Reviewer: sakuod Signed
Date: April 21, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--To Recreate Us
I am really enjoying this so far, although I really hope that Pam is just hurt and not paralyzed from the fall. Also, despite the fact that Pam was injured I must admit I laughed out loud when you described Michael first being on the gurney and then throwing up...very Michael like. Please update soon and try not to be too brutal with Pam's prognosis.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. For the record, I know a kid who did this--was around an accident, felt nauseated from looking at it, and hopped on the gurney meant for the critically injured person! He even asked if he could share a ride to the ER to be looked at. Frustrating kid, that one.
Re: Pam--what, do you not trust me to be kind to her? :-D