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So I had been avoiding this story thus far because: 1. I'm usually not crazy about early season AU stories about Jim & Pam getting together because they tend to feel a bit too implausible to me, 2. Stories with 30+ chapters are daunting and scary, and 3. I'm a healthcare professional and I get too distracted by stories with a poorly-written and inaccurate medical plotline. (Wow, I sound like a total fanfic snob, don't I? I promise I'm not really).

But all that being said, I was bored this weekend and disappointed in the lack of new fics, so I caved and decided to see what all the fuss was about with this fic. And I'm so glad I did because I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE it. The medical details are extremely well thought out and essentially impeccable, the writing is fantastic (especially when it comes to the dialogue), and the plot is captivating and very believable in my opinion. I read the whole thing in one night because I just couldn't stop. My only regret is that I didn't hold out longer and wait until the story was finished, because now I'm dying to read the next chapter! So keep up the great work! :)

Author's Response:

Well, just wow!  Thanks a LOT for taking the time to leave this review.  I'm SO glad to hear that you think I'm getting the medical details right.  That is something that drives me batty about some stories, too.  I have to stop reading if the plot developments become totally implausible.  I've worked hard to keep the medical stuff realistic, so I always appreciate hearing that it's working.

And you made my night with the compliment on the dialogue in the story!  I've read a lot of stories on MTT where the dialogue is spot on and I've thought, "Mine will never be that good."  So I'm psyched to hear that the dialogue is a selling point of the story for you.

I hope to hear from you on the next chapter ... when Ted gets extubated!  You can let me know if you think I get the next one right.  (I do have a respiratory therapist giving advice, filling in the details that I've forgotten.  So I'm hopeful that it'll come across as believable.)

Anyway, I'll stop before this reply is as long as War and Peace.  Thanks again!

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That? Was ridiculously good. If that was what you came up with for your first fic, I can't wait to see what you do next now that you have some experience! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Was extremely nervous posting it but people are so lovely and responsive here that I can't wait to do some more!

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I love how perfectly in character everyone in the office is, to the point of not even realizing the Halperts had left. Great characterization and a very fun story - nice job!

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What an amazing story - there are so many small details and fine touches that just make this perfect; it's too hard to pick out any in particular, because I'd end up quoting the whole story! I loved everything about it. One of the best stories I've ever read.

Author's Response: Wow.  That is really nice of you to say!  I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the story.

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I've been camping ever summer, but I'll probably never be able to think of it the same way again. But that's a good thing, because this story rocked!

Author's Response: Lol....thank you AtTheStars455!! Glad to be of help? ;)

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Adorably sweet! :)

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Aw, very sweet. I love how early on Jim & Pam clicked and the lengths he went to in order to make sure she had a special day. Just lovely.

Author's Response: Happy you liked it.  From the very beginning ,  we, as viewers saw this very special thing that Jim and Pam seemed to share with each other...and it seemed to me that Jim would find it nigh on imposssible to stand by and not do something to make sure that Pam's birthday would be special.  I guess that's just what loves is....and did I actually use the word, nigh?

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I'm a sucker for a good Toby story, and this one was great. Both funny and touching - I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I love writing Toby.

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Very fun story; I love anything with Daddy!Jim.

And in response to your comment on the previous review - yes, please do another chapter, because this one was so great!

Author's Response: Thank You! I'm thinking maybe I'll write a little epilogue or something ;)

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Wow, that was sizzling hot! Never heard of SWAP before, but I'd look forward to reading more in the future!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm happy that you enjoyed it!

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Beautiful story with great imagery - I could really picture them there on the beach at the Pacific. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!

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This is so well written; I'm loving it so far! Please continue!