10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 01:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Absolutely love it!! :D
Date: March 08, 2007 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael/Jan makes me happy. I kind of picture your Michael as one of those fluffy little dogs - often annoying yet cuddly...
Date: February 26, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing. You totally get Jan's POV. Lovely job!
Date: February 26, 2007 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This. Fic. Rules.
You have Jan down cold! Love her little italicized thoughts. And the bizarre magic that is Michael Gary Scott.
Date: February 26, 2007 11:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Perfect -- you perfectly captured both Jan's voice and Michael's strange charm....Nicely done!
Date: February 25, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, you perfectly captured this relationship and Jan's conflicting feelings - how she's probably so often asking herself "what the hell am I doing with this guy?" but then every once in awhile he'll just do something that'll make her melt. So sweet.
Date: February 25, 2007 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww! I think I may have died from the cuteness. Well done! I managed to actually forget all the prompts, and didn't spot them in this, so a double bravo in your direction. Hooray!
8 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2007 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
"She feverishly covered his face and neck with kisses, and once Michael Jr. was standing at attention, she ripped open one of the raincoats with her teeth and slapped it on him." - what a great line!!
Date: February 25, 2007 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooo I like! The world can never have enough Jamaica fic!
7 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Jan quickly developed a level of patience with Michael that she’d previously thought impossible. He would constantly say the wrong thing at the wrong time, usually in front of the wrong people, but it didn’t matter to her anymore. She was starting to see the man inside him. The man who was terribly insecure and unsure of himself at times, but also the most caring and good intentioned man she’d ever known. "
Yes, this is exactly on the spot. This is totally the reason Jan could tolerate his behavior in the last episode. Great job, I really liked this.
Date: February 24, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, that was so much fun to read. I love Jan falling for Michael despite her experience of how annoying Michael can be. The grocery bag full of condoms? Very funny.
Date: February 24, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm going to turn into Kelly for just a second here, so bear with me.
OMIGOD! Michael and Jan are soooooooooooooo cute together!
Okay, seriously, awesome. Your Jan is so perfect. She would be constantly yelling at herself but then falling back into finding him adorable. Your title says it all. It's got to be that innate sweetness that keeps Jan coming back for more. That and he's really good at sex. Heh.
Also, the ending, perfect.
Date: February 24, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really, really nice. You captured the best of Michael -- so hopelessly, bottomlessly annoying, but with glimmers of profound underlying sweetness. I was really taken by surprise by how much I liked this!
Date: February 24, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very nice. You did a really nice job with Jan's POV. I love the grocery bag full (!!!) of condoms and Michael's "who is she?" at the end.