Penname: bitterpill Real name: Jennifer
Member Since: July 14, 2006

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Inside Jokes by Talkative Rated: MA [Reviews - 127] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryA golf pencil, two hot sauce packets, a Boggle timer, a mixtape, a high school yearbook photo, a card, and a teapot. Yup.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15300 Read Count: 37730 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2008 Updated: October 22, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: 180

Lovely work.  You take such good care of these characters and give them all of the depth, emotion, and heart we know and love.  Looking forward to your next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill. The next chapter\'s going to be quite different from this one. Like I said, it\'s going to earn the \'M\' that I\'ve assigned to this. Hope you\'ll like that, too.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Nes Gadol Haya Sham

Gorgeous.  And a nice Jim insight.  Loved the ending, which was executed perfectly. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I\'m glad you liked it.

Five Times Pam Kissed Jim Before He Was Hers to Kiss by PuffingNoise Rated: T [Reviews - 9] 11
Summary: Past Featured StoryTakes place in season 2. Slightly OT. I always wondered what kind of moments Pam and Jim shared that the cameras didn't catch.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1158 Read Count: 12065 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2008 Updated: September 17, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see you back!  You are not rusty at all!  This flows beautifully and has very sweet moments that made me smile.  Thanks for this:)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! :o)

The Things You Do Not Know by Little Comment Rated: T [Reviews - 19] 13
Summary: "There are still things about me you don't know." An uncharacteristically fluffy - but I hope still meaningful - one-shot.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3485 Read Count: 3900 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2008 Updated: September 17, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: There are things about me you don't know.

This is really beautiful writing.  I love the way they mirror each other, but still have their distinct voices.  You've done another wonderful service to this fic archive. 

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. It\'s always tough for me to make sure that I keep Jim and Pam\'s voices similar, but distinct. I\'m so glad you enjoyed this. :)

Practice by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 13] 8
Summary: All you know is that she is yours now, forever, finally, and you aren’t kissing her at all like you practiced. Set in the possibly near future for Jim and Pam. General S5 spoilers.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 666 Read Count: 3370 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 13, 2008 Updated: October 13, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gorgeous writing, as always.  This scene is so vivid and so something I could see happening.  Their happiness really comes to life and put a smile on my face.  Thanks, as always, for being so good to these characters.

Casiotone for the Painfully Alone by Sea Legs Rated: T [Reviews - 4] 4
Summary: Set after Casino Night. Pam made her choice. The only thing Jim can do is try to deal with it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1238 Read Count: 2174 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2008 Updated: October 22, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Casiotone for the Painfully Alone

Excellent job!  Very sweet and sad and a wonderful ending.  Looking forward to more of your work.



Author's Response: I *am* planning to write more Jim/Pam because they\'re my OTP now. Thanks for reviewing and I\'m glad you liked it.

This is how it works by Paper Jam Rated: K+ [Reviews - 8] 7
Summary: Michael misses Holly and Dwight comes by to offer a little (tech) support.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Dwight, Holly, Michael
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1028 Read Count: 1246 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: November 12, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: laugh until you cry, cry until you laugh

Always nice to see something new from you.  First of all, love Regina Spektor!  Secondly, this is very sweet and very sad and you really capture the voices quite well.  Lovely work.

Author's Response: I know, it has been a long time. It's nice to write something again. My muse has been absent for a while. Thank you for taking the time to comment, bitterpill

Conversations with Other People's Exes by Steph Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 9
Summary: If he was being completely honest, he didn’t mind either of their phone calls. It was nice having phone friends.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Holly, Karen, Toby
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4650 Read Count: 2132 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2009 Updated: January 05, 2009
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very original and refreshing.  Nice insight and a really fun read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Spaces Apart from the World by yanana Rated: M [Reviews - 21] 21
Summary: Past Featured StoryA saga post-season two.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15385 Read Count: 4768 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2009 Updated: January 05, 2009
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Achingly good.  What an emotional rollercoaster this was.  Well worth the ride.  Great insight and just captivating from beginning to end.  Kudos.



Author's Response: Thank you! =)

Four Times Jim Keeps His Hands In His Pockets (And One Time He Didn't) by vicodinfm Rated: MA [Reviews - 21] 23
Summary: Ever notice how Jim always keeps his hands in his pockets? That's no accident.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1704 Read Count: 6060 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2009 Updated: October 21, 2009
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are very talented.  This was a real treat.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that! It means alot coming from the more established writer's on this site, so thank you so much for the encouragement :)