Penname: bitterpill Real name: Jennifer
Member Since: July 14, 2006

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Jackpot by xoxoxo Rated: M [Reviews - 48] 15
Summary:

Jim, Pam and a weekend in New York - set in the fluffy future.  Not a spoiler in sight.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Travel, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4947 Read Count: 15307 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2007 Updated: April 29, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Saturday in the Park with Jim

So sweet and lovely.  Looking forward to more!!!

Author's Response: So sweet of you to say!  More soon!

Paper Jam by Morning Angel Rated: K+ [Reviews - 14] 6
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim would have never believed that a copier could be a catalyst for a major life change.  Nevertheless, it seemed oddly appropriate given his line of work. Spoiler free.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2090 Read Count: 4726 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2007 Updated: April 28, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As someone who is always asked to find the paper jams of the copiers at work, I can completely relate!!!  Of course, if it were Jim that needed help, I wouldn't roll my eyes and curse people under my breath:)

Fantastic premise and wonderful execution!  Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)   I agree that if Jim were to ask me to look at the copier for him, I'd be more than happy to do it...  It must suck to be the one to deal with jams for everyone in the office!  I only have to deal with my own jams and what annoys me most is that the copier won't stop beeping and flashing.  I know you're not working, stupid copier!  Just give me a second!  Hee.

Summary: Based on the episode description and a couple promo pics for 3x23. So spoilers ahoy! Just how I'd like things to play out which means it won't happen this way at all.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1214 Read Count: 3279 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2007 Updated: April 29, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so how I want to see it on the show....which means, of course, it won't happen.  Lovely imagery, as always, and perfectly them.  Loved it.

Summary: Past Featured StorySummer picnics, maps, rain...things change year to year. (No spoilers.)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3974 Read Count: 24286 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2007 Updated: May 04, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Summer Picnic 2007

Where to begin?  Well, so happy to see something new from you.  And this is all just gorgeous.  Wonderful job of making my heart ache and then jump out of my chest.  Excellent, as always.  And the rain in this chapter, and the peeling off of clothes.....GUH.  Loved it.

Author's Response: First, I apologize for any damage to your heart...second, thanks so much for this generous review. Gorgeous? Wow. And speaking of GUH and peeling off clothes...can I cross my fingers for a bitterpill update soon? 

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Summer Picnic 2008

Steamy fun with Jim Halpert IS the best kind of picnic.  This was so much fun and so very needed.  Another favorite!



Author's Response: Seriously, what red blooded girl wouldn't want to go on a 'picnic' with that boy. And hooray for being a favorite! Thanks, bitterpill.

My Soul To Keep by xoxoxo Rated: M [Reviews - 23] 6
Summary: Pam sleeps, perchance she dreams.  A series of three nocturnal musings of one Ms. Pamela Beesly.  Absolutely spoiler-free.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3006 Read Count: 7747 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2007 Updated: May 09, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Before

Wonderful premise and you have me desperate for more.  Can't wait to see what she says to Jim!! 



Author's Response:

Hmmm.  You might not see what she says....but I promise you'll see the results.  Sound good?

Thanks so much for the review.  Stay tuned!

Summary: Past Featured Story

She had to finish this conversation now that she’d started it. Pam finally speaks up. No spoilers; takes place sometime after Product Recall, season 3.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1022 Read Count: 3656 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2007 Updated: May 03, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful story.  I loved Pam pushing until Jim couldn't fight her anymore.  That last line says it all:)  Great job.



Author's Response: Thank you! Pam put up with Roy for ten years- she's not weak, she's just got to be convinced to use her strength. Courage, Pam! Thanks, again.

Labeled Boxes by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 7] 2
Summary: Just a little bit of plotless future married fluff. Their first house together is a yellow split level with green shutters and aluminum siding.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Inner Monologue, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1091 Read Count: 3466 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2007 Updated: May 03, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sweet!  Does the heart good to see them happy and in their new home.  Just what I needed on this Friday afternoon.  Well done, as usual.

Stolen by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 169] 62
Summary:

Inspired by the finale and the seasons that preceeded it.  Enough said.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21030 Read Count: 69197 ePub Downloads: 26
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: We watch the season pull up its own stake

This?  Perfect.  You captured the emotions so beautifully.  Lovely work, as usual.

Author's Response:

Your reviews are always so flattering because I'm always totally in agreement with your posts on TWoP (and the newly minted paragon of awesomeness, the Annex). 

Thanks so much for your posts - and the review!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost finale Jim/Pam. That's all I can say without spoiling people.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 914 Read Count: 5194 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2007 Updated: May 17, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy

It has been a long year.  Perfect last line.  This was sweet and lovely.  Wonderful job!

