Date: May 06, 2007 11:34 pm Title: Left to my own devices
Rumble? Ha! That's great.
And I love the part with Michael and Jan making up. I hope they make up again--after what happened in Women's Appreciation, I'm just all sad now. :(
Date: May 06, 2007 11:30 pm Title: Was it worth it?
Oh, that was a wonderful, wonderful chapter. And Creed! God, he's so drug-addled. It's great.
Date: May 06, 2007 11:12 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
I totally love your dialogue in this. Michael is completely authentic. This is freakin' awesome:
"Is she the top, Michael, since she's your boss?" Kevin asked.
"Kevin, that's -- inappropriate. And ... maybe."
And this was hilarious Jim-speak:
"Jim got to play basketball with the CFO, David Wallace."
"Get out!" Meredith said. "Is he cute?"
"Oh, yeah, totally," Jim said sarcastically. "We made out behind the garage."
The chapter ending is fabulous, too. Thank God this story is complete and I can just keep on reading. Whew! The suspense would've killed me otherwise.
Date: March 09, 2007 04:32 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Deleted scenes in a fic? Why that's just nutty!
Stanley always rocks - without putting much effort into it.
Date: March 05, 2007 07:12 am Title: Left to my own devices
deleted scenes - funny! good story.
Date: March 03, 2007 01:46 am Title: Left to my own devices
Fic deleted scenes! That's so awesome. I especially love the Stanley! He holds a very special place in my heart.
Date: March 03, 2007 01:13 am Title: Left to my own devices
HEE! Love your deleted scenes! EXCELLENT idea!
Date: February 28, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Was it worth it?
haha i love creed.
9 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Was it worth it?
Okay, I'm still giggling at "All My Employees." My god, I can just hear Michael saying that! This was really, really satisfying - action packed, as it were (no pun intended). The parking lot scene was gasp-inducing, because unfortunately, I could imagine Roy doing just what he did here. (And BTW, Darryl?? My hero Darryl? You nailed his voice!) I also liked the break room scene with Jim and Dwight - nice call back to Back From Vacation.
This story just kicked ass - you are awesome!
8 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2007 04:25 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Okay, first of all, I believe I should be granted sainthood for taking the time to review this chapter instead of tearing into the next one. (Good god, did not see Roy coming!!!!! EEEE!) I laughed out loud several times during the first part - your Dwight voice was spot on. "Incontinence?" I can so hear him saying that. And Michael's bed catching on fire? Hilarious.
Ahh, the lunch room scene - another shocker there. For some reason, I just was not expecting that; you must've lulled me into a giggly state or something. :o)
Yada, yada, yada - excellent story, must go read the rest!
Oh - and BTW - is it wrong that I'd kinda like to see Karen slap Jim across the face? Not because I think he deserves it necessarily, but just because...I'm perverse, I guess. :o)
Date: February 28, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Was it worth it?
"Wait -- who's Pam and Jim
I love Creed. Great fic but the last line made it perfect.
8 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2007 09:12 am Title: Was it worth it?
Oh GreenFish - How I adore this!! The voices are perfect - every last one and YAY for honesty! I actually winced as Roy beat the shit out of Jim. Poor baby. Really, really loved it. I said that already right? I just didn't want you to misinterpret. :)
Date: February 28, 2007 12:23 am Title: Was it worth it?
This was really good!!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2007 01:56 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Ooooh, cliffhanger!
I like your supporting cast here a lot. Meredith, Kelly, and Michael are exactly right, and Kevin's "You're probably in trouble." cracked me up. I can totally hear it!
Nice job!
Date: February 27, 2007 01:15 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Yay! Really great story. Karen should blow up at Jim like that on the show. What will happen next? Can't wait to find out. :P
Date: February 27, 2007 09:55 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
This is so good; you have the characters down so well. I loved that Jim thought the subject of Happy Hour was "safe", and Michael and his "crimson wave" (eww!).
I look forward to the next chapter.
9 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2007 07:53 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Sorry for the Review!SPAM but one quick note I forgot to mention: HUGE props to you for mentioning the Wake-N-Bacon. Had me laughing out loud because I saw that the other day on OT. Niiiiice. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2007 07:51 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Ooh, a cliffhanger! :)
So far, I'm loving this. You've done an excellent job of capturing the characters' voices. As I reading, I could totally hear each of the characters speaking the dialogue, which is always nice to see in a fanfic. I'm dying to know what's going to happen between Roy and Jim! Hope you update soon! Lovely job on this! Thanks for sharing and keep up the fabulous work!
Date: February 27, 2007 07:08 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Oh no! Are you going to write more? Is Jim going to be ok?
Date: February 27, 2007 06:07 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Wow that's a cliffhanger. I wonder when we finally catch up withThe Office it will be like that.
Date: February 27, 2007 04:20 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Haha! I love the Wake N Bacon, I just read about it on office tally! Great!
Great story. I can't wait for thereal episodes to air. And now Roy! EEEK!
Date: February 27, 2007 02:15 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Oh snap! What a terrible cliffie! I can't wait to see what happens next--thanks for writing! Go Jim!
Date: February 27, 2007 01:58 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Oh, boy. You absolutely nailed all the characters. It felt like an actual episode, so yay! Um, could you write a chapter for every week of the hiatus? That would be great. And nice use of the Wake-N-Bacon! And Kelly! I loved it. Plus, bonus points for someone finally slapping Jim. This may be an unpopular opinion, but he kind of had it coming.
Date: February 27, 2007 12:48 am Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Oh my gosh! Your characterizations are amazing! I could see the whole thing play out in my head just like an episode! Oh, Michael... Please write fast!
Date: February 26, 2007 10:27 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
You can't just end on that note!! Ah! I seriously hope we get to see some semblance of Jim/Roy fight/confrontation when it comes back on air.... that'd be so hot....
Anyways, awesome story and there better be more coming.... soon pleeeeease!