1Summary: Angela finds herself at an impasse.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Andy, Angela, Dwight/Angela
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 190 Read Count: 1975 ePub Downloads: 0
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Reviews by belsum
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2008 Updated: February 01, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: February 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow. So terribly sad and yet I can totally see Angela's stubbornness leading her down this path. She's her own worst enemy.
Author's Response: Yeah, she has got a mean stubborn streak. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: Angela, Kelly, a ruler and the kink bar on this fic is higher than the most dangerous roller coaster.
Categories: Other
Characters: Angela, Kelly
Genres: Drabble, Humor, Oneshot, Slash, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235 Read Count: 1356 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Other
Characters: Angela, Kelly
Genres: Drabble, Humor, Oneshot, Slash, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235 Read Count: 1356 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2008 Updated: February 11, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks! ... I think.
Date: February 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh. My. God.
Ahem.
Author's Response: Thanks! ... I think.
Summary: Jim gives Pam flowers
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 370 Read Count: 4419 ePub Downloads: 2
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 370 Read Count: 4419 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2008 Updated: February 14, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Valentine's Day
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Valentine's Day
That's gorgeous! Such a perfect synopsis of their relationship - all in colors. And the card at work? BWAHAHAH!!! I could see that being done on the show!
Author's Response:
Oh, thanks! I forgot that I hadn't sent this to you, yet.
If they did it on the show, I think we'd see the HUGE bouquet delivery, Pam reading the card, and just smiling her little face off at Jim. Cut to Jim's TH, "Take that, Mrs. Vance Refrigeration." Heh.
Summary: 
What if Roy was lying when he said he'd never cheated on Pam? What if Pam was always a little less healthy than she let on? What if everything, everywhere, is only meant to fall apart?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31793 Read Count: 73220 ePub Downloads: 31
What if Roy was lying when he said he'd never cheated on Pam? What if Pam was always a little less healthy than she let on? What if everything, everywhere, is only meant to fall apart?Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31793 Read Count: 73220 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: February 16, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Don't do this.
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Don't do this.
Oh yeah. I'm all about yelling at Stupid!Weak!Pam. Heh. But dang. I thought you said that Jim was going to figure some things out like three chapters ago? Hee!
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Don't speak.
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Don't speak.
Gah! Poor Jim. I hate seeing him being used like this but again...it's so in character for Pam to do it. The boy's only got so much willpower and then it's gone.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Don't think.
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Don't think.
Ooh, ouch. Punishing Jim for her own weakness? Unfortunately, I can believe it. I think you've really nailed Pam's character. She wouldn't have confronted Roy. She would have kept it all inside her. She's really grown a lot and character studies like this help to illustrate just how much has changed about the things that she chooses to be.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Don't bend.
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Don't bend.
I actually really liked that chapter. I don't think it got darker at all. Pam finally woke the fuck up and took charge and I loved how she dealt with Roy. No need for a scene; he doesn't deserve that much emotional energy anymore.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Don't break.
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Don't break.
This chapter was simply gorgeous. From the constant feeling of change to the simple declaration of believe at the end. This phrase really grabbed me: laughing inside or crying inside or maybe just breathing a little bit inside
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Don't forget where you've been.
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Don't forget where you've been.
You were right to keep it quiet. I love the mood of this chapter. Again with the amazing insights like, "inside of the pool of him". Gorgeous!
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Don't breathe.
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Don't breathe.
How could she not indeed?
Man, Ryan's such a douche! Though honestly I bet he wouldn't have cared enough to say anything if Jim hadn't mentioned it first.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Don't be afraid.
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Don't be afraid.
What would you have to apologize for? That was lovely!
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Just let me fall in love with you.
Date: March 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Just let me fall in love with you.
I love how "out there inside of that" both contradicts itself and yet makes perfect sense!
They were always trading their calm, handing it off from one to the other and back again - it's so brilliantly true!
I was going to copy a few other sentences when I realized this was one of *those* chapters where every phrase is just so perfect and right and each simile, each metaphor, every comparison points out exactly the nature of things and why it all makes so much sense. There was a dream-like quality to this chapter, like I was viewing it all through a gauzy curtain or a soft-focus lense.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Word: Two-Week Fanfic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6565 Read Count: 33106 ePub Downloads: 2
When everything reminds you of the past, it is best to embrace it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Word: Two-Week Fanfic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6565 Read Count: 33106 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2008 Updated: February 18, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Table
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Table
One kitchen will never not be funny. Yay! I'm excited for the final few chapters that I haven't seen yet.
Author's Response:
You reviewed this 12 years ago and I never responded (there's a page in your MTT profile that shows how many reviews you have and how many you haven't responded to. I had 9 I never answered, and this is one of them).
So, thanks. HAHAHA. I hope you're having a great visit to your new office. :)
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Court
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Court
Ooh, a coupla new courts! I still love this litany. It's so in character for Pam to turn their little challenge to 11.
Author's Response:
You reviewed this on February 19, 2008. Wow. WOW.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Rescue
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Rescue
I really love how seamlessly these all fit together. The transition from "Lost" to "Rescue" was particularly smooth. It would be tough to recognize they were prompts!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I had a hard time with that, because obviously they were prompts and I could never be exactly sure what was coming next.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Night
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Night
One thing that I really appreciate is how thoroughly you work the prompts into the story. It's not just a lost grocery list, Pam looking at the sky, or powering down for the night. You really explore all the possible meanings for them and ramifications.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! With the exception of the horrible "entourage" chapter (which I think improved on re-writes but was still a pain), I did try to slip the word in as much as possible beyond whatever my immediate idea was for that section. Sort of to subliminally reinforce the idea, I guess.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: End
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun. Sort of difficult, but fun! I very much appreciate all of your help, too.
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: End
Awwww.
And yay! You did such a fantastic job with this!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun. Sort of difficult, but fun! I very much appreciate all of your help, too.
Summary: What if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37702 Read Count: 96814 ePub Downloads: 59
What if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37702 Read Count: 96814 ePub Downloads: 59
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2008
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Silence
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Silence
Hot damn, that's one way to end an unexpected make-out session!
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Pianissimo
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Pianissimo
Awww. They actually talked to each other! I mean, it's not much but with those two, dang, just the slightest bit of communication makes all the difference.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Accelerando
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Accelerando
I really like the back story you've given Karen. That was a great segment and now I'm completely and totally hooked. Can't wait to find out what her friend advised her to do!
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Counterpoint
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Counterpoint
I really like how kindly and realistically you're treating Karen's character. She is a smart, cool broad and this is a helluva thing. It's nice to see her affected by something as small as where a car is parked. I'm looking forward to the final confrontation.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Rubato
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Rubato
Shut down! And after that sweetness with the hand-holding. I love how something so junior high can be so major for them. And you continue to rock the IM conversations. YAY!
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Obbligato
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Obbligato
Oh my fucking god. Of course it's Pam! Argh!
Still, I continue to like how you're portraying Karen. And giving her the Angel and Demon friends is a nice touch.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: March 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Fugue
Date: March 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Fugue
Damn. That was a helluva climax. What an intense confrontation! Karen's a crazy broad for forcing the issue like that but part of me understands why she would do it. I'm just glad that neither Pam nor Jim followed standard practices and used it as an excuse to run.
Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: April 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Deceptive Cadence
Date: April 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Deceptive Cadence
PB&J and American Idol? That sounds like a perfect first date for them! Their wrestling on the floor was also absolutely in character and the logical progression of their flirting now that they could actually move forward with it.