Date: February 14, 2007 03:30 pm Title: Deeply
I love this. It is beautiful! This is a perfect Valentine's story. And I loved the use of moxie in the story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate the review! I couldn't help putting a little Moxie in the story! ;-)
Date: February 14, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Truly
Very lovely Moxie! I even enjoyed it w/out the smut. : )
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Deeply
okay, I absolutely LOVED this! I, like Pam, laughed out loud at the card! Just perfect, really
Date: February 14, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Deeply
love, love, love it! Thank you so much for this awesomeness! it's just what I need on Singles Awareness Day!!
Date: February 14, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Deeply
You know what I liked about this. They got to it. She gave him the card, and they just went for it, no misunderstandings, or miscommunications. I wish the show would do this.
Date: February 14, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Deeply
With any luck perhaps she'd be snowed in with Jim. Lucky? Heck yeah! I'd buy a ticket for that Lotto drawing!
Bare JimFeet AND rolled sleeves. Yay. With the snow, he'll need someone to keep that exposed flesh warm.
The Princess Bride - hmm, may have to dig out my copy. Yes, it is on VHS. I am old.
And as delicious as this was, your last two lines made me sad there was no fourth chapter. So, good job!
Author's Response: Oh how you tease me with your wish for a fourth chapter! I was trying not to make this too smutty!!!
Date: February 14, 2007 01:40 pm Title: Madly
Ok, I just saw that ch 3 was posted -- yay! But I have to comment on 1 & 2 or I will have a hugemongous review to post... So many lines I grinned at like a fool:
she thought she could find the moxie -- yes, a bit of Moxie is a very good thing to have
"James Matthew Halpert" -- love your made-up middle name for Jim. BTW, also the 'boy name' we had picked out if HooBaby turned out to be a boy.
"thinking that this must be what it's like to be Kelly" -- it must be terribly exhausting to be Kelly, what with all the outfits and lip gloss to match...
She felt her heart jolt when she saw he was smirking at her. Heck, my heart jolted at the thought of a Jim smirk.
Well fine, she can have you because I'm through. YES! When can we see this for realsies? Soon, I hope, because I am running out of Percocet and I don't think I can get a refill on account of being obessed with the love lives of fictional characters.
"You can read it on Wikipedia.”
“Then it must be true.” A little shout-out to the fake spoilers perhaps? Hee!
OK, off to read Ch. 3 -- and BTW, nice call on the Valentine's Day snow!
Date: February 14, 2007 01:38 pm Title: Truly
awwww, thanks for the sweet little valentines day gift. so adorable, and yet so well done....you rock. honestly.
Date: February 14, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Deeply
okay. its offical.
pam's valentine's with jim >>>>>>>>>>>> my valentine with statistics test.
Date: February 14, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Deeply
Just what Dr. Valentine ordered. I love that Pam was brave enough to give the (Christmas) card that Jim chickened out on. See, Jim? Very cute and romantic.
Date: February 14, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Madly
I am so happy after reading this! Happy Valentine's Day indeed. As usual, you're dead on in characterization and dialogue... and I am a sucker for a happy ending, and I am assuming we're heading to an even happier ending. I am so happy to see ballsy!Pam.
Date: February 14, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Truly
MORE!! Please?
Date: February 14, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Madly
Awww, Moxie. I feel all Valentinesy now! Thank you!
Date: February 14, 2007 12:34 pm Title: Madly
ah, happy valentines :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 12:31 pm Title: Truly
Oh gosh, LOVE it. Love the song too. Now for "Deeply" :O)
Date: February 14, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Madly
Yes karen and Jim broke up over a card. I love it. Hope there is more.
Date: February 14, 2007 12:14 pm Title: Truly
very interesting. feels like there needs to be more, here. so, i don't know, get on it.