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5 Times Pam Isn't Pregnant by standinginthedoorway Rated: K [Reviews - 5] 4
Summary: Just what the title says - Spoilers up to "Company Picnic"
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 Read Count: 2439 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is fabulous. I loved the way you built in her thinking she was pregnant as part of the rationale for why she told Roy about her kiss with Jim.  And of course I adored that last snippet when she wasn't pregnant because well...she had been. :-) Great!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Beyond Words by JAMhands Rated: K+ [Reviews - 12] 6
Summary: Inspired by EllaBella's 'Mute' challenge, but it may not quite fit the challenge itself. Jim and Pam share a silent ride home. Warning: Spoilers for Company Picnic in case you are the only Office fan on Earth that doesn't already know.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1181 Read Count: 2445 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2009 Updated: August 08, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Beyond Words

::sigh:: I will never get tired of fics about that moment after the pregnancy reveal, and this was a beautiful one.  Thanks for sharing it with us. 

Two Verses on Reproduction by morethanthat Rated: Private [Reviews - 13] 3
Summary: In "like a geyser," Jim bumps into Karen and has a panic attack. In "so foreign," Pam cries, sucks at painting, and frets over parenting. Note: There is very little to these stories that is shiny/happy, so please be appropriately beware. Rated K
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1138 Read Count: 3843 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2009 Updated: August 08, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: like a geyser

Wow it's nice to have you back!  I'm so glad you decided to tackle the fear that Pam might be feeling...we all remember that Bring Your Daughter to Work Day comment, and sure it probably was due in large part to the wrong fiance, but she also said that kids just never liked HER...so I definitely think she might feel some apprehension. I thought this moment was very real.  There's not a bone in my body that doesn't think she's stoked to be having a baby with Jim...but still - fearful...totally.

Author's Response: perfect review. A++. thanks so much for your thoughts! i totally agree with you...

colors in white by kaat Rated: K+ [Reviews - 11] 6
Summary: a little thing we like to call a wedding ;)
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 781 Read Count: 1667 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: mixed

GORGEOUS.  I thought everything about this worked.  Big or small, tons of people or tiny amount of people, the details don't matter...there was true love written into every word of this and that's Jim and Pam.  No matter the scenario, all they really see is each other and I can't imagine that Jim won't be cataloguing every detail of the moment. GORGEOUS.

Author's Response: lovefool, i just have to say that getting reviews from you make my day. your writing is my favorite and compliments like that coming from you mean soooo much! :) i\'m glad you liked it!

"It's Too Soon" by FlonkertonChamp Rated: T [Reviews - 67] 28
Summary: Pam is 32 weeks pregnant... and goes into labor. She and Jim are thrown into the most frightening experience of their lives.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Kids/Family, Married, Pregnancy/Babies, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Challenges: Daddy Jim, Pam's Pregnancy
Series: J.D. & Mollie
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15744 Read Count: 86360 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: November 30, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Week 5 - Finally

I'm a sucker for a wiggly baby. It was nice to see an update of this!


Author's Response: i love wiggly babies too! my best friend's 8-week-old does that whenever his daddy comes home from work. actually, he did that while he was in the womb! whenever my friend's husband would talk to her belly, he would suddenly start kicking and squirming.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 4:03 AM

Very well written. Your ability to write Jim and Pam honestly - with things that real people would say in the moment - is what kept this from slipping into melodrama. It's such a fine line to walk and you're doing a great job. I can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Week 2 - Back to Work

It's funny that you thought this was clunky, I thought it was one of your strongest chapters yet! It flowed really nicely, and more than that - your voices are so freaking spot on fantastic. Oscar -- who I think is hard to do -- was pitch perfect.  Very nicely done!

Author's Response: Oscar -- who I think is hard to do aaaaaand that's what she said. and thank you! for the review, and the TWSS setup. ;oP

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Week 3 - One Step Closer

Aw, glad to have this story back.  This chapter was so quietly intimate - I like that. Love that the little guy is getting stronger too.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue - March 13, 2012

I love how you ended this with a throw back to the beginning that I remember thinking was so freaking adorable. This was a really sweet story. Great job!

Author's Response: thanks! it's funny, i wrote the epilogue while i was in the middle of writing chapter 8... i had a bit of writers' block, so i was re-reading the story from the beginning, and the idea suddenly came to me.

and then i thought, "well crap, i have an ending... now i just need to write a middle."

The Way Halperts Are by norsk_heksen Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 4
Summary: Takes places sometime after "Frame Toby". Jim helps Pam move into their new home, but gets distracted along the way. Warning: Fluff!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1145 Read Count: 2398 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: August 19, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this was lovely. Are you a teacher by any chance? Or just a lover of children's lit?  This was quite nice. I loved Jim's commentary and his thoughts on how he wanted his kids to know they were wonderful people.

