Cecelia is just shy of five months old when your brain finally makes the connection. ... Jim and Pam have another little accident. (now complete) 
10 Thank's for the update - it's so great to see Jim caring for his family and hear his inner thinking, wonderful job with that. I'm really excited to see this the rest of this story play out, it's one thing to have a Jam and their baby story, but it's entirely another to have them trying to prepare for another one, while Cecilia is still just a little baby. I know this happens to people in real life all the time, but I'm glad you decided to bring this to MTT where the idea is original.
Take your time posting, I frankly don't care if it takes three months (well, yeah, I'd miss the story) as long as you continue to give us such solid, well written chapters. So thanks for that! And let me know if you'd ever like a beta, I'm more than happy to help! I believe you can find my email on my bio page.
Author's Response: Thank you! And honestly, I'm excited to see the rest of this play out, too, because at the moment, I don't have a really solid direction. ha. :\ So we'll see. As for beta-ing, I have one beta, but I don't think a second could ever hurt because I want this thing to be as good as it possibly can be. I also might need someone to bounce some ideas off of, seeing as I don't have an actual plan.
Anyway, thanks so much for the comment :)
10 Oh my goodness. This is just priceless and so dang perfect! That was, oh wow, I have no idea how to put to words (just like Pam) the incredible feat you've completed here. All the emotions, all the dialog and all the descriptions were just flawless and they flowed together beautifully. Since I'm unable to give you anything higher than a ten (quite unfortunately) I will be bookmarking this page as this story is probably the best I've ever read. It has all the things I love, Jim and Pam together, with a cute baby, great dialog and description, the writing and topic sound realistic and all of that is even better when an author writes something about a brand new topic. Congrats, this was the greatest thing I think I've ever read!
10 Wow - wow, wow. How can this be your first story ever??? It's just too amazing and perfect and interesting. Lovely!
I sincerely hope that you continue this, as it's such an exciting story with a ton of potential and directions you can choose to use. Also, (and I'm kind of blushing as I write this, hehe) I'd just love to hear your interpretation of Jim's reaction (which will hopefully be really excited and loving - he can worry later!) when you've definitely shown that you can write description beautifully!
Alright, sorry for all those long, odd sentences, but I hope that you'll continue this. I'm really excited now!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :) This was such a nice comment. Hopefully you like the second part.
9 So so good. I just loved the serious sweetness with occasional jokes here and there (I think you know that I mean. Shotguns and nails all the way!). Very nice job.
10 This was absolutely beautfiful! There was so much expression for having so little dialog and it just flowed so perfectly. Great job! One note, though out the chapter you have a few parts in italics where there's no space between the 'I' and 'can't' - just one minor detail you can edit out. Other than that, that was just beautiful! And great job with the ending describing the kiss!
9 oh my goodness, that was sweet. i can see where some frustration (on pam's side) came into play, yet jim's offering is just perfect. i want a rose from jim!!! keep going, i want to see more lovely jim! (sorry, am i focused a little too much on this single element of your story? i don't mean to be, jim is just so sweet!)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I want a rose from Jim too :)
10 This is so good, oneleaf! I reread the last chapter and the rose still makes me swoon. (Too bad JKras is married now. Darn.) Anyways, this is just lovely and heart wrenching at the same time. Keep going!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. IKR? *sigh*
Pam ponders after almost having another little accident10 What a beautiful story here, Dedeen! So sweet and perfectly written. I just loved all the sweet inner thoughts and the final bit when Jim got home was just perfect. I'll say it again, perfect! (sorry, that was so cheesy, but I ran out of better words... hehe). Nice job!
very cute. nice job! i think i caught one small mistake where jim was holding cecelia by their bed and you had him instead of her. you can easily edit that to her. just wanted you to know. great job, though!
10 this is so perfectly written, depressing - yet showing small signs of courage that she actually called him in the end. great job with this, you conveyed so much in such a small anecdotal piece.
10 That was just beautiful and perfect. I don't really have much more to say than that. Wonderful job and this is one of the greatest things I've ever read.
9 That was so beautiful and well done! Great job, unravel, I loved how you were able to convey the love that Jim and Pam have both for each other and their daughter, quickly moving from intimate moments together to moments with the baby so seamlessly. Lovely, lovely, lovely.
10 I just loved that! Monkey and D were spot on. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for always taking the time to review, you are a reviwing writers dream!When I read the challange, this scenerio popped into my head. Now I'm starting to think I should be looking into therapy ......
Had to follow up the "Money" call-back in "Secretary's Day," obviously. And don't think that "six weeks" comment in the deleted scene got by this girl!10 Oh my god, Yanana, you are too good at this stuff. Absolutely perfect. I can't wait for chapter two!
10 My goodness, Yanana, you are incredible. You should know that by know. And that's all I feel like saying, because I hope it gets the point across. Wonderful story and I really hope you'll continue because this is just amazing. (Can I add that everything was so realistic I thought I was actually dreaming??? It might of been because I'm sort of falling asleep here, but this is really that good.)
