

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: August 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Lost

Awesome chapter, but I think you missed a few quotation marks which makes it kind of hard to read. All in all I loved it though, can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!!

Author's Response: Whoopsie, I will fix that. I took some stuff out at the last minute and forgot to add back in the quotation marks (re my response to Vampiric Blood)\r\nThanks.

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: September 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 'Round Midnight

I'm on the edge of my seat!

Probably your best chapter yet, with a perfect portrayal of Pam.

Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks dmtip, I really appreciate that. As I mentioned somewhere below, I find Pam a lot harder to write than Jim, so I\'m tickled you think I got her \"right\".\r\n\r\nThanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 All the Way

WOW!!!

Definately worth the wait. This has to be your most enwrapping chapter yet. I felt like I was actually in the Hospital room.

Great Stuff!!

Author's Response: Thanks dmtip, I\'m glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing. \r\n\r\nHopefully you were \"just visiting\" in the hospital room. *grin*

Smile Like You Mean It by Blanca Rated: T [Reviews - 29] 13
Summary: Something unexpected happens to Pam after a car accident, and Jim has to deal with the consequences. Set sometime after Goodbye Toby.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2190 Read Count: 4423 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: August 31, 2008
Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed
Date: August 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Okay

WOW!!!!!

Please update soon, I love this idea!

Author's Response: Part two is coming along. Thanks!

Come On, Feel the Illinoise! by Nightswept Rated: MA [Reviews - 255] 84
Summary: A companion piece to Indie Rock & Keds that follows an AU Jim and Pam while they deal with the everyday squabbles that come with living together as they struggle through the daunting beginnings of their careers, and eventually try to find a place to permanently settle down.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Holly, Jim, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Phyllis, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Romance, Travel, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: Indie Rock & Keds
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136759 Read Count: 78671 ePub Downloads: 27
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009
Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed
Date: January 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dinner at Eight in the Suburbs

Great chapter!!!!

I'm enjoying this story so much. I can't express how appreciative I am for THREE updates in two days.

I love the ways you've expanded on Jim and Pam's characters beyond what we see for 20 minutes every week.

Please keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad that you are enjoying this AU Jim and Pam and that you appreciate the updates. Doctor-ordered bed rest has turned me into a machine. I just hope the drugs and antibiotics don\'t turn this story turn into one weird acid trip... Heh. :)

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: February 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dinner at Eight in the Suburbs

Great new chapter
I love teacher Jim, it reminds a little bit of the deleted scene from product recall.

Author's Response: Yes! Teacher!jim was such a treat to write. He would be a fun teacher, I think. :) I love to see him being all cute with his kiddies, while still maintaining a slight disciplinary approach. Imagine Jim sitting on a desk in a room full of students and saying, \"Settle down, guys. Let\'s turn in our books to page 75 and discuss Shakespere.\" How hot is that? Ha-ha.

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: The Lost Art Of Humiliating Childhood Games

Great work, I was starting to wonder what happened to you. But it was well worth the wait.

I would love to see a new installment. After reading both of your stories as they were made, nothing would please me more than another installment with Jim and Pam living in a house and possibly a pregnancy

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Ooh, Jim and Pam with babies. I must admit, the idea is intriguing... ;). I have lots of ideas rattling around in that crazy old head of mine, so we\'ll see. I\'m glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: It's Been a Year...

Nightswept, I would just like to say what an amazing journey it has been reading "Indie Rock" and "Illinoise"

I can't imagine my fanfic experience without those two phenomenal pieces. I would just like to thank you for all the time you put in to the two great stories.

Also, I think I speak for everyone when I say that you would be the absolute greatest ever if you were to add a third installment to the series.

Not trying to pressure you, but after a well deserved break, I think we would all absolutely love to see more from you. Thank you so much for the two great fics!!!!

Authority by jazzfan Rated: K+ [Reviews - 28] 13
Summary: An account of Jim and Pam's evening after the New Boss day, so spoilers through New Boss.

I may make this into a Jim's backstory series with Confidence and add to it as the seasons progress.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1685 Read Count: 3562 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2009
Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Authority

Hey jazzfan great story but just wondering.....


Do you plan on finish "Someone to watch over me"??

I think you had a lot of us on the edge of our seats

Author's Response: Hi dunder mifflin this is pam. I owe the \"Someone\" readers a huge apology, but the truth was I was working on that story yesterday (it\'s coming right along) and I got the idea for this one and it sort of seized me. I needed to get this one done before Thursday because I\'m sure the canon will change somehow. Does that make sense? Anyway, I apologize for the \"Someone\" cliffhanger, and assure you I\'m working on it, and it\'s not that far from done.\r\n\r\nThanks for reading and reviewing!

I Heart Pickles by Nightswept Rated: MA [Reviews - 99] 42
Summary: The third and final AU installment that originated with Indie Rock & Keds, and follows Jim and Pam through the next chapter of their lives with a few surprises along the way... (Babies- oops! I'm sorry, did I ruin something?)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: Indie Rock & Keds
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48041 Read Count: 25940 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2010
Reviewer: dunder mifflin this is pam Signed 10
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Exaltation on a dark and stormy night

You are the best ever for writing this!!!

Loved the intro, can't wait for more to come. I can't wait to read all about the jim and pam baby experience.

This should definately help getting through the office-less summer!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review- I\'m glad you liked this chapter. This is going to be one looong summer. I\'ve never looked forward to September as much as I am right now. Especially since it brings along the start of another school year. Ugh.