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Oh, this is the sweetest thing! I like how carefully they mend their relationships, and their gifts are amazing! Especially I love this line:
'she realized that maybe she didn't know his favorite color anymore, but she could learn it.'
Wonderful. Just wonderful.
Thank you very much!

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Oh, I'm excited to see you started a new story!
Perhaps it makes me a terrible person, but I really, really like this lovelorn season 1-2 Jim (or, to be precise, I like to watch how he and Pam find understanding earlier than in the show). So, I'm double excited!
And I really like the beginning, especially the choice of the play to watch. And the line 'It was like William Shakespeare was reaching out from the grave and pointing a finger at him, Jim Halpert, and laughing' is great. It's both sad, funny, and ironic (I do hope, though, that Katy remains just the name in the program and the face on the stage...).
Also, I think that's interesting that Jim found a friend. I'm curious about how their friendship will develop.
Thank you, and looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope this lives up to your expectations! Katy will reappear, but that's because this is an S1 fic: we're going to go to Hot Girl at least, so she'll make an appearance, but I promise this is not a Katy-centered fic. Thanks for reading! 

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You know, the main reason I'm on this site is because of JAM interaction, but I find it surprisingly thrilling to read about Jim's ideas and actions that didn't relate (or relate only indirectly) to Pam; it's like to see another side of his life that usually remains hidden. I can't accurately describe my thoughts and feelings on that matter, but I hope you'll understand what I'm trying to say.
'He hadn't run one since college but hey, how hard could it be?' I have a feeling that this task might be trickier than he thinks...
'he was beginning to suspect Toby might have more in common with him than he thought…' this line made me sad a little... I barely stand the idea of Jim and Pam being with someone else (except each other), but Toby... his crush (I guess? I'm not sure how to name his feelings for Pam) is so, so sweet and tragic. I'd probably feel melancholy after reading that part, but you added:
'Well, he'd have to get in line,' — and I chuckled. I really like the way you mix the angsty things with humor.
Thank you so much! I genuinely enjoy your story, and I am excited about every new update. I hope the next one will also be soon :)

Author's Response: I'm glad this is still working for you even though we haven't gotten to the real JAM yet (it is coming, though since it's S1 there's some emotional work to do internally for each of them first). I really appreciate your detailed feedback!

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Awww. And, at the same time, — poor Pam. I can imagine her emotions probably too well, and it hurts. Somehow, Jim's prank affected not only Dwight but made Pam reconsidered her own believings about her friendship with Jim, and her doubts... yeah, that hurts. Perhaps, this experience though pushes her to think about what place Jim takes in her life and so one. But still, that was rather a sad day for her, I guess.
On the bright side — Steve came to her desk just once and spoke some formal nonsense! I won't believe if that doesn't create some material to think about (for Pam, and, I'd say, it might stir some suspicions in Dwight...)
P.S. It's silly of me, but I had no idea that it was originally a prank from the show! Perhaps, I should watch Season 9 after all, for the sake of not missing references in the stories.

Author's Response: I have not actually watched S9--but I've seen the prank cold open, most recently I think on the MTT Instagram feed. It's a great one for the sheer disbelief Dwight expresses. I do think you've got a good handle on what I'm doing with Pam--so thanks for noticing! And thanks for the review!

As a person who has headaches quite often, I was ready to feel compassion toward Roy in this state. Honestly, I was. But I just can't, I have no excuses for such selfish behavior. Leaving no drinks for Pam? No word about how Pam's day was? Dumping the food Pam cooked into the trash? The last one made me livid, it was such a clear sign of disrespect that I just don't know... Pam is truly a saint (or she's in such an intense state of denial that it's just unhealthy).
"Fucking Halpert, man. Some guys have all the luck."
I wish that were a prediction of the future!
And I like Pam's thoughts there. The fact that she acknowledged the fact that she thought about Jim more than she should (and that she felt guilty about that, I found that endearing). The fact that Pam haunted Toby for the answers (poor Toby!), just to be on the same page with them.The fact that, despite all her doubts, she was ready to cover Jim up. And, of course, her question about what Jim's friends knew about her.
I'm very curious about the next day's meeting. Thank you!

Author's Response: I also get them--I also still had no sympathy for Roy (obviously). Thank you for the review!

It's a pity that Pam still couldn't articulate her thoughts and feelings, but that's totally understandable. But it's nice that she acknowledged the fact that days with Jim around are better. Another point in the list 'Things I have to reconsider about Jim,' I guess.
'You can tell me anything.'
Oh boy, isn't that a line from 'Drug Testing'?? I wonder if Pam'd seen his face at that moment, what thought they might have provoked?
The fact that she could paint only when Roy is away is a serious warning that something is off, I think. It's okay to have different interests from your SO, but in this case... doing things that you like sneakingly, 'as long as she cleaned up the living room before Roy got home'. Yep, something is definitely off.
I found the theme of the painting endearing, and I hope Pam will find a way to show it.
'And that had to count for something, didn't it?'
I don't know why but it hurts, it hurts very much (maybe, that has to do something with low self-esteem). I hope things will go better for her...

Author's Response: Thank you! That is a line from Drug Testing! I decided I could just move things around since the situation is slightly different anyway because of the moved S9 prank. Thank you for noticing all the little details, as always...it's nice to be read that closely.

