Reviews For it shouldn't hurt me to be free
Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: March 07, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Simple. Nice. Sometimes this is just what you need.
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: February 25, 2007 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed Pam's POV on the night at Poor Richards. And this line was so well written - "Suddenly there's broken glass and shattered dreams lying in front of her in pieces on the floor."
Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2007 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: February 23, 2007 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Great read! I think you really got it here. I'm hearing a lot of stuff about how stupid Pam was to tell Roy about Casino Night, but I agree with what you're suggesting here. That underneath it all, she knew Roy was not what she wanted, and that's why she told him, knowing he'd take it the wrong way. Great job!
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2007 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: February 23, 2007 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1
i like it. i like the ending. sometimes its life that saves you from yourself.
and i am really enjoying this new couragous pam!