Date: October 28, 2008 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is such a great start, and I would be thrilled if you came back to update this story someday.
Date: April 12, 2007 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Cool idea, and well executed!
Date: February 27, 2007 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooooh! I love the way this story is going...and Jim and Karen are still just in the car! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. Update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2007 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
I've never been much of a Karen fan, and your story is just making me hate her all the more. LOL Seriously, though, you've really done an excellent job on this. I love how you write Jim particularly, especially in this part:
“Right,” he said. Are you sure you’re okay? he wanted to say. Do you want me to come over? he wanted to say. Call me if you need anything, he wanted to say. Instead he said, “Well, I’ll see you on Monday then. Have a good weekend.”
That paragraph really got to me; the repetition was brilliant. Throughout season 3, Jim has sort of been dancing around what he truly wants to say to Pam, and you really captured that in that paragraph, with him always wanting to say something, but instead he says something else. That's so perfect. Great job! But anyway, I'm dying to read more! I'll keep an eye out for another chapter and until then, keep up the amazing work! :)
P.S. Be honest now: just how excited are you for Harry Potter book 7?! :)
8 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2007 10:51 am Title: Chapter 2
oohhh....Jim's in trouble...from more than just Roy. I can't wait to see what happens. I love this story;great job!
9 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
AGGGHHH!!! i don't know who to be more scared of, karen or roy.. wow.. so good i'm actually scared! poor jim!
8 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Karen is really walking on thin ice here! First not turning over the phone when first asked, then bitchily handing the phone to Jim and then questioning Michael. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!
Date: February 26, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
i liked it very much. im quite anxious to see what actually happens in the next episode. good job though!!
Date: February 26, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh, I love the cliffhanger! I also love Pam's line to Jim about honesty - shoot my stomach dropped out at that idea.... post soon.
Date: February 26, 2007 11:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Really looking forward to the next chapter. Karen's discussion with Michael is great; I can really "hear" his side of the conversation. I love bringing back the stripper and Ben Franklin.
And I have to say - Karen? Not looking too good at the moment!
Date: February 26, 2007 10:01 am Title: Chapter 2
ooh! sneaky Karen! Me likey! Cannot wait for the next update!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 08:41 am Title: Chapter 2
wow - karen really is a bitch, isn't she? Please don't let Jim put up with this crap for much longer!! New chapter soon?? Please?? Good job!
Date: February 26, 2007 06:04 am Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for more. Really want to see how Karen takes all this. I'm hoping she gives up quickly but I like happy quick endings. :)
Date: February 26, 2007 05:40 am Title: Chapter 2
First of all, woo flippin hoo for Fancy New Beesley. I'm so glad that she's still feeling honest and wants to talk to Jim about... just... some things... (So Pam to say it like that!)
Oh, and the phonecall at the end! I was laughing, and then I was scared. It sounds like Karen might kill Jim before Roy gets the chance...Date: February 26, 2007 05:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow this is so great. I loved all the different voicemails. Creed's such a rock star.
What a good take on Cocktails. I'm definitely looking forward to this.
Date: February 26, 2007 05:18 am Title: Chapter 2
This is really well done. You did a nice job of keeping Karen on that justifiably-pissed-but-evil line. Also, Pam was really sweet and in character. I can't wait to read more!
Date: February 25, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! SO GOOD! Keep it coming! I can't wait for the next installment. This is great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I wasn't sure whether I was going to leave it as a one shot or not, so I hope that there's a postive response to the next chapter as well! :)
Date: February 25, 2007 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice! Awesome cliffhanger, and you capture all the voices so well. Angela/Creed/Meredith's message was hysterical, and I think you got Kevin's particularly right.
How many more weeks until we know?! Hee. Thank goodness for fic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! You've written so many wonderful fics--I really appreciate you taking the time to review my little story, and I'm glad that you enjoyed those particular messages. Those characters are lots of fun to write--I'll be writing much more of the cast in upcoming chapters, I hope! :)
Date: February 24, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was some ending just like the show. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! My jaw totally dropped at the end of the show. The end was CRAZY! I really enjoyed it though. If only we didn't have to wait for so long to find out what happens!
Date: February 24, 2007 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, and loved who well you wrote all the characters, very believable. Please write more, I'd love to see where this goes from here.
Welcome back to fanfiction! We're glad you're here.
Date: February 24, 2007 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, and loved who well you wrote all the characters, very believable. Please write more, I'd love to see where this goes from here.
Welcome back to fanfiction! We're glad you're here.
Author's Response: Thank you so much--I'd forgotten how fun it can be to get reviews! It's good to be back. :)
Date: February 24, 2007 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Eeek! That was really fun to read; I hope you're planning on writing more. Or a continuation of this!
Author's Response: Yay! Another Eeek! I'm not crazy about chapter two, but I have some fun plans for chapter three, which should be up in a day or two. I hope you enjoy it!
Date: February 24, 2007 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I would love to see where this goes!! I hope you continue!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I plan to update either tomorrow night or Sunday.
Date: February 23, 2007 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah! I loved it! All the messages were great, totally in character. Dwight and the shrimp! Ha!
Author's Response: That's so sweet of you to say! I worried that I wouldn't be able to get the characters quite right, especially in this type of a format, so I really appreciate your comments. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: February 23, 2007 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Since we're living on fanfiction, basically, till a new episode - absofreakinglutely cannot wait for an update. I loved Kelly's message, and Angela-Creed's message, and Dwight, and MICHAEL!
Roy's made me shiver slightly, again, and I'm very, very mad at Karen. So.
Can't wait to see what happens next - reactions. Darn, cliffhanger after his line, just like the episode.
Author's Response: Seriously. Six whole weeks? I'm going to be going crazy. Thank goodness for fanfiction, right? I'm so glad that you enjoyed my story, so far! Reactions are the best part of a story for me too, so I hope I can live up to your expectations. Thanks so much for reviewing!