Bobble Heads by Dwangie Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 3
Summary: Dunder Mifflin workers are asked a series of questions about an "office romance."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 737 Read Count: 1859 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2009 Updated: August 21, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Set One - Do you think there is a secret "office romance?"

Your character voices are ridiculously on point.  Kudos!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!!

Seven Seconds by The_Best_Dundies_Ever Rated: M [Reviews - 10] 1
Summary: An impossible situation. An old enemy comes back. An stranger claims he knows a powerful secret and everyone in the office should united if they want to survive.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Holly, Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Angst, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3451 Read Count: 2595 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

YES! I guessed! lol. About two paragraphs in I guessed that it was Devon! Woohoo! Oh wait...this is about you - not me. lol.  What an interesting idea for a story. I guess not everyone there is extremely gruntled huh? ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I am glad that you like the story!

Forever by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 10] 5
Summary: Jim, Pam, a bed, some love, and an unborn baby.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 2591 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2009 Updated: August 31, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man, when I read the first sentence for some reason (I'm blaming it on fatigue) I read it as, "I'm going to LEAVE you forever," and I thought...what a horrible thing to say - she must be talking to Roy...but then NO! She was talking to Jim...and then I started to panic...what kind of crazy stuff was I reading?! So then I went back to the beginning....Oh she's going to LOVE him forever.

Oh well that's MUCH better. ;-) And indeed it was. 

This was beautiful.  I'm so glad you shared your random thoughts with us.  You never disappoint. 

Narrative by yanana Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 10
Summary: I'm totally wiped out, and I'm so stalled with my other story, but this came out because I was extremely drunk and pretty much collapsed onto my bed and popped in Company Picnic. And the fluff just came out of that instantly.

Pam and Jim get to meet someone.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2347 Read Count: 3281 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is incredible. I should just post this entire story inside of this little box here because I loved every stinkin' word. From start to finish...and the line where Jim tells their little boy that Pam is their girl...and their entire THING in life is to take care of her...DEAD. Literally, I'm surprised I can type right now. 

PERFECTION.



Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much! Is it a little fangirly of me to think that any compliment on one of my babyfics coming from you is an honor? ;) Total dork, yeah .. but thanks for the review.:)

We Just Can't Escape The Madness by FlonkertonChamp Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 9
Summary: Jim & Pam's kids channel their parents' co-workers.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood, Drabble, Humor, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Daddy Jim
Series: J.D. & Mollie
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1560 Read Count: 23907 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: December 22, 2010
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: She Might As Well Be Wearing A Mustard Yellow Shirt

haha. Fact: This one is my favorite so far! 

Poor, poor Jim and Pam...they just can NOT get away from those people! 

Proof by yanana Rated: K [Reviews - 12] 6
Summary: Probably nothing worth your while (haha), but I had to get something post-premiere out. So spoilers for that, and then the smallest, slightest, no big deal spoiler (as in, I doubt it'll ruin anything for you) for a later episode in season six.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1037 Read Count: 2809 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: September 17, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, God love you.  This is so sweet and good,  and just the right dessert after that yummy episode.  I love that they stayed up all night talking and finally his hand landed on her belly...and the moment you described with him joking about the sonogram and then whispering that he loved her in Pam's ear...Ok - THAT is IT.  The most perfect characterization.  And then of course she owes Penny money, because that's the relationship Pam would have with her sister...at least I hope. 

Great stuff here - THANK YOU for getting us started the right way!

For Better or For Worse by jazzfan Rated: T [Reviews - 52] 25
Summary: Jim is out of work. Now complete.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Inner Monologue, Married
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9247 Read Count: 7760 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Here's That Rainy Day

Oh God, this is horribly horribly perfect.  This is absolutely Jim in this set of circumstances. This story rings so true for anyone who's ever had to watch where there every penny went. You start having weird thoughts about the care of your shoes and praying that you don't get into an accident because your insurance is crap.  God, this is good. SO glad I caught it with a 2nd chapter attached. 

First person was the PERFECT choice for this story, btw.



Author's Response: Aw, thanks lovefool. I'm happy you think the first person was the right choice. I mulled it for a good while and decided it was the only way I could really get into his head for the stuff he wasn't going to say outloud. Jim's a good kid, hopefully things will get better?

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ain't It Good to Know (You've Got a Friend)

Jazz, I just love you. I'm sorry if that's weird for you to hear - but I need you to hear it...once.  This is just so real.  My gut is like clenched the whole time I'm reading this, and then when Jim started to talk -- really talk at the end it was like...:::sigh::: yes - let it out!  Man, I hope things look up for these two kids. I think you've done such a fabulous job of incorporating some new canon here with Jim's family dynamic.  What a plethora of new stuff we can all use now huh? Knowing what we know about his brothers and dad.  Just great.

