An AU look at what might have happened, had Pam really thought about Jim's decision to go to Australia.
10 WOW this was awesome. i usually don't read things in the past because i don't like seeing Pam & Jim not together, i like reading smut too, who doesn't???
but WOW!!!
this was so good, this is how the actual show should have played out, it would have been so much better. I always get so giddy reading waiting for them to end the angst and they did!!!
i could relate and feel the pain of Jim while he had no much regret for what he did.
You Need to finish the story and see how Pam tells Roy and how Jim Buys a ticket for Pam to go to Australia with her, that would be a good way to end it.
it was so good btw. keep up the good work!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Jerky Jerk Face! (Nice username, btw.) I\'ve had this inexplicable desire to relive the angst and rewrite it with a happier ending, so, this story. But I\'m sorry to say, that\'s where it ends. Glad you enjoyed it though! :)
10 very good description of what probably did happen, that we didn't get to see.
what would be totally awesome, is if you wrote one (after you finish this one, i can't wait to see where its going!!) about Pam during Season 3 and how she was the one that was in angst seeing Jim with someone else, and how she dealt with it. you could also show Jim coming up to the Door and surprising Pam too.
great story!!!
^^just a suggestion, keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'ll definitely consider that one!
nice with the Radohead CD that Pam chose! I
10 i really liked the way this turned out, and how Karen just accepted it because at that time they weren't in a committed relationship.
off topic/ you mention and the show mentions how Jim got turned down twice, what was the other one if the 2nd one was casino night? thanks and great story!!! :D :D :D :p
Author's Response: I think he means both of the ones on casino night. He tells Michael in \"The Convention\" the Pam turned him down twice. I think he means the first one where they were out in the parking lot.
10 aha! i totally called your bluff, i had feeling that they weren't doing the unspeakable, it was very different, i loved it! WIN! great story
Author's Response: Yeah, I apologise about the misleading intro, but I was afraid I\'d give it away if I put it up as a \"Do It Yourself\" Jim. I\'m glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing.
10 WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!
that's all i can say. well not really: this was seriously the best fanfiction i have ever read, i loved how often you updated it, i would check every few days to see that you had 8 or 9 more chapters, i was always so excited to read them!
i started reading when you first started writing it. i probably would have not read it if i had seen the length after because it would be daunting.
there were some points where i was confused and kind of disappointed of what happened. Like where Pam kisses Jim, i just was so confused by Jim's reaction, i had no idea where you were gonna go with this at all!
and i must say, that so many times while i was reading i just would have the biggest smile on my face. after something happens either at the end of chapters because i am anticipating something exciting or especially during the uncomfortable situations for both of them and you could see the old Jim breaking through. :)
also that last chapter was without a doubt the best smut fanfic ever, and it was so well written i could picture everything! sometimes i'll read a fanfic that just has a story and sometimes i'll read one that has smut, but this was the best of both worlds!
this was just amazing, hands down the best Fan Fiction i've read here
:)
Author's Response: Well, I am so glad that you liked it so much and I thank you for your kind words. And I know what you mean about being confused...but I think both Jim and Pam were confused about so much with regard to each other during the time after Jim came back to Scranton...and I wanted to respect that as one of the themes running through my story. I guess it worked. And gald you especially liked the last chapter!