10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 11:38 am Title: Chocolate Eggs And Family Fun
Is it wwrong I find him sexy as a brother?
Author's Response: Um, if he was related to you, it would be. But I think you're safe.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 11:32 am Title: The Meeting
LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for your review. This was my first story, and its always like "eek, I wrote that?" for me.
Date: August 21, 2007 07:51 am Title: Chocolate Eggs And Family Fun
Chocolate eggs? Oh god that's disgusting. Gross. Ew ew ew ew.
Science is fun so yeah!
Also can't you see Michel being the type who would be like Joey and think he has a Southern accent when it really comes out Jamaican? I can. :)
Author's Response:
Hehe, I second that ew ew ew ew. And I wrote it. Eeek, yes, that is Michael - as Joey
Date: August 21, 2007 07:48 am Title: The Meeting
“Must be adopted. You know all those intercontintenial adoptions they have these days. Unless Jim is English….” Michael gets lost in thought.
My response to any Michael line? Oh Michael...
Really cute. I wish we could see Jim interact with his family more too. I wonder if Jim has any brothers.....
Focusing: lovely job ;) I'm going back and rereading your fic for fun sooooo yeah!
Author's Response:
This totally surprised me. Ah, my first story..... so not my best work. Haha. I am surprised you actually read it.
I love reading about their interacting with their family. I just think its such an interesting dynamic we never see!
Date: February 04, 2007 09:21 am Title: The Meeting
I enjoyed this. Two little points. If Jim is 8 years older than Emily, then she shouldn't tell a story about when he was 4 as if she was there. She should tell it like family legend maybe. Also watch the he/him mix-ups.
I liked it, I hope you do decide to continue. You have set them up to all go to her art show and I want to know what happens!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I realized that... I should change the phrasing a bit.
I tried to continue, but it got really weird and random, and then it just didn't work. So, right now its complete... but if I get in the mood to avoid homework and become inspired, i may just go for it
Date: February 03, 2007 11:39 am Title: The Meeting
Jim has such great siblings. Too bad they don't bring them on the show.:)
Author's Response: I know. I visit my family at work! it seems like an ideato me. ps - i got one more chapter up... its all for now, don't know if i will continue
Date: February 03, 2007 11:18 am Title: The Meeting
I love getting to see more of Jim's family! And I really like Emily. Yes, please, keep writing this! Lab reports can definitely wait....
Author's Response: well, lab reports are annoying, but they are grades. and necessary evils. igot one mre chapter up, and thats all until i get over my annoying writers block