yaaaaaaaaaaay. I really loved your second smutt scene very them and real at the same time for any kind of relationship. yaaay I loved this story. 

Author's Response: I must say, I owe Starry Dreamer props for keeping that scene in check...because in its original incarnation, let's just say that it wouldn't have worked.  :o)  Thanks for reviewing!

oh man the ending is awesome. You should make it a series.

I'm invested. Quite curious to see where this goes. 

Author's Response: next chapter is the arrival of Jim at Pam's with flowers and wine and he's met with....

I love how they are under this farce of what they think is maturity by going through these steps, but it looks to be just the opposite from the outside. Like analyzing how it felt different and question each other. It’s all very high school playing at something older. Very sweet. I love it. 

my god I just re-read this whole thing again. Please continue find the inspiration to go on cause I really love this fic. Its just so amazing and well done and god, there's some good gush coming I feel it. And I need it after all the real depressing JAM on the office of late. Pleaseeee update soon. 

wahhhh oh god is this painful. but oh so good. 

oh. my. god. can't even begin to tell you about all the little small spots that got me right up in my throat and behind my lung. Jesus. And I love love love love where you took this chapter. Like I always do when I love a fic I read from the beginning and the last chapter made me think you were going to go in the direction of jim confronting pam some more but instead he went to pams mom. And oh my god that was just all hurt. The section where he realizes she prolly doesnt know anything else was so perfect. I was actually looking through his eyes at her feeling all those things. I could see through his eyes when they watered. Amazing stuff really. And just the two voices of pam. I know those and you got them so perfectley. It being esier to listen to the second voice and all that. Ok I really just wanted to tell you how amazing you are but I tend to ramble. So um YOU'RE AMAZING!

AARRG cliff you and I are enemies!!! Cant wait.

When I really like a fic I go back and read the last chapter. I do that every time you update. 

Author's Response:

I do that too! Thanks so much for the compliment

i am mush. your writing has just made me a happy sigh.

"damn" that was me when I saw no next button at the bottom of the page. I've just read this whole fanfic and I'm so surprised I didn’t see it before. You're brilliant by the way. The story basis is pretty basic to say the least but your in-depth look at palms psychology and Jim’s astonishes of the moment is amazing. I think my favorite thing about this fic is your portrayal of Pam’s father, which explains so much about Pam. Not only that but its not at all a flat character. Its whole and real and I can really see it. Its almost like you have managed to successfully show the other "Daughters father" or like you say the father of a "mother's daughter" I'm so impressed. Really really update soon please. 

Author's Response: thank you so much for your review.  I'm glad you're enjoying my take on such a stereotypical scenerio ;-)  I try to update every day or at the most every two days.  Let me know how you like the rest!

Why in the world do you have only three reviews this fic is awesome. Your writing is perfectly styled for Jim and Pam. It’s heartbreaking really. I love the basketball chapter. I love this chapter. I love all the chapters. Well done. Just like I like em'.