Interesting start. Very interesting start. I've always wondered how things would've turned out if Roy was merely a - nothing. Didn't exist, that is, or only lasted a couple of months. And this is definitely a way it could go. 

I can't wait to see where you're going with this!! I think this is definitely going to start an Office!cult following like Dazed and Confused in Scranton and Hope did, both AUs. =P Moremoremore!

I'm so tired I can fall asleep standing up [and I've never done that before!] but I have to, have to, say that I absolutely loved this. Sweet and sugary and fluff, in-character and real and believable, the exact sort of thing I need at the end of long and unbelievably irritating days. I love plain marshmallows. I don't really see how you can't. =P Jim is a nut. [and here I'll stop talking like they're real. bah.]

And You might want to be naked when I get back has got to be one of the most amazing ways to finish off a story, ever. =P 

Thank you for posting this! 

I think you're evil.

I loved the rest of the fic, but I still think you're evil. 

Amazing!! For something that you were nervous about posting, actually, this is freaking brilliant. [I liked it better than Unbreak Unbroken, actually, and I thought I liked that - this is awesome.] 

Especially the way it was written. I love the way this flows, how there're contradictions and similarities and differences: how the fact that he loves her and she loves him is something so basic in his world, how when she said that wasn't true, that he'd misinterpreted, it turned his world around, completely. I loved that image. I love that the sky was violet, the grass was red, Dwight was pleasant, and he knew nothing.

And she's hesitant and she's scared. The world rights itself and you're standing on the ground for the first time in months. Ohhh. And when he kisses her again and his world spins over again? I adore that it's like she's his anchor, holding him back on the ground. 

Perfect in more ways than I can say in one lousy review, and a gold star for imagery! Can't wait to see even more from you!

Crap.
And then I am going to steal him away from that crazy bitch.

GO PAM. That line wins. Favourite line of whole fic. Easy. 

Loved this - Krazy!Karen is...interesting, but I can't say I like her as much as I liked the Stamford!Karen. =P  

oooooohhhh, what a bitch!!! BOO KAREN.

Loved Angela's PamSecret, by the way - the calendar thing? So in-character i was snorting my head off.

Love this. Can't wait to see more! 

OMG FRIENDS.

I continue thinking that Meredith is my favourite of the lot because of this story [which is strange considering she's OnewiththeBooze] but then you keep throwing humdingers of more awesome from the others. Karen is still ruining everything, as is Dwight, but I love Dwight, and Karen?...hmm.

heh, Dwigt. They know that the girls know that the guys know that the girls know.  

LMAO oh goodness. TOBY, TOBY, TOBY, uh, PAM, uh, ANGELA, SWEETIESWEETIESWEETIE, TOBY?! Toby just...everytime the guys try to do something fun or exciting, he just makes it...not that way. 

I think it all boils down to Jim and Pam kind of pranking each other with the others' help, and the others are just being useless and messing things up, and Karen is being all girly and moodswingy, and further complication?: Jim and Pam are actually allies, working to prank Dwight!! It's like a freaking soap opera! I hope Pam pushes Karen down the elevator shaft, at least. 

HAH I have NO IDEA why I love the idea of Boys vs Girls - what can I say, Muggins? You bring out the kid in me. teehee.

Getting madder and madder, still, at Karen, though - are you sure there aren't cliffs in Scranton? How 'bout we take her back to Stamford? With all that sea they've got to have some high ground to push her off of.  

WOOOOO JIM. Death to Karen! WOO. WOO. And I freaking loved Phyllis, and them talking in terms of 'contract' and and 'artistic differences' - awesome. I loved this chapter. 

SHE'S LYING! Amazing, Muggins: it takes one awesome story to make me go back to loving Jim and not getting irritated with him as the actual episodes make me. =P 

I'm in such a good mood now that I'm going to work on proofing maths now!! WOO! 

I live in Singapore, where we are deprived of getting episodes early [we got Casino Night last week!! God.], and I watch all S3 episodes a day late, and it's already Friday night here, so I'm going to risk being shooka-shookaed by reading it right away. 

I keep loving Jim/Pam interactions [*headdesk*ing and all that one-finger typing (ahem.), and charcoal class, and JIMDITCHINGKARENHA.], and I keep thinking Karen would do nicely jumping off a cliff [I love Jim telling her he's not planning on marrying for a while], and I keep loving the rest of the Office!ladies even more. Meredith, especially - if she existed, in real life [and I have to remind myself of that a lot, believe me; it's sad], I would be unbelievably entertained. All the time. But since she doesn't exist [*sigh* unfortunately], I'm going to have to just entertain myself with this story, because it is hands down one of the most snort-worthy stories on this site, while still being plot-y and plot-advancement-y and - I'm no longer making sense, so I have to leave it at one of the most awesome stories ever. Ever. [I don't use triple-threat bolditalicunderline for just anything.] 

You are still the only person who can write fluff in a way that makes you sniffle a little, at the same time.

There are so many, many things I adored about this, but to detail them would be to quote everything, and you know what you wrote. This paragraph, though?
And she has to find new places for his laughter to go so she pushes it behind her ribcage, behind her eyes, somewhere between her heart and her stomach.
Absolutely beautiful.

I loved everything else, too, of course: especially the bits in her room: the way he comes into her room for the first time, the way she puts away that picture of Roy in her drawer [something about that strikes me: she's maybe never been here since she called off the wedding, and I don't know why, but I like that.], the way he just rushes into her and kisses her, because it's nothing too original but the way you've written it and the fact that it's Jim and it's Pam just changes everything, and God.
The wedding itself was gorgeous, especially the way she kisses him before he's been told to, especially since you can always see that Jim loves her to bits [the way he brushes the hair out of her face], but the way this was written from her point of view adds this little feeling that makes me smile so wide, because they're fictional, but so happy. Oh. 
And the reception was great, too, although I would kill to see what Dwight would've said to extend congratulations. =P Michael's line, by the way? Killer.

Yeah, OK, so I was aiming for a short review but this became a random blubbery mess; you reduce me to that, I'm afraid, so you've brought it upon yourself!

Thanks for writing this. Chases nightmares of Phyllis' Wedding away. ;) 

I was yelling at the computer screen when I watched this episode finally, and this was a very good [/Jim] tonic. I particularly loved imagining Pam slipping her hands into his jacket, a little into his trousers. Very mmm.

I'm saving this as a page on my cell phone so I can come back to it when the Jam!angst hits me again. Your stories have always had the most amazing way of making me grin at the end. Thank you so very much for writing this!