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huh. it seems as if in my review, instead of posting the entire thing, it only posted the first sentence. twice. wtf?

anyway, i LOVE that line. it's so true... that's what i love about the first 2 years of a child's life... every day they discover something new.

also loved the line "...A love so profound it transcended all forms of contraception."

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like Hannah_Halpert, i also wanted to see them meet up post-baby. i loved the image of jim & karen drinking from juice boxes and sharing goldfish. mmmmm... goldfish.

i also think that there should be another "loose end"... this time roy.

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Cecelia resting her little pudgy hand next to Pam's heart as they gazed at each other.

*thud* that killed me (in a good way)

Author's Response: I'm glad it did (in a good way too)! when I did that part, I wanted to described the scene of Pam and Cecelia as mother and daughter well in the story. It gets that particular image in the reader's mind, that is their special time together, just bonding.

HAHAHAHA... my nephew did this to me once. except he was 3... and fully clothed... and at the zoo.

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....myth about a jar of marbles? i'm confused.

Author's Response: There's this theory that if you put a marble in a jar every time you have sex in the first year of marriage, then take a marble out of said jar each time you have sex in subsequent years, the jar will never empty. Simply put, Jim and Pam are still gettin' busy.

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that was perfect! my dad used to have to go out and buy tampons for me, my sister, and our mom. poor guy.

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so, random, buuuuuuut... here is a link where you can create and print out an "in case of emergency" card. i really think that everyone should have one of these. ESPECIALLY teenagers who are driving.

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james daniel... you TOTALLY took that from my fics! ;oP

seriously though, this is beautiful, fluffy and sad at the same time.

Author's Response: Gosh, I'm really sorry. I didn't do it on purpose. The kid had to be named Jim for the story to work, and I've always been partial to Daniel because of Greg Daniels. Imitation is flattery, right?

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i'm really loving this. can't wait for the next update!

one thing: he spent as much effort on housekeeping as he did on his personal experience... i think you mean appearance? i do the same thing sometimes!

Author's Response: Oh, wow. Thanks. I must have read that sentence a hundred times without seeing that. Grr. I'll be hiding under that rock over there if anyone needs me.

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*squee!* such a great ending. love the ice-breaking tummy growl.

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ooh, cliffhanger! (ish.) i'm loving this so much. and really loving the quick updates! i loved the little jim/pam moment in the kitchen, very sweet. i loved the line "it's a very cute face."

and jim telling michael to think about boobs. ha!

keep this going!

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omg the image of dwight doing the shirtless tango with a lamp made me laugh so hard.

and karen's little "trick" with michael... i'm horrified to say that i'm intrigued.

Author's Response: For the record, that little trick works if you do it right. One person thought he could withstand its powers. He ended up falling flat on his back. And yes, the evidence of success was quite apparent.

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yes, this should definitely continue!

and “Party of My So-Called Creek Slayer” kind of made my day