Penname: mrssarav Real name: Sara
Member Since: May 10, 2007

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Revelations by shan21 Rated: T [Reviews - 70] 24
Summary: This started out as a one-shot called "Just." I decided to make it a series of surprises instead. Chapter 3: A dozen revelations that Jim doesn’t have, and one that Pam does.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam, Karen, Toby
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9174 Read Count: 13892 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2007 Updated: February 22, 2007
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: November 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Tempest in a Teapot

I love the focus on the trash, and how Pam's (smaller trash) covers Karen's but gets covered by Jim. What a great analogy! Also, the element of bringing the teapot (JIMPOT!Love!) and the note back. i love how he gets angry at her for reading it. Very justifiable! 

Summary:

A shockingly accurate post-cocktails fic written during the hainous. Jim rebuffs Pam's apologies and while distraught at the grocery store she meets a handsome stranger who catches Karen's eye too.

EPILOGUE ADDED :) STORY FINISHED! I had to change it to Explicit Sexual Content so avoid the epilogue if that isn't really your thing.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Karen, Other
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Moderate sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15365 Read Count: 50681 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2007 Updated: May 16, 2007
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: May 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Revelations without Resolutions

EXCELLENT!

Do good reviews come with our very own Jackson? I might take him over Jim rightn ow. Good job! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Member's Choice - “My father died, so I’ll need a few days.” She explained in an unaffected sounding voice that surprised even herself. The three other parties in the room were stunned into silence. Jim spoke first. “Jesus, Pam…” She stood with her back to him and addressed Michael as if Jim had not made a sound…as if Jim did not exist. It was the only way.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40335 Read Count: 157572 ePub Downloads: 42
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2007 Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Fathers and Daughters. Women and Men.

terrific. thank you for taking this in a more angsty direction than the standard fic. that took guts, and i believe it was well done! Keep up the good work!


Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm a drama queen at heart so I just can't help myself ;-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A post-Beach Games fic.  Some glimpses of what might've happened after the cameras stopped rolling (not that enough didn't happen while they were rolling...). 

Spoilers through Beach Games.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10963 Read Count: 48656 ePub Downloads: 16
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2007 Updated: May 16, 2007
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: May 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I believe I can see the future....

THANK YOU! 

Excellent. keep up the great work, and i can't wait to see the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Oh wow - you are so welcome!  Thank YOU for reviewing, and for your enthusiasm!

I'm working on the next chapter as we speak....

Summary:

Jim's first barbeque was a success and so he decides to have another. Someone breaks into the liquor cabinet and things... take interesting turns.

Jim/Pam smut with a pretty hefty (for me) plot, but LOTS OF DRINKING! Which is always fun.

FINISHED!!!


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Mark, Other, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7745 Read Count: 30765 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2007 Updated: May 25, 2007
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: you've got to rise above the rest

First and foremost, i do believe that a SEQUEL is in order! 

Secondly, you did such a good job of capturing pam and jim. Seriously, great.  

Summary:

What if Pam had been much stronger - bolder - throughout season three? AU because I'm not following much of the S3 storyline, but that's when this is basically taking place. Some spoilers (S3).


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kevin, Oscar, Oscar/Gil, Other, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Angst, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12857 Read Count: 73286 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2007 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: With Every Word You're Growing Distant

I really am enjoying the premise of this series. Do you happen to have a Beta? If not, i'd like to volunteer. 



Author's Response: I use one off and on, but with this story I have a plan of where I wanted it to go so I have not been using one (not to mention how busy my regular beta is). If you're interested for further chapters on this story (I really only anticipate two or three more) or on other stories I post, please feel free to e-mail me! geeknthpnk @ hotmail.com

Earlier... by Shassafrass Rated: MA [Reviews - 84] 36
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Jim had finally been stretched to the breaking point before Casino Night?
Categories: Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7281 Read Count: 49171 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2007 Updated: November 17, 2007
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: November 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: 10:45 PM

"I catch my own weary eye in the mirror and promise my suspicious reflection that I will devote myself to her and her happiness every day for the rest of my life."

 

GUH.

This was awesome. This line may be the most perfect ever written.  



Author's Response: Jeezuss, that's high praise! Thanks!!!

Breathing Out by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 51] 36
Summary: This picks up at "Money" and is my take on the seeming epiphany that Jim had while in the stairwell with Dwight, leading to him kissing Pam in front of the entire office.  Includes flashbacks to "Conflict Resolution" and "The Job."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Inner Monologue, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20810 Read Count: 39199 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2008
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Breathe in, breathe out tell me all of your doubt and everybody bleeds this way just the same

YOU CAME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!

You were missed, greatly!

I've been hoping someone would take the cue from Money and write something so (beautifully) angst-y - Thank you for taking the time to fill in the gaps - you have such an excellent handle on the characters' voices & situations that it's really difficult to not think it canon! 

I can't wait to read where you take this story. Thank you, again!  



Author's Response:

Oh wow -- thank you!  :o) Believe me, I missed writing; I had such a great time writing Climbing As We Fall that I was sad to see it end.  But when this episode aired, I just knew immediately I'd have to write about it, try to figure out what was going on in Jim's head -- because it seemed like such a major moment for him. 

So glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate your review!

Summary: Post-Finer Things, Pam reminds Jim what's really important.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 936 Read Count: 4677 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: November 04, 2007
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BEST. WAY. TO. ASK. THAT. QUESTION. 