Going back a minute to talk specifically about one detail that I loved...I loved that they had no idea how Daniel happened and that's what was keeping them from making love. UGH...knife to my heart there. 

Again - really, really good.



Author's Response: lovefool, I...I...can't... *snork* I'm tickled that you are enjoying this. There's one last chapter and it's being beta'd. It starts a little...different, so we'll see if you like that one. That wedding episode is a treasure trove for fanfic writers, isn't it? So much new family information. *rubs hands together* Thanks so much for your comments. ps - I mean they know "how" Daniel happened, but not "how". *laughs*

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Nature Boy

When that man gave Jim the job (when MICHAEL gave Jim the job) I almost couldn't get to the end of this fast enough because I needed to congratulate you on a job freakin' well done! Wow...has anyone ever gotten Jim like that? I don't think so! BEST PRANK EVER.

And if all that wasn't enough...Nature Boy - in my top 5 favorite songs EVER.

This was very well crafted my friend. Go you!



Author's Response: So, couldn't wait for the story to end, eh? *gets a melodramatic wounded look* I'm really tickled you liked the prank. Somebody (ahem nan) thought it was too mean, but after all the crap he's pulled it seemed like poetic justice, and it all turned out okay for old Jimpert in the end, afterall. If you dish it out... Oh yeah! Nature Boy is a phenomenal song. If you get a chance to watch that Elling version on youtube, he will blow your socks off. Thanks for your comments!

Chiffon like a Cloud by yanana Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 11
Summary: Total fluff. I know, it's all that's coming out lately. Speculation based on spoilers for episode 6.04. Just some moments during a particular day for Jim and Pam.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2216 Read Count: 3895 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed 10
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh....really? Yanana? Really?...God, that's perfect. Every little moment was just so achingly sweet.  And those precise little slices of life that you tease out...what with how babies have their own sense of humor.  Or the moment, Pam's tummy just popped out over night.  This is just so, so right.  I love everything about this.

Consequences of an Open Bar by yanana Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 8
Summary: Something short and kind of stupid I wanted to get in quick before Thursday, it's been in my head for a few days trying to get out. Pretty sure there aren't any spoilers, though.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 823 Read Count: 3104 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"I'm just going to wait until I see you on the elevator."

Jim FTW!

Oh, Yanana this was all kinds of awesome. I ccould totally see this happening and I LOVED that he was at the wrong room. This reads like canon. Kudos!



Author's Response: Thanks [b]lovefool[/b]. =)

Good-bye Scranton by Casinos and Coal Walks Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 2
Summary: 55 words-Jim's thoughts on leaving Scranton.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74 Read Count: 1766 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Change of Scenery

awwww...Nicely done.


Author's Response: Yeah! I was going for the Awwwww effect, so I'm glad you think I succeeded. Thanks for reviewing.

the Honeymoon Gift by yanana Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 11
Summary: Just something for the wedding excitement. I left out any spoilers or speculation for this one. Complete for now, but I might write a few more chapters if it strikes me. Rated K for now, but I'm sure if I end up writing more, the the rating will go up.

I'm aware that the title makes it sound like the gift would be, like, a vibrator or some kind of sex toy. It's not. I'm sorry.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3140 Read Count: 2397 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: October 07, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GREAT GIFT. Please continue! I'm not giving suggestions, I trust you! :-)

Trinkets by zippity_zoppity Rated: T [Reviews - 22] 14
Summary: Five gifts and the stories behind them. Spoilers for Niagara.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1100 Read Count: 2797 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man...the tie in the box...are you attempting to kill me? Good Lord almighty. This is good stuff.

Author's Response: No fatalities intended! I prefer read counts to body counts. Thanks so much!

Look What I Can Do With My Feet by yanana Rated: K [Reviews - 13] 8
Summary: Spoilers for an episode you may have heard of, Niagara.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Inner Monologue, Married, Oneshot, Romance, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2926 Read Count: 4795 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009
Reviewer: LoveFool Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Yanana...if this is your version of a hot mess, then I propose you get tipsy every single night.  How incredibly sweet was this? Because you know what -- EXACTLY. These are exactly Jim's thoughts about this moment. I also enjoyed your characterization of who Jim may have been in college, and the rude awakening of finding out that all that love stuff is all TRUE. lol. ::sigh:: Gorgeous, girl. 

Author's Response: Haha! I'm glad you liked. Tipsy I was indeed, there are parts I don't remember typing. Yikes, that might not be good, lol. I have a totally different idea about who Jim was when he was younger than I read about a lot. I'm more convinced that he was years above the other people his age and trying to figure out things too logically, and he needed a small bit of reckless abandon to make his balance. He figured that out, and a few years later he met his future wife. I have a whole theory, you see. ;) Thanks for the review. =)