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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2020 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like this - and that image absolutely would've been tattooed on his brain forever more.

Author's Response: I remember I specifically wanted to catch that early season 2 feeling when we were in the midst of the angst after Phyllis’s wedding. We needed the fun!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2008 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg that is so cute :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I love looking back at S2-era PB&J.

Reviewer: jollyholly Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

loved it all but the Phyllis description of dancing stuck out to me. Just cause she's not a spring chicken doesn't mean she can't cut a rug! Anwyho, great story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I meant the description of Phyllis to be a compliment- I'm sorry if I missed the mark! I'm so glad you came back to read this old story. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw.  How nice to have a work outing that Michael didn't ruin in his usual cringe-worthy manner!  And I love the idea of Kelly and Meredith getting loaded together.  Heh.

Author's Response: Thanks! They would be a fun pair to party with, methinks (although they were a little snippy at each other at Phyllis's wedding!).

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww....I would KILL to see this scene! Aw, thank you so much! We SO need stuff like this right now.

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks! Yeah, we are desperate for some cute, happy moments like this, aren't we?

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you answered this challenge! Lovely and light and cute. Well done. And I really love Jim's pang being "normal", as if he's so used to the feeling, knows it like the sound of his own name.

Author's Response: Yeah, even something completely light can't be entirely angst-free because of that whole pesky "unrequited" thing. Thank you so much! "knows it like the sound of his own name" is a wonderful way to put it, by the way!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

So cute.  Gah, among all this Jim/Pam canon angst, we don't get this side of Jim anymore.  Thanks for bringing him back!

Author's Response: Seriously. I miss them together! I am glad I could conjure him for you! Thanks!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, how enchanting.  That was so perfectly lovely!  Both of their smiles deepened as their gazes met. Pam rolled her eyes a bit and did a funny spin, and Jim laughed. Awe!


Author's Response: Oh, "enchanting" is such a lovely thing to say! Thank you! I just wanted to capture a tiny moment of the magic between them.

Reviewer: allibabab Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

This story is very cute. ;)

Love the line about the familiar pang Jim feels when he sees Pam, and the way you describe Phyllis pulling her onto the dance floor.  This is such a great way to show us the reasoning behind Jim's comment about Pam's dorky dancing -- and the way they keep grinning at each other?  AW.  So realistic and warmfuzzy.  Thanks for this!



Author's Response: Thank you! I love them together, and I miss the warmfuzzy!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, so perfect! I love how these two share so many small moments. Lovely work!

Author's Response: Yeah, the angst is making it hard to remember why we want these two together so badly. Thank you so much for the kind comment!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was charming!  I just love reading about pre-S3 Jim and Pam in these angsty S3 times.

Author's Response: Yeah, I needed some out-and-out fluff today! Thank you!

Reviewer: kataryan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Adorable! I loved every word of this story, and I could totally see it all in my mind. Thanks for writing it!


Author's Response: Thank you! Or, you're welcome! Either way, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Adorable.  I can totally see it. 

Thank you so much for paying attention to Dancing Pam. :)



Author's Response: It was my pleasure! It was nice to take a break from the angst. Thank you!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

i had to look up the word tarried. but now that i know it i feel smart. :)

 

i look like a dorky dancer also, but i don't have any satisfaction from dancing like a dork. i think my wedding is going to be eloping in a courthouse. no dress, no dancing. sounds good to me. but a short sweet story to answer the dancing pam. 



Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm pleased to spread some vocabulary knowlege- it's the one thing I learned as an English Lit  major that I still use!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love how simple and straight-forward this is! Not too much analysis, just Jim storing away yet another little factoid about our (his) favorite receptionist!


Author's Response: Thanks! I tend to overdo the metaphorical implications, but this time I just wanted something simple- he loves her, and she's cute when she dances.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah, backstory for Jim's comments in PW - perfect! Of course he thinks she's adorable dorky dancing - the guy just loves her. All these complications in the show, when fundamentally, it's that simple. Love their eyes meeting and them smiling at the end. Such a succinct Pam/Jim moment. So sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think I needed to get away from the angst a bit, myself. They are, fundamentally, simply perfect together, and eventually it will work out. Thank you again!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

AHHH! I love this! Thank you so much for answering this challenge. I sent it in because I was dying for some adorable fluff, and this was perfect.

Parts I loved (besides, you know, all of it):

(Stanley, Dwight, Oscar, no Angela, no…oh, no Roy) 

Nice.  I also love that Pam is dragged out onto the dance floor (she would have to be, no?) and that he knows she thinks she looks dorky. Fantastic. And also the last line. Sooooo perfect. Of course.



Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for the great suggestion! I think it's fun to go back to relatively angst-free times because it is so rough right now. We need to remember that these two really, truly are right for each other. Thanks again!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww - I can just see this scene so vividly.  Just another glance into the world of two people who really belong together.  Thanks for jumping in with this!!!!   You make me want to believe things will really work out.

Author's Response:

You know, I thought about making this more complex- adding foreshadowing or some more angst or something, but I thought- no. He watched her dance and he loves her so he thought it was cute. They are perfect for one another, and it will work out. Keep hope alive, Moxie! (And thank you, as  usual!).

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