EVER. 

You win. Great job!

This is an excellent look at a (totally believable) Jim being threatened by Toby. Thank you for throwing that dynamic in the mix!  



Author's Response: I win? YAY! ;) I really think the Jim jealousy of Toby will be played up a bit this year... I can't wait to see that little chat! ha ha!

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291374 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Did you hear that? That was the sound of all pretenses of work halting because a new chapter went up on Nearing the Edge! 

Your imagery is astounding. Thank you for continuing to torture our poor little Pam and Jim. You always make it well worth the payoff in the end!  



Author's Response:

Listen, sister, don't talk to me about work screeching to a halt -- I've got a honking huge stack of essays to grade, yet here I sit... :o) 

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter -- and you'll perhaps be happy to know that there's more torture to come...at least for a little while.  :o)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: February 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am really enjoying this so far - plus, hey, another brother for Jim!!!! I always love the way you write jonathan, and i'm kind of excited to see what Josh will morph into. 

Great job!!!  



Author's Response:

Heh -- I'm sort of greedy with the wanting to include another hot brother for Jim. :o) I blame Zachery Levi entirely.  :o)  Glad you like Jonathan, as he's so much fun to write -- I hope you'll like Josh, too!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

YES!

I love the way you write Roy/Jim dialogue. Also, the running commentary courtesy of Jim is ACES. 

Thank you for reminding us that Jim is sullen and dejected - it seems like we always see him so happy-go-lucky that it's easy to mentally picture a happy Jim instead of the tortured one you present us with (which, of course, this story wouldn't work without!)  It's a nice way to remind your readers to shift gears, and much appreciated!

Again, Thank You for the POV you bring to the fandom.  It is truly a richer place due to your efforts. 



Author's Response:

Wow, what a thoughtful review -- seriously.  I'm really glad you like the depiction of Jim here, because really, I think he'd have been absolutely miserable if he'd had to continue working with Pam post-confession.  (Not that he wasn't miserable in Stamford, but....)  And I have to admit, I really had hoped we'd see a more tortured Jim at least at the beginning of last season.  I understand why we didn't, though (as moping isn't exactly tantamount to comedy gold).  :o)

As for the last bit of your review -- WOW.  Thank you so much; that's just an incredible thing to read, seriously.  Thanks again for the thoughtful review!

Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Mistress O' the Angst- 

Your Pam is absolutely spot on. There's no way she would have been able to process everything and jump right into bed with Jim. Even if his forearms were exposed :).

It's absolutely true that couples who are together for so long can easily become oblivious to each other's (and their own) needs after a time.  It can be very frightening when a new person comes along to shed some light on those needs. Knowing this makes it very easy to understand how Pam would freak, which makes this chapter seem way more canon than seems possible.

So Thanks, again, for making this as believable as you have, and also thanks to Starry Dreamer for twisting your story into steamy directions :)  

More angst, please! :)  



Author's Response:

Your salutation ("Mistress O'the Angst") made me laugh right out loud.  :o) And your comments just made me smile so wide because I always second guess myself when I write Pam as freaking out or being over emotional.  I do think she's a crier (we've seen that happen enough times on the show), but as for how she'd handle a sudden declaration & kiss from Jim...well, as you know, we weren't privvy to that post-CN. 

I agree with what you said, though: When you're with someone for such a long time (much less planning a life together), it'd have to be jarring to suddenly have all that thrown into uncertainty. I don't think Pam would be capable of acting on her feelings for Jim in a real way (other than giving in to the attraction, then pushing him away); I think she'd need to sort of simmer for a while before she could make a move.

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review!

Cordially,

Mistress O'the Angst.  :O)

Breakdown by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 131] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37702 Read Count: 96809 ePub Downloads: 59
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2008
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Accelerando

"He said he'd had a crush on Pam when he used to work there. Just a crush, he said, and it didn't even go anywhere. But Karen had lived through crushes before, and she knew that once they were over (like he claimed his was) – life goes on. You can joke about it, sometimes even with the object of your previous desire. But Jim didn't do that. He didn't like to talk about Pam, even in a joking manner."

This sentence blew me away. It's scuh amazing insight into this relationship. 

I'm also really enjoying the way you've been using the JAM dynamic in these situations. As much as I love tortured/angst JAM, it's just as good when they are classically THEM. 

Thank you for writing this!!!  

Summary: That’s when she realizes he’s gotten too far ahead and she’s still dragging behind, out of breath as she tries to catch up.

Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1723 Read Count: 2786 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2008
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: April 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank god, someone found some FUTURE ANGST! 

 

I love it. Please continue!  

Summary:

Jim wasn't too thrilled about tonight. Pam wasn't too happy either. Finale spoiler if you haven't watched it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1699 Read Count: 4641 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2008 Updated: May 15, 2008
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed
Date: May 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tylenol solves aching Grief bones, as well as alcohol, and a lot of it. 

You took an episode that wasn't my favourite and put tears in my eyes. This is a really exquisite piece, and it looks like one of the best to come out of the finale.

Great job, and thank you very much for writing this out!!!  

Summary: Ever notice how Jim always keeps his hands in his pockets? That's no accident.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1704 Read Count: 6069 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2009 Updated: October 21, 2009
Reviewer: mrssarav Signed 10
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a sweet ending to such a delicious story. great job!