P.S. - about halfway through this chapter you said 'china' instead of chin... you might want to fix that :)
10 Okay, I admit - I just read the chapter and then went about writing you a review - before reading everyone else's. And man, are they right! I completely second what everyone else said, and I just wanted you to know that! This is truly a masterpiece. How do I get you one of those ribbon-y things???
10 Aww, the antics of Dunder Mifflin Scranton captured in all their glory. Lovely one shot and I liked all the side notes that still referred to the present - a great addition! (sorry, that makes no sense. I just really liked all of this!) Okay, I feel ashamed to say this, but this line was just priceless..."thank you anniversary of the day the male “lactation consultant” - what kind of dude takes on that career path..." lol. Great job, yet again, andtheivy - you're stories are always a treat to read!
10 Ahh, that was hilarious! I just loved all the characters reactions and how upset Dwight was. Nice job making Dwight and Michael so realistic, I have yet to write a story with them because, frankly, I'm just scared to have to write them! Great story, this will make NanReg proud!
Author's Response: Thanks! "Making NanReg proud ...". Hmmm. If you want to see why I, at least, kicked in to this series, go read the first chapter of my first real story, "Tough Love," and imagine it had ended there. For no reason at all, other than to be nice, she encouraged me to write more. She took a fledgling author's little, weird story, and helped make it into a bigger, perhaps less weird story.
19 Jim gives Pam some wonderful birthday gifts that get her thinking... (Set about a week after Drug Testing.)
Forgot the disclaimer ... Don't own anything, not even any of the baubles mentioned in the story.
10 Oh my god. Vampiric Blood, are you capable of writing anything less than perfect, heartbreaking yet beautiful and wonderful, and well, just amazing? I think not. That was just fantastic. And in honor of NagReg I was going to copy and paste bits of the story in here, but really, I'd be copying the whole entire thing. Especially that letter. It was amazing! I loved this so much. Thank you for writing this and thank you for organizing this series!
Author's Response: Wow. You have me blushing here! Thank you so much for your INCREDIBLY kind words!
10 That was beautiful. I love the seamless transition from the past to present and how it went from Pam's sadness to happiness and then the same for Erin as well. And Karen's advice? I almost want to tolerate her for a second... nah, that would be too nice. Anyways, this was fantastic, and you certainly don't seem rusty to me. I hope you'll write something new soon!
10 "...Pam stopped mid-stride on her way to comfort their wailing baby girl. "No way. I think I'm suddenly really in the mood for Birthday Sex. See you in twenty...make that thirty...she sounds fairly pissed."
"See you."
It was actually 40 minutes later, with Cecelia fast asleep and Jim nowhere to be seen, that Pam wandered back downstairs, ready to seduce her pitifully, and slightly hung over husband...."
Oh, I just loved this part! Talking about birthday sex while holding the baby (or something like that) and then getting ready to seduce her husband. Just.... lovely. lol. Fantastic as always, nicely done!
10 What a lovely story. I kept laughing when Cecelia would fall asleep at the most random moments, in the most random places. Very cute and really well written. And the naked lady keychain? Priceless.
Author's Response: thank you so much ♥ glad you liked it!
Pam reflects on the events that take place on Michael's Birthday during Season 2.
10 Aww, this was great. In your response to Deedldee you said you'd double posted - so I'll review again. I always love that scene in the Rite Aid - I think that was one of my favorite moments/scenes in all of season two - which is by far my favorite. So thanks so much for writing such a lovely ficette about that, it made me so happy to read this! And a suggestion: in the story I believe you referred to the store as a WalMart - I'm pretty sure it was a Rite Aid... but I may be mistaken...
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review again, pmh! My other reviews got lost when the story was deleted, so I appreciate it :) Regarding the Rite Aid vs Wal-Mart, I think you are referring to another story. It was Rite Aid in my story. I watched the video of them several times to see what store it was and I saw Rite Aid signs all over the place. My eyes might have also wandered to Jim's long fingers wrapped casually around the cart handle, but that's another story ;-)
10 Aww, this was so sweet! I love all the I Love You's and stealing secret glances. Beautiful job with this, Blind Assassin!
Author's Response: Hey - thanks so much for your review and for your kind words. BA :)
10 Oh my goodness, that was great, Dedeen! I started to copy and paste into the review box and then I found another thing to copy, and another, and another... you get the picture. Basically every other sentence would be in the review box and I doubt you'd want to reread your whole story through the review... I'll stop. Anyways, great imagery and I love the scene at the beach - all of it. So sweet.
Quick note, you forgot a period at the end of the "But for her birthday, I’m taking her there" sentence (it's the second paragraph). Secondly, you said warn instead of warm about three quarters of the way through. Other than that, this was flawless. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Pamalamorganhalpert! You always know how to flatter a girl like me. I'm really glad you liked it! And thanks for pointing the mistakes... it's all fixed now. I knew there would be some since I wrote this in a hurry and wanted to post it ASAP! Thanks so much again for reading and reviewing!