Penname: invis Real name: April
Member Since: March 26, 2007

Bio:

I thought I was just here to read, but I guess I ended up writing a little. My bad. :)

I'm switching to Yes on beta-reader, because I should have more time now that I've finished my own recent story and I'll probably take a break from writing. I don't know how many requests will come from that, so I reserve the right to change back to No if I get overwhelmed. :) But I am an unrepentant grammar Nazi, and have edited a LOT in the past, so I'm totally up for a little beta.


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Between and Underneath the Words by Recorderalways Rated: T [Reviews - 75] 42
Summary: This is another alternate ending story from season three, beginning just before Phyllis' Wedding and ending at Business School.

Many thanks to Beeswax for her advice and encouragement.

I still own nothing, not The Office, not Jim and Pam, and nothing affiliated with TV or Scranton. I am, however, getting a new laptop for Christmas, which is why I'm purging this one of this story before the holiday. On that happy note, thanks for reading!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12537 Read Count: 57809 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2007 Updated: December 12, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed 9
Date: December 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue- Love

This was the perfect statement from Jim:

I believe she is inspired to begin painting from her heart. And from mine.

Just what Mrs. Beesly would want to know, without going into too much detail too soon.

I simply enjoyed the heck out of this story. Well done! 



Author's Response: I thought that was very Jim-like too, invis. ;) As you said, gave the information Mrs. Beesly (and the readers) would want to know without giving away too much. And it was succinct, which men so often are. ;) \r\n\r\nWow, your kind and encouraging words have truly meant so much to me through this process. Thank you so very much.

Creative Advertisement by LoveFool Rated: K+ [Reviews - 16] 5
Summary: Spoilers Through Local Ad. Michael has a few ideas about Jim and Pam's contribution to the Dunder-Mifflin Scranton commercial.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 716 Read Count: 4307 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2007 Updated: December 09, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Creative Advertisement

Suh-weet. I am so giggling like Kevin right now.

Muted Reflection by unfold Rated: T [Reviews - 31] 18
Summary: This isn't the sort of thing you plan. AU season two. 
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2924 Read Count: 6838 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2007 Updated: December 15, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed 10
Date: December 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, fabulous. Really, really great. I adore Pam being a real person--being a brave and stupid person. This line to herself in the mirror said it all:

“I want to fuck up completely.”

I think everyone can relate to that feeling--or at least those of us who are like Pam. :)

I sincerely enjoyed this story. Very well written. Thank you! 

Andy Bernard Pays His Rent by Team Karen Rated: MA [Reviews - 6] 3
Summary: When you're leasing from a dominatrix, paying the rent takes on a whole new meaning. Firm discipline never felt so good.
Categories: Other
Characters: Andy, Karen
Genres: In Stamford, Slash, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1910 Read Count: 2160 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2007 Updated: December 13, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Mistress Lila.

Whoa. No wonder Andy's such an odd guy. ;)

Are you going to let Al Roker tell you what to do? by ExtremelyGruntled Rated: K [Reviews - 31] 11
Summary:

A Christmas party, a blizzard, mistletoe, and five gallons of spiked egg nog.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5923 Read Count: 19870 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2007 Updated: January 30, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You can't cancel Christmas

Excellent characterization. I could easily hear all of them speaking your lines. Nice job! I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: invis Signed 10
Date: December 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Some of us have a party to get ready for

LOL @ Dwight's talking head! Running over Mose with the backhoe!

Michael's TH was awesome, too. You're excellent with the characters' voices.

And, of course: OMG I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT JIM'S LETTER SAID UPDATE RIGHT NOW OMGOMGOMGOMG! 

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: No, because that would be kidnapping

Ha ha ha ha ha! Yeah, you know, I also think Toby might have a thing for Pam.

I must tell you, though, that you have killed me by not letting us see what was in the card. I'm dead now. I'm typing this from the afterlife. The connection time is reeeeeally slow here, too. 

What Could Have Been (But It's Really Better That It Wasn't) by bebitched Rated: T [Reviews - 10] 6
Summary: Four times Jim and Pam could have gotten together and the one time that they did. This fic is based on the principle that if you miss an opportunity, there's a very good reason i.e. it would have been worse than the hand you're actually dealt. Basically, this is why the first four are angsty and the last one is fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Holiday, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1652 Read Count: 2665 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2007 Updated: December 15, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed 9
Date: December 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, first of all: #3? YES. THANK YOU! That is exactly why it shouldn't have happened that way. 

I love all the scenarios, and the one where they did get together was perfect. Pam proposing to Jim is fabulous. Fabulous, I say!

Really excellent work with this. I loved it. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought about it for a long time and, you know? Pam without the "fancy new" tacked on the the front would just be a disaster.

Spiked Punch and First Moves by bitterpill Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 13
Summary: Pam's first Christmas party at Dunder Mifflin was a lot of fun.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 623 Read Count: 3249 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2007 Updated: December 15, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Spiked Punch and First Moves

Ohhh. So happy.

Tidings of Comfort and Joy by time4moxie Rated: K [Reviews - 26] 7
Summary: Christmas traditions mean even more when you share them with the one you love. A little Jim Halpert /Pam Beesly holiday fluff cuteness fest, heavy on the fluff. :-)

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1877 Read Count: 3702 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Mele Kalikimaka

Aww! I love the fluff. Fluff is the best thing since sap. ;)

Author's Response: Fluff is slightly less sticky than sap, too.  :-)  Thanks for the review, invis!