It's nice to see that Pam started to think of Roy's imperfections as a part of character instead of little quirks. And it's both great that she was not okay with that and so sad that she was enduring that for quite a long time, trying not to notice.
Another part — her thoughts of Jim and this slow realization that her attitude toward Jim was so much different from the rest of their coworkers. I like that she didn't just jump to the conclusion (this or that) but that this exploration of her thoughts and feelings is gradual.
And also thank you for saving Pam from having a bath with Roy! Spending this time with watercolors was much better for her!

Author's Response: Yeah, the slow exploration is important (though this next episode, Hot Girl, will be some faster exploration...). Thanks for the review!

I thought that only season 3 material could hurt that much. I couldn't be more wrong.
I join Pam in her request to the universe; there was enough punching in the face. And the last hit was just... ugh.
But, to be honest, I was thrilled to see that glimpse of CN, and, even though I knew pretty well how Jim spent his evening, I hoped against hope that he showed up. Oh, well. But Penny was so lovely, and I'm glad that Pam had someone to talk about her troubles. And I'm glad that she was angry, not depressed and defeated. I really hope that this won't allow her to forgive Roy (or, at least, forgive him quickly).
I'm curious if Roy will notice Pam's absence, and if yes — how soon? That's terrible of me, but I hope he'll do something dumb that will simplify making The Decision for Pam...
Thank you!

Author's Response: I mean, I'm sorry to hurt you but glad I could? If that makes sense? I think you will enjoy this next chapter...at least I hope so! Thanks for the review!

There's something in this lovelorn Jim that I find endlessly endearing. 'A Funko Pop of Batman? Reminds him of Dwight, which reminds him of Pam, wham bam thank you ma'am for the heartbreak,' — this part is incredibly bittersweet.
But, I like that even in his 'pining mod' he could enjoy the life, that he wasn't engulfed with his pain completely. And I appreciate his kindness: 'even then he'd prefer Pam and Roy to break up in a way that doesn't make Roy unhappy, just single,' — I'm not sure if I've ever read something similar to this part. So great.
I'm worried a little that Pam might have seen him with Katy — for sure, that would make her sad... but it would add more twists into the plot. So I'll just sit down and will wait patiently for the continuation.
Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I have fun with early heartsick Jim. But I do want him to be a good guy (at least before he's really had his heart totally torn out) so I think the attitude I suggested towards Roy is a good one for him. Hope you like the next chapter!

First of all, awwww! Usually, I read your updates in the morning, but this time I read it before going to bed, and I fell asleep with a big smile on my face. I still read it one more time in the morning, with the same result :)
I can't describe how much I love this pure happiness of the state 'she's single and so am I' and anticipation of something more. Among all the angst I usually read (and write), I meet this rarely, and that makes these feelings so precious.
I love Jim's interactions with Pam so much. Jellybean questions? Awesome! Love that they can communicate that easy (even though Pam still thought that Jim's with Katy now). And Jim's thoughts made me giggle.
Also, (and I can't believe that I write this) but I like Roy here. No sad puppy eyes, no anger and accusations (he saw Jim near Pam's desk after all) — just calmness and quite mature behavior. He and Pam held each other back for sure, and apart they'll be much happier than together.
'Sometimes you just need a new perspective on things,' — so, so true!
Thank you for all these emotions, and I can't wait to see that happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you! Time zones...so crazy. I'm really glad you're enjoying their communication, but I'm even gladder that this Roy worked for you. I think Roy is not actually a bad person, but one who is totally unsuited to the situation with Pam. So hopefully he'll be happy (we will not be following up on this). 

God, this is amazing! I was sad to see that your story is marked as completed, but it couldn't have a better ending!
My favorite part is probably, dinner in Cugino's with Jim admitting his feeling and Pam checking her memories. I'm a sucker for sweetness with a tiny hint of bitterness. And this episode was the one I didn't know I needed. So thank you!
Oh, I love how quickly they signed their papers (poor, poor Toby!). I have no worries that there will be hitches and troubles. They have 'happily ever after' ahead, and that's awesome!
Thank you so much for this journey, I enjoyed it so much! And I selfishly hope that you already have another great idea in mind to turn it into another fantastic story ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and yeah, there's always a bittersweetness to finishing a story. Don't know when I'll have the next inspiration, but thanks for the encouragement :)

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Oh, Pam and Karen were so, so brave and honest, even if their honesty could hurt themselves and other people. And they didn't blame each other, didn't look for excuses and so on... Love it!
Also, it was so lovely that Pam said 'I wish I was a bit like you' to Karen, and Karen called Pam courageous.
And that moment when Pam said she wasn't in love with who Jim had become... wow, I really like that. It feels like a bit like self-respect and... I don't know, a respectful love and not blind admiration. I'm into an idea that Pam and Jim must work out all the issues before having 'happily ever after,' I guess.
I'm full of anticipation about the next chapter. I have a feeling that there might be angry talks and backfiring, and tears... but Pam and Karen are going to be a team, and that means everything will be awesome!

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Awww, such a cute and fluffy ending! I love to see them that happy and careless.
Thank you very much for the amazing story!