Date: March 18, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, so sweet! And inspired by one of my favorite Monkees songs as well!
Lovely job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: March 08, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
He’s tired of pretending he’s happy without her.
I like this line. Sums him up perfectly. Now if only he catches a clue as well!
Thanks for sharing this.
Date: February 21, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought i was the only one old enough to remember the Monkees (and my fave Monkees song)! Very enjoyable story. Keep up the good work! Ozana
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 07:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Anyone who references a Monkees song already is a star in my book!!! Add to that the fact that this story was really sweet! Nice Job!
What's next? A Michael Scott interpretation of Salesman??
Author's Response: Thanks loads for that. Randy Scouse git is my favorite song. Its good to know other people know the monkees... :)
Date: February 21, 2007 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful just like the yellow dress.
7 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
27 stitches in the side
Nice detail. This is a nice, quiet way to bring them to one another.
Date: February 20, 2007 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Absolutey lovely. I don't know what it is, but I always picture Pam wearing a yellow dress at some point too! I actually put her in a vintage yellow dress in one of my stories...not sure what it is about her and yellow! Jim seems to dig it too! And there was something about him counting the seams...and then there it was on the floor..::sigh:: this was so lovely. I needed this.
Date: February 20, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! I love the tone that the yellow dress sets, it's so cheery... which is something we've been lacking of late. Just great!
9 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2007 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow..absolutely lovely. I love happy JAM. All the references to show stuff was great. Especially Pam's line "It was dancing.” Wonderful.
Date: February 20, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY! How can we make Karen utter these magical words? “If you want him, you can have him. You two belong together anyway.” They are awesome!
Now I have to go & find "Randy Scouse Git" -- I think I have it on a cassette tape, of all things....
ETA: found it -- Gawd I love YouTube, and Mickey Dolenz in a poncho... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImG5hd1gIbs
Author's Response: "How can we make Karen utter these magical words?"
If only it was this easy! I can't wait for that moment.
And the video is wow. The poncho. Just speechless. The monkees pretty much rock my socks ;)
Date: February 20, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is it sad that I NEEDED This? hehe. Seriously I did - and I loved it! Thank you :)
Author's Response: Mostly definitely not, we all need a little jam in our lives. And since SOME people aren't letting it happen.... :)
Date: February 20, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is it sad that I NEEDED This? hehe. Seriously I did - and I loved it! Thank you :)
Date: February 20, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, this:
He really forgot how good it tasted, and why he loved it in the first place.
And THIS:
He’s tired of pretending he’s happy without her.
“And for the record...” She whispers really quiet so that nobody but him and her can hear them. “It was dancing.”
Now he’s really tired of pretending.
Made me soooooooooooooo happy. So, so, so happy. Fluff is so important at this point in the series, so thank you for that. Lovely.
Author's Response: thanks shan ;) I appreciate it!
9 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this! So sweet and romantic and such a wonderful happy ending. It truly brightened my evening!
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude this is amazing! puhhhlese keep it commin! Sounds like a pretty dress. . . i want one ! lol <33
Date: February 20, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really beautifully written. Thank you for that.
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
SO PERFECT! I love this!! My favorite part was when she whispered that it was dancing. Eeee.
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY!!! FLUFF!!!! way to give the people what they want! (since the writers are obviously not listening to us anymore) really really love this..
Date: February 20, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
ah, i loved it. happy yellow dress and humming and songs and jelly beans :)