Summary: Past Featured StoryDrabbleish thing set after the finale. Like, right after. Pure fluffiness.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 660 Read Count: 3884 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2007 Updated: May 18, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really loved this.  Perfect scenario.  Last line was perfect and so true!

Summary: Past Featured StoryShe can’t help but feel like it’s a good sign; a step in the right direction. Set post-The Job.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2275 Read Count: 5173 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2007 Updated: May 21, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this so much.  Wonderful date at Burger King...so cute!!!  Great final scene.  Very them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

I don’t get to kiss you again until our second date, which is three weeks after our first date, which is a year and a half after our other first date.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1172 Read Count: 7970 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2007 Updated: May 25, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really beautiful and a nice look into Jim's mind.  Really well done.

Smile by invis Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 5
Summary:

This oneshot is based on a prompt at TWoP to write a fic based on a screen shot from Gay Witch Hunt showing that Jim has a note stuck to his monitor reading, "Smile!" This is what I imagine he was thinking when he looked at it. Oh, so, spoilers for Gay Witch Hunt, sort of.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 702 Read Count: 3098 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2007 Updated: May 26, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: from the inside out

Wonderful job of showing what Jim must have been going through in Stamford.  I really enjoyed this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it.  :)

Summary: Post "the Job" first date fic. Somehow on their first date, once they get past all the catching up and the explanations and apologies and confessions, they start talking about sex.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2755 Read Count: 10904 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2007 Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: cause even slurred words can contain some truth

You broke my brain with this.  Thank you!

Summary: You know, this would not happen if we had a union. A season two a/u.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Pam, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11941 Read Count: 32885 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2007 Updated: June 20, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am really enjoying this and love how you have incorporated moments we've seen on the show into something so completely different.  So well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

My heart was in my throat during the roof scene.  So powerful.  You just about killed me.  But in a good way.

Author's Response:

Thanks. :) 

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very few things have ever made me giddy at work.  This is definitely one of them.  Just perfect with Pam driving his car and trying not to look at him, and Jim taking her seatbelt off.  So lovely.

Summary: A first date, and a second chance for two people who never got much of a first chance.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13580 Read Count: 30828 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2007 Updated: July 16, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hey, It's Good To Be Back Home Again

Wonderful job!  I'm really enjoying this and think you have the character voices down.  Looking forward to the date!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind compliments.   I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm having a great time writing it.  The date is coming right up!  :-)
 

Thanks for reading!

Summary: Even when he's got the girl, sometimes Jim finds himself being laughed at by the Fates....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11069 Read Count: 24097 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2007 Updated: June 25, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Autumn DM Employee Appreciation Night

Really fun story.  You capture the sweet (and the saucy) so well.  Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

I'm happy you are enjoying it - I enjoy writing trying-to-hard!Jim.  And imagine Pam's reaction when she hears about all the missed opportunities!  

Thanks for reading and reviewing - I really appreciate it. 

Summary: Past Featured StoryA collection of loosely-related moments (more like a bunch of one shots than a WIP. So jump in and out as you like.) Unapologetic smuff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5010 Read Count: 23790 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2007 Updated: February 02, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Donuts

A very good day, indeed.  You just about killed me(in the best possible way, of course).  So thrilled to see something new from you, and looking forward to more.  These first two have left me satisfied and smiling:)



Author's Response: Happy to hear it's working for you, LOL. Will try to provide more S&S by tomorrow. I hope you don't mind if it involves more scantily clad Jim? Thanks, as always,  bitterpill!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Things That Go Bump in the Night

This lovely glimpse was a joy to read at work and to re-read now.  You have the banter, the love, and the intimacy we want for them.  And throwing in the mental image of Jim in his underwear is that tasty icing on the cake.  Thank you!



Author's Response: So happy to hear those elements come across to you - exactly what I hoped. These little glimpses are fun to write - especially when they involve thinking about Jim in his undies. (Yes, I am that deep.) And let me take this opportunity to be an annoying nudge - hoping to see something here from you soon too! Thanks much, bitterpill!

Summary:

The conversation on the doorstep after Jim and Pam's first date.  Jim starts it off.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 6515 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nicely done.  So sweet.

Summary:

Pam asks a question, Jim answers. For the 55 challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 3516 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Don't forget us when you're famous

So sweet.  Wonderful job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Two moments when Pam and Jim get together. Written in response to the 55 word challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121 Read Count: 5737 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: June 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

'You. Me. Us.'  That certainly sums it up nicely.  And in the end, it was simple....just wish it didn't take a whole other season to get there! Oh, well.  Lovely work, as always.



Author's Response: You know what they say...less is more. And I hear you about it taking so excruciatingly long (hey, Greg Daniels: sometimes less pain is more!) Seriously, thank you so much for the lovely review, as always, bitterpill!