I don't know if this means I'm a dork, or the Jam!angst is just getting way too much to handle, but I read this in my college library and I was this close to tears.

This seems like the good, healing sort of angst, though; because something about it excudes this they're going to get through this sort of air, and I love that.

I cannot wait, at all, for an update! Get your writing skillz in gear! 

I don't very much like how you make them dance. =P

It's making me cry. Seriously. I thought the angst aspect of Jam was covered pretty well in the show, but this is making things ten times worse, and maybe I'll watch the next few parts of Jim/Pam angst storylines on the show by reminding myself that he's not engaged and she doesn't have a Jason and they're still in the office. 

I am crying. God. One thing that made me smile, though? Kelly! Ryan! AW.

Cannot wait for an update!! WOO. This is ahhhmaazzziing! 

Loved this; I couldn't stop smiling: especially those last two parts? The second-last I loved because of the mention of her shoes, I love that she wants to fit him better, even there's no real need to. =P The last one made me grin till my teeth hurt. Jamie Halpert, a mix of Jim and Pam, would be a regular Dennis the Menace, certainly! Aww.


Author's Response: I didn't even think of the whole wanting to fit him better, but that is a good point! So thanks! And yeah, the ending was kind of spur of the moment, (the other four parts had been planned out like a month ago) but now I have all these little tiny plot bunnies dealing with the Halpert clan, so I'm not sure thats the last we've seen of him, but remember he has a sister too! hehe :-P Thanks for the review!

I've been known to get drunk on orange juice, actually. What can I say? It takes very little to keep me satisfied and smiling. Ahem. I'm not drunk: I think I just had a little too much sugar today. Or maybe Kelly's rubbing off on me. 

What I loved about this one - I was going to choose my favourite, but I'm going to have to settle for, uh...#1, #2, #3, #5, and...yeah, #4, too.

OK, the first two are particularly amazing because oh, Meredith!: I love how you got her 'background' in, in so little, and made us feel so sad for her without even saying SheIsSoSad - subtlety, yes. 

And the Death of Tom! She tries not to take it too personally when he kills himself two days later. is PainfullyPhyllis, a little punch to the gut. One of the few times she takes a chance and the guy kills himself.
[I love the character you've given Tom, here, too; he's just a name with a depressed background on the show, but you've added a certain something to this that I can't put my finger on...I loved it, though.]

The others - the freaky Angela-ness of the third one made me snort and shudder a little, as only Angela can do [her sweater will definitely need to be dry cleaned], the Kelly-ness of the fourth one is scary because I do seem to know what Kelly would say [oh, dear], and I loved the last one - the hint of Jim/Pam aside [as J/P always makes me ridiculously happy], but Andy saying you're my Diane? Made my night. I can imagine him circling like a shark smelling blood in the water, being overly nice to her, her, who is so drunk she doesn't even seem to care. 

Awesome.  

Jim/Pam from you? I knew it had to be a prompt. =P

Loved this. Entertaining and so very Kelly. 

I meant DistantDarkPlaces.

OK, rereading this - I really like what you've done with Pam's POV. Everyone's thinking it but no one's written it [other than on TWoP, but that's not counted] until now. Roy had her fooled for a little while, and that would hurt her, definitely. 

I can see traces of that hug all over this chapter, but feel free to take that as you wish, because I couldn't [literally couldn't; my eyes shut automatically] watch this episode right more than once or twice. The Jim/Pam bits.

I loved the way she kissed him while he was still asleep, how disoriented and lost he was, before he was jolted back to reality. 

I can't stop smiling yet, and I'm still feeling a little woozy with the after-effects of reading something so promising, spirit-lifting...so I'm just going to be quoting a couple of lines I particularly loved:
Jim tried to deflect attention from the things he did for her.
How true! In direct contrast with Roy, this is obviously more evident, but you can't help but notice he doesn't make a big deal of anything he does, especially for her.
Anytime Jim said "No.", because imagining him saying that, looked dazed, disbelieving, completely genuine = too much to handle. 
And this is silly, but when they went Kelly at the same time? I could hear them say it, see them say it, and I cracked up. 

Alright, truthfully, I loved a lot more, but I'd be quoting everything right back at you, which wouldn't make sense because you know what you wrote, because you wrote it!

Yeah, I'm up really late.

I can't wait for more of Only!! The brilliant-fluff of that fic never, ever fails to put me in a good mood. Or a sugar-high.

Smut? Yes, please!!! 

This chapter is making me ridiculously happy - I think the effect of this is different than your other fluffy-aftermath-chapters because - OK, I don't know. I was going to say it's because they've acknowledged they love each other, but that's happened in other stories, too, and I was going to say maybe they both have had their fair shares of setbacks and changes, which makes more sense, but uhm. >< I've lost my train of thought. 

I loved this, though; the way they interacted, and talked, and looked at each other, they were just so much more - liberated, I think. When Jim/Pam get their crap together it's going to be wonderful and that's what's got me still hanging in there.

You can't take this long for an update, now! The prospect of smut is keeping jumping in my seat.  

Since we're living on fanfiction, basically, till a new episode - absofreakinglutely cannot wait for an update. I loved Kelly's message, and Angela-Creed's message, and Dwight, and MICHAEL!

Roy's made me shiver slightly, again, and I'm very, very mad at Karen. So. 

Can't wait to see what happens next - reactions. Darn, cliffhanger after his line, just like the episode.  

Crap, you just broke my heart. I know that this could take place with either one, depending on the time, but it's Roy/Pam, and that's what makes me sniffle. I didn't think it could happen, but you've made it completely possible. Darn. 

LOL, I was going to say he such a horrible, terrible person, but I was cheering for him every single step of the way, so. If he goes back to Karen, though, I'm going to have to spam your inbox. I have your [e-mail] address! =P

I liked Jim's POV, here. Not standard Jim!POV, heh.

Cannot wait, at all, for an update, so hurry up and get to it!  

Oh, I love you, I love this, I love so many things about this it's insane. The talking-things-out, the Jerry Springer, the kisskisskiss. When they're being idiots they make me sad, but when they get their crap together they make me ridiculously happy. Thank you for making me ridiculously happy. ;) 

Author's Response: hahaha....isn't that true...they do the same for me - ridiculously happy and completely frustrated as well. So sad that a TV show has this big of an effect on us! Thanks so much for the review!

Alright I read this with a slightly clearer mind and I love that Jim is charged at from every direction and he is just this pillar of confusion, not knowing what the hell is happening. And I also love that he starts off his call angrily, but that energy goes into being protective, even though he's still mad at her. Awesome. 

And I like the conversation; it reads well and you can imagine all of them saying that, voice inflections and all. I liked Jim going Karen, mockingly, irritated, not in the mood to talk to her [he has reason to be irritated with her, but he doesn't realise that yet =P], I loved that - these two are not going to last.

The Dundies and Casino Night confusion conversation, especially, was great - you've gotta be fucking kidding me! - HALPERT!! 

You really are awesome. If you take longer for an update, though, I'm going to have to find out your [e-mail] address.