Date: April 09, 2007 04:34 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
Uh oh....I feel bad for Ryan, but I'm still sooo in love with Jim and Pam, you have me so torn
Can't wait to see what happens at lunch!
Author's Response: Hee! Thank you! :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 04:32 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
I was never a fan of Ryan until this story. Now you're breaking my heart! Anxious to read the next part...
Author's Response: I think Ryan might be my favorite on the show so I'm glad people are responding well to him! More soon I promise :)
Date: April 09, 2007 04:30 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
Oh god! It's heartbreaking! Poor Ryan! Yet another casualty on the Beesley Highway of Love... I'm being very 'Kelly'... :) But how cute is he, asking her to go to his graduation? I mean, geez. I'd go. In a heartbeat. Screw Jim and all his duplicitous motives. Ryan all the way!
I love this story way, way too much.
Thank you :)
Author's Response: Hee! Thank YOU! I'm so glad that you like it and have love for Ryan :) :)
8 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 04:26 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
Oh my LANTA, I just LOVE how you captured the awkward dynamic of them all being back in the office again. And eee! Ryan came over! I just want them together so badly! I feel like I'm talking really loud! Am I talking really loud? Hee. And just FYI your Kelly voice is amAAAAAAzing.
Oh and ps, I've had "Let's Hear it for the Boy" stuck in my head all day. THANKS A LOT! ;)
Author's Response:
Oh and ps, I've had "Let's Hear it for the Boy" stuck in my head all day.
AHAHA, I love it!!! And don't worry, you are speaking at just the right volume ;)
Date: April 09, 2007 04:25 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
I really like this story... I'm just not sure what to make of the dynamics between all the characters. Pam seems uncertain about what she's doing. Keep writing please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 04:23 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
What have you done to me? I was frantically reading this chapter hoping, HOPING that Ryan and Pam would have another little, ahem, session. When the phone rang- I wanted it to be Ryan. I'm also kind of hoping Pam ends up at Ryan's graduation. I don't even know who I am anymore!
Author's Response: Yes! That is awesome!! Seriously, you have no idea :) Heeee
Date: April 09, 2007 04:13 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
Now I really want Pam with Ryan. In this story, I've lost interest in Jim and just want Pam to give Ryan his chance. Soon?
Author's Response: Hehehe, that makes me a little giddy to hear, just so you know :)
Date: April 09, 2007 04:10 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
Honestly, I don't even know if I want Pam to end up with Ryan or Jim anymore (in this fic, anyway). Because your Pam and your Ryan are so insanely...AHHH!!!!
Also, the part about how Pam worried about Jim being uncomfortable in her bed? Is so awesome.
Author's Response: Ah! Thank you!! :) YOU are so awesome. For realsies ;)
Date: April 09, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
I have been reading fics for a while now and this is the first I am ever reviewing. I love all the Jam interaction but i cannot get past this Ryan thing. I just keep reading, hoping this will be the chapter that finally gets Ryan out of the picture...but then this middle of the night booty call thing. UUUUHHHHGGGG. You are a good writer though, even if I hate the content:-) And I must admit I am anxious for another chapter:-P
Author's Response: Hmm, where to begin... thank you for leaving a review, even if you hate the content? Um, I definitely can't make any promises because I don't want to give anything away, but hopefully you'll find something you like.
Date: April 09, 2007 04:00 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
Awwwwwww poor Ryan. kind of feel bad for him
and yay for Jim and Karen Taking a trip to Canada (I live there yay!) maybe they'll get stuck in customs on their way back so Pam and Ryan can just focus on important stuff... like umm...
sldgsalkgjkla I think I might have been in withdrawal from this story (I was starting some pretty angsty stuff) but now YAY!
This story is as good as Dwangela making out and Ryan calling Kelly at midnight COMBINED
off to stuff my face with easter chocolate with glee
Jim is a flip-flopper (that's my new word) and in my imagination Pam does go to the graduation and yeah...
good job!!!!! JKSD;GALKH!!!!!
**This is an incoherent review, I'm a drunk reviewer**
Author's Response: Hee! I love leaving drunk reviews... they are always the most fun ;) Oh, are those Cadbury eggs you'll be enjoying?? They are much smaller this year if you haven't heard :) Thank you!!!
Date: April 09, 2007 03:51 pm Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.
If you're going to have ryan and Pam end up together, then I'm ok with that, your story and all. Just don't break Jim's heart too badly. I mean he's been a jerk but the man had his heart mexican hat danced on, now a third time. And don't give me the whole Karen is a great distraction thing, she's just a 110 pound shield. Ouch I don't think I can read this until it's done now. But it's great, I mean really really well written. Even if it's heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Well, okay, its definitely not over yet, but it is important to keep in mind that this is total fiction ;) Also, what breaks Jim's heart in the short run could prove to be best for him in the long run, rather than ending up with someone who isn't right for him. Hope you keep reading!
Date: April 08, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
Ooh, well that was a mildly awkward goodbye and ending to the trip, but I'm sure it will be tons more awkward once they're all back in the office on Monday! And Kelly will be there! Oh, the possibilities...
