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Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 04:47 pm Title: I love girl talk

I was hoping for some closet lovin'! Update soon!

Author's Response: Hopefully an update tomorrow :)

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 03:06 pm Title: I love girl talk

Wow. Okay, I was never a Pam/Ryan fan until this came along. You are making Ryan SO attractive! I'm actually rooting for them to hook up now.

Except then you get Jim and Pam In The Closet (tm) and that's all kinds of hot and breathless, so yum.

I'm really enjoying this. 



Author's Response: Is it weird that I find Ryan so attractive even when he is being a jerk on the show? Yep, he is the hotness. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 02:55 pm Title: I love girl talk

Oh man!  I just read three chapters at once and whoa!  Ryan's situation with Kelly and his assessment of Pam was really great - just really wonderful.  (The Titanic stuff was killing me - laughed out loud.)  I do think my favorite line of the whole thing was about Kelly not calling any less just because she dumped him - perfection