Date: March 12, 2007 02:09 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
Aw!
Date: March 12, 2007 01:49 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
This is adorable! You've done a great job establishing the chat participants as different voices, even though we know so little about them. And I'd like to venture a guess that Vexin is Phyllis, and knows who both Pam and Jim are. Because Phyllis is just awesome that way. :) Keep up the good work, Moxie!
Date: March 12, 2007 01:46 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
It just keeps getting better and better. Love it! And I love the bit about Jim and his jeans.
Date: March 12, 2007 01:38 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
The Miss Congeniality quote contest was hilarious. Makes me want to watch it again. And I loved the detail of Jim watching college basketball...because it seems like my husband has it on every TV in our house these days.
Can you tell me if there's any special meaning behind Jim's screen name? And I'm also starting to wonder if Vexin isn't someone we know (as in, someone who works at D-M.)
Excellent update. Can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 01:34 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
I hope you worked on two chapter in that couple days since the last update, cause you, my dear, will be recieve a TON of update demands. Especially now that things are heating up.
BRING ON THE SQUIRREL -chant heard round TWoP
Date: March 12, 2007 01:32 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
I love how Jim is taking care of her. Why is there a random $ sign near the beginning (h$e)?
damn, unshaved jim in jeans = sexy! i can totally picture it *swoons*
hum, my opinions on ketchup are i think store brand. i don't even know what i have. probably because about one thing of ketchup could last like two three years (does ketchup expire, i better check that)...
Oh, and in that same area you spell Vexin Vexian.... hum, wow, i notice more things than i think. Maybe being tired makes me a more detail noticer.
i loved this chapter. call back to the fire and desert island. and of course, ms congeneality is a great movie, cause i totally own it on dvd. and him ignoring karen - yeah, he is going to pay for that. and hum, does vexin know the true identity? very curious. these chat room people are becoming just as real as pam and jim. and they aren't real either!
Date: March 12, 2007 01:26 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
I always read these chapters which such fervor because I'm so incredibly excited that you've updated. And then I'm sad at the end, because the chapter is over and I can't continue and have to wait... :-( So basically- HURRY AND CONTINUE (no pressure or anything) I really love the chatroom dynamic- its very real and hilarious too. I feel like I"m a member of the chat room spying on them. This story is so awesome in part because it is so unique.
Date: March 12, 2007 01:21 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
You are forgiven for making us wait, Mox. Miss Congeniality!?! Really, now. HooHusband has a little crush on SandraB, too. Very cute. And she's even from around where I live.
Now, if only TVJim would realize he's just wasting time with TVKaren and dump her, all would be right with the world. Did that sound an eensy bit bitter? Oh, hell, it's Monday, I'm allowed.
(And nice details on Zodiac & college basketball. You rock.)
Date: March 12, 2007 01:19 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
Awwwwwwwwww! Updates soon please :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 01:14 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
A squirrel wearing a pink cardigan sweater pretty much defines fluff as far as I'm concerned. :)
Because honestly, if you can't find harmony in your condiment choices, what chance do you have on the big issues?
True dat.
*sigh* Still wanting more....this is driving me crazy. In a good way.
Date: March 12, 2007 01:13 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
Awww, moxie. I'm home sick for the day, and a Squirrel update is just what I needed. Thanks. :-)
Date: March 12, 2007 01:13 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
And you save my day again! GAH!! Love the banter, love the jeans bit (especially that he doesn't want to talk to Karen while wearing them!), love everything! And now I'm dying to know who Vexin is... it's Karen isn't it? Tell me I'm right!
Date: March 12, 2007 12:56 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions
Absolutely beautiful job, Moxie. This may have taken it's time coming along, but it was absolutely worth it :) You have captured this concept and story perfectly.
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 08:29 am Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
It's monday and I don't think I can wait another day for an update..I love the friggin fic!!!
Date: March 11, 2007 09:35 am Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
I adore this story!
It's incredibly well-written, and I love the voyeuristic, guilty pleasure feeling that comes while reading it.
Can't wait for more! :)
Date: March 11, 2007 06:36 am Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
This is my first review for this story but I've been EAGERLY awaiting more chapters. Oh Moxie! More More MOOORRREEE please! :)
This story is just awesome.
Date: March 10, 2007 04:52 pm Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
Moxie, I'm just loving this story (as I told you on OT earlier today). I can't wait to see where this goes next; the concept is so innovative and I love your insight into the characters. Keep up the great work!
Date: March 09, 2007 08:29 pm Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
i loooooooove you! guh...and yet, you are *killing* me!
::dies::
Date: March 09, 2007 08:02 pm Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
Hey, Moxie, I figured it out! Vexin is PARMA, right? No? Just kidding. You and your "mystery people." Haha.
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2007 05:55 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Terrfic story. Very creative. The chat parts are hilarious. I absolutely love it! Can't wait for more. :)
Date: March 09, 2007 08:18 am Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
What a great chapter. I love all the conversations in the chat room and Jim's thoughts.
Date: March 08, 2007 10:16 pm Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
KILLING ME.
really.
I can't wait to see just how this is going to blow up in Jim's face. And, shouldn't he be suspicious about her being so...open with a stranger? But I guess being drunk is an excuse....
hee!!
thx!!!!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 08, 2007 09:53 pm Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
GREAT story line! When do we get more?
Date: March 08, 2007 09:51 pm Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
Just...what can I say - I JUST LOVE IT. You already have an amazing writing speed so I have no right to demand this of you.....BUT HURRY!!!!!!!!!!
Date: March 08, 2007 09:28 pm Title: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
I have nothing of substance to say other than I love this story! It is so good.
It is not only a great idea, Moxie, but perfectly executed.
Love this bit:
But some habits were hard to break, and holding back and hiding was what he knew best.
It is oh, so true.