Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: October 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Chapters 1-3
wow, this is a great idea for a story. i love seeing pam in such a different light, her insecurities, and finally something she's excited and proud about. also, very nicely written, absolutely typo-free, and smoothly done.
i like the breakup, and how it gets tied into the art show. finally they're done with each other! can't wait to see what happens between our favorite couple! lastly, i love how you don't spend too much time on one issue, and go only into the necessary amount of detail, not too much or too little. just right. i love the pace of this story too! nothing but love for this chapter!