Acting On Impulse by deerinthepark Rated: M [Reviews - 130] 45
Summary: Pam gets the nerve to call Jim after she breaks off the wedding, and gets invited along on an impromptu road trip across the country.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25535 Read Count: 66434 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2007 Updated: February 25, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Taking A Chance

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so excited about this story. Great start!



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm excited you're excited!

Get Me Away From Here, I'm Dying by sillyrabbit519 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 8] 7
Summary:

Karen knew she was in bad shape when Toby sat down next to her.

 Karen's last day in Scranton.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1950 Read Count: 2287 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2007 Updated: December 22, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: December 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed that. I never wanted to see Karen get hurt, either; I just wanted her not with Jim. She could've been such a great character, but she was grossly underutilized.

Well, anyway, excellent work on this. It made me really like Karen. And Toby, too. Poor Toby. 

Rip Her to Shreds by thesmiths Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 6
Summary: When they fought, they fought.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 783 Read Count: 2475 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw! Sniff. That was great. Painful, but great. Excellent job.


Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods by LoveFool Rated: K [Reviews - 41] 20
Summary: Jim and Pam are engaged. The office reacts.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1916 Read Count: 5635 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed 9
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods

Excellent. Perfectly in character, great dialogue, funny as hell. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!!!

Providence by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 6
Summary: Cheesecake and conversation as Jim and Pam make the most of a business trip getaway.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3003 Read Count: 3537 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed 9
Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

Oh, man. For future reference, always end with the cheesecake; I almost couldn't concentrate on the rest of the story due to thinking about all the mind-blowingly delicious varieties of cheesecake. Oh, God, the lemon raspberry cream cheesecake! I don't even know if I can sleep tonight. I'll be tossing and turning all night, thinking about that stuff!

But, um, I mean, awesome story. :) 

Nearing the Edge by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 395] 151
Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291679 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh! Painful! I'm so glad I didn't read this chapter until the next one was already up, because if I had to stop reading now I'd be too sad to sleep. Angstapalooza, why dontcha? ;)


Author's Response:

Yeah, yeah...I know.  I'm a total angst whore; I can't help myself!  It all happened so fast!  [/Pam]  :o)

I will say this: I'm committed to taking this story past the resolution, to spending a few chapters (knowing me, probably more, LOL) exploring the fluff and the steam and the wonder that is the two of them together...finally.  :o)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aw. Poor Jim. I want to buy him a puppy.


Author's Response:

Hee -- don't we all??  (Actually, I think for much of the fandom, the need to comfort him might manifest itself in other ways....)  ;D

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: invis Signed 9
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

SQUEE! So, next Pam wakes up because she "hears a noise" and is scared and needs Jim to sleep with her, right? Right?

Oh, okay, I guess I can let you do whatever you want, since the story is fabulous so far. I trust you. (But I'm telling ya: ooh, scary noise!) 



Author's Response: Heh -- all in due time, my friend.  :o) (Love the scary noise idea!  Or sleepwalking, maybe....)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: invis Signed 10
Date: March 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow. You actually made me want her to stay with Roy for a minute there! I've never seen a Pam/Roy breakup written so believably before. Usually Roy is angry, but we never get to see him upset at the relationship ending, which is so much more authentic. 

Excellent job. Now I need to see more Pam & Jim together so I can be happy again! :) 



Author's Response:

Wow -- I really appreciate your comments!  I'm so glad you found Roy's reaction believable.  I've always written him as immediately angry when she breaks up with him, then sort of slowly winding down to being upset, so writing him like this felt...I don't know, unusual to me.  I worried that I was trying to get through the scene too fast or something -- so it's doubly nice to read your kind words about it.  :o)

And more happy Jim & Pam together is on its way -- promise!  :o)

Thanks for reviewing!

Wednesday's Child by hanakinstarbuck Rated: K+ [Reviews - 8] 1
Summary: After Ryan dumps Kelly and heads for New York, she discovers something that will change both of their lives forever. Set a month or so after "The Job".
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Kelly, Ryan, Ryan/Kelly, Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5107 Read Count: 12936 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Getting pretty interesting! I hope you update soon. :)

ground floor by kells8995 Rated: K [Reviews - 21] 11
Summary: There were two alternate endings filmed for The Job, and I remember reading GD mentioning what the alternate ending was somewhere. So, this is my take on it. Also, it's sort of a look into what Pam was thinking throughout that day when she didn't think Jim was going to come back.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 Read Count: 3885 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2008 Updated: March 08, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: ground floor

Fantastic. I just adored it.


Author's Response: Thanks, invis!  So glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing :) - K

Up in Jim's Room by wendolf Rated: MA [Reviews - 193] 89
Summary: Past Featured StoryMEMBER'S CHOICE - Katy and Jim are still dating during Jim’s “Email Surveillance” BBQ. When Pam sees them together it lights a fire under her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18424 Read Count: 132968 ePub Downloads: 40
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed 9
Date: March 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yes! That is exactly what should've happened.

Reviewer: invis Signed 10
Date: March 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay yay yay!!!

Reviewer: invis Signed 9
Date: March 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

ajskdl;fj;sldkjf!

Thank God!

That was fantastic. So happy! 



Author's Response: Don\'t know what this means: ajskdl;fj;sldkjf! Did your brain computer just go Pffft? Anyway, so glad you liked it. Thanks for your review! (sorry my responses are so slow...)

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: March 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

SQUEE! I loved this story from beginning to end. Great job! You made everything believable and plausible, and I just loved it.


Author's Response: Thanks invis! Glad you liked it. I really appreciate your review!