Author's Response: Oh trust me, tons of awkward possibilities indeed ;) Can't wait to hear what you think!
Date: April 08, 2007 08:29 am Title: I love girl talk
If you described the premise to someone...cruise, hide and seek, drinking games...it would sounds just plain silly. But you really sell it...I am completely engrossed. Again, your dialogue seems just spot on. The scene with Jim and Pam in the closet...just great. *keeps reading*
Author's Response: Thank you again! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well :)
Date: April 08, 2007 07:33 am Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
Wow this is great so far. I especially like the way you write dialogue...very "in character". *keeps reading*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you think its in character especially :)
Date: April 07, 2007 09:09 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Ok so this chapter, seriously how do I now love Ryan more than anyone? Why is it that I watched him and Kelly so closely Thursday? because of you!
I adore that they bantered after sex about Dwight. And that he talked about her graphics design potential. I love that we figure out all the things he knows about Pam and all the things he is learning.
I adored the part when she is trying to explain to Michael why she was in Ryan's room, that was great! and Phyllis! way to go Phyllis.
I also love the subtle thing you do in the breakfast scene with Jim struggling to connect with her, but Ryan being the one to bring her tea (no need for the jimpot now).
But the ending, WAH! So he's going back to kelly? I know we're supposed to want JAM, but now I sort of want RYAM!
Post soon!!!
Author's Response: Oh the Ryan love... it makes me happy :) Your reviews really make my day because they are so detailed!! Seriously, you are dawesome. Definitely can't wait to hear what you think about what's coming!!
Date: April 07, 2007 08:57 pm Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed yet, but talk about crazy weeks! And I must admit I needed a little bit to digest this chapter before I posted a review. You really stretched your wings here and I won't lie - some of it made me uncomfortable, but in the same vein I was amazed at how beautiful some parts were. So let's dive in shall we? ;-)
I'm very happy we finally got more Jim and Pam discussion, and when she says...
"I don’t know, the big neon flashing sign above your head that says ‘I’M WITH KAREN’?”
I wanted to scream - that's right tell him sister!!!! I was really happy she didn't just let him have his way, I mean let's face it, he's being a total dick here (and sort of in reality) and he deserves to be kicked to the curb.
Which leads me to the dance floor scene. Well, um, GUH, wow. It was hot, provocative, and a little disturbing. Actually it wasn't the actions on the floor that got me as much as that Jim seemed really creepy at the bar. But you've done such a good jub making him creepy all along this is just a continuation. But seriously when you do sexy, you do sexy. This was the part I was a little uncomfortable with, but I'm thinking that that was your point. So, again way to just go for it, I'm not sure I would have had your courage.
But I cannot express the love I had for the RYAM sex scene. Not so much because of the fact that we had the foursome thing happening, but because she said his name. It was so funny for me reading it, it was so hot and he was so wonderful telling her she could say Jim's name, and then she said Ryan's name. And when she just kissed him, it really made me want to cry a little because I thought it was so profoundly emotional!
So well done for taking a major chance and going all the way with it. Not sure the voyeur part is my style, but nothing but love from me for the ending.
Author's Response: Hee! I'm sorry that some of it was... uncomfortable haha, that is kind of the mood I was shooting for so I'm glad it didn't send you running for the hills! I'm so glad that you liked the second part, especially the end :)
Date: April 07, 2007 06:39 pm Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.
I really should have reviewed this sooner - I apologize. This is in my Top 5 hottest things ever. EVER. I just can't even....wowza.
Author's Response: Thank you!! That rocks :) Especially since you have written some pretty steamy stuff yourself there missy!
Date: April 07, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
I really should have spent the last couple hours studying, not reading this, but it was so worth it. :)
Author's Response: Hehehe, yeah studying is SO overrated :) Thank you!
Date: April 07, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
Oh DinkinFlicka, how you always leave me wanting more . . . TWSS.
Author's Response: Hee... I could say the same about you my friend ;)
Date: April 07, 2007 09:29 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
I'm glad Michael doesn't know about Dwangela. Too awkward. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: April 07, 2007 12:55 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
All good things must come to an end. Wow, great job in creating the awkwardness of being back to everyday life. I have a feeling Pam is gonna get a big slap in the face, courtesy of reality. Am I right? Don't answer that here, write the next chapter!! =)
Author's Response: Haha, oh Pam and reality. I think she overthinks stuff in reality, don't you? Thank you!
Date: April 06, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
So they're back on dry land. I can't wait to see how it all shakes out.
Author's Response: Yep, back on land. Should be more up soon ;)
Date: April 06, 2007 07:17 pm Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.
Okay...that? Was hot.
I have to say, I'm still rooting for Jim, but, yeah...H.O.T.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks ;)
Date: April 06, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
now, this is a jam story right?
Author's Response: Well... they are both in it, right?
Date: April 06, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.
I apologize that this review is neither coherent nor well written, but:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
Author's Response: I love YOU so much! :)