1 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2021 02:43 pm Title: Deeply
Oh! And I also love the way you tend to stick with just one perspective in your stories. The reader really gets to be right there with one of them, and it keeps up the suspense (in a good way) when we don't know what the other one is thinking!
1 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2021 02:40 pm Title: Deeply
Love this and love that card!
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2009 12:47 am Title: Deeply
oh my god - that was amazing. great movie choice, i love the old play a freaky movie so your girlfriend starts crawling closer and closer. lol! great story, so much fun to read, and the ending was perfect! nice touches of humor with the romance, and of course the little spits of anger. seriously, this was amazing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2009 12:34 am Title: Madly
oh my... (audible squeal, then regaining a sense of composure) that was very nice.... seriously. :) i loved the turn of events, very well done time4moxie! i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! i really enjoyed how this was so similar to the job, only on valentine's day - but similar events occurred, it you know what i mean :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2009 07:46 pm Title: Deeply
love this, wow (:
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2009 07:24 pm Title: Truly
ooh, nice (:
Date: January 22, 2008 04:46 am Title: Deeply
this was SO CUTE!
I'm just sad Jim didn't say "i love you too".
HAHA!
but otherwise, it was absolutely wonderful!
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Deeply
Can't believe you stopped there.....LOL!
Date: February 16, 2007 06:42 pm Title: Deeply
“So what will happen if I take my clothes off?”
Enquiring minds want to know, Moxie...
8 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2007 09:59 am Title: Truly
Truly, Madly, Deeply, is one of my favorite stories here at MTT. It is the perfect combination of length, plot, dialogue, character development, and nervous suspense.
Moxie’s stories have become my proverbial band-aid when the actual JAM storyline over at NBC hits a rough patch, which is basically all that has been doing as of late. Truly, Madly, Deeply never fails to deliver that shot of closure yet it leaves me wondering why Moxie hasn’t been asked to join the group of writers of The Office. We need someone in there who actually is rooting for those darn kids!
Great job, Moxie, on another great story.
Author's Response: thanks, hammy. :-) *hugs*
10 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2007 08:01 am Title: Truly
I thought I had reviewed but it looks like I didn't . I really love the slow, cautious way they start to touch on the couch ending with the kissing- so romantic and tingly. I wish you would do a Ch. 4. Thanks for writing this.
Date: February 16, 2007 03:48 am Title: Deeply
Awww, this was sweet! And, damn, that was quite a brave card! Go Pam!
Date: February 15, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Deeply
its done? really really? but i want them to do it!! waaaahhhh
10 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 11:06 pm Title: Deeply
What a fantastic story! I was totally in the mood for a Valentine's Day story revolving around Jim and Pam, and this completely fit the bill. :) I almost felt bad for Karen, but with all this JAM fluff, I'm a little too distracted to truly feel bad for her. LOL Is that bad? I think so.
Favorite part: Jim was wearing jeans as well, with a white oxford shirt he'd left untucked. It was open at the collar and he's rolled the sleeves up. She noticed immediately that his feet were bare. If that is not the single most sexiest image of Jim/JKras, than I don't know what is! LOL And the fact that he has such a good taste in movies makes him even sexier!
Seriously, brilliant job with this! If you ever get bored, you could write a smutty outtake to this and I'm sure us JAM fans wouldn't complain... just a thought. :) LOL Lovely job, Moxie! Keep up the wonderful work!
Date: February 15, 2007 10:14 am Title: Truly
I know everyone's begging for a chapter 4, but personally, i kinda like where you left it off.. the open-ended-ness of if all works for me.
Please don't throw trash at me.
Author's Response:
No trash thrown at all. I expect I'm just going to leave it as is, honestly. Maybe I'll write another story with the leftovers of this one!
So glad you liked it!!
Date: February 15, 2007 07:48 am Title: Truly
Oh please Moxie - who are you kidding??? You start off with "Let's see what happens when you take your clothes off" and then don't let us see?????
That's just all kinds of wrong.
Sorry I didn't reply to your sneak peeks sooner - I was braving the frozen tundra yesterday to get myself back home.
Thank you for the lovely Valentine's Treat.
Author's Response:
I hadn't thought of it that way before. Hmm.
And I'm glad to see you made it home okay - that's much more important to me than timely replies! ;-)
Date: February 15, 2007 12:00 am Title: Deeply
Oh I loved that!!!! That was the best valentine I got today! (Not sure I should admit that) but it totally was. hehehe. Thanks so much! Way to FNB with the card! And I loved all the snuggling at the end.::sigh::
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Deeply
What a great Valentine's Day read! I'm glad they got to have their day, even in a ficticious world. The way they kind of drifted together during the first movie reminded me of first boyfriends and stolen moments.
9 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Deeply
That was so deliciously sweet. Loved it. Especially how they were just all cute and cuddlely. Just wonderful.
Date: February 14, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Deeply
happy valentine's day moxie. it is the sign of a true artist to slip her signature, or in this case, her pseudonym, into the story itself. nice one. you, and your stories, make me smile. i loved it! you're a rock star.
so, um...will we actually see what happens when he does take his clothes off? please say "yes, we will."
Author's Response:
thanks, super! Happy Hearts Day to you, too!
Chapter 4 ws not planned, but I've been getting requests, so I can't rule it out completely. Watch this space!
Date: February 14, 2007 04:58 pm Title: Truly
Now that's how to write a story! Can't wait for another chapter.
Wanted to thank you for reviewing my story too. I'm honored. We both wrote about Valentine's Day Cards. Seriously, your stories are one of the reasons I read MTT. Distance Learning is a classic!
Author's Response: Aww - I'm so glad you like my stories!! And you know what they say about great minds thinking alike! A card could make all the difference!!
Date: February 14, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Deeply
OK, so
1) Mushroom and Sausage is *MY* favorite Pizza, so I approve.
2) Is it so bad if all I could think when she wrote the card was that Kelly would be very proud of her color choices?
and
3) Really, really good story, a definitel antidote to post-Phyllis' Wedding blues.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Yes, Pam has learned a thing or two from Kelly, whether she wanted to or not! Thanks for reading!!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Deeply
YAY! happy valentine's day, indeed! great story, as usual, moxie!
is that really a card? cuz that's frickin' hilarious..
Author's Response:
Yes, it certainly is! I have it on my desk, I bought it 3 weeks ago, which lead me to thinking about this story.
Date: February 14, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Deeply
Well, moxie, once again you have delivered in model form. You built the tension in the first chapter, then kept it going to a so romantic, so satisfying conclusion. Love that Pam stood up and wouldn't be cowered by Karen and that Jim knew exactly where his heart resided. However...you left it at a point that positively BEGS for chapter 4...Come on, Moxie...you know you want to write it! And your public wants to read it....win, win, win.
Author's Response:
But is not better to leave the public wanting more??
Your has not been the first request, so we'll see. Thanks for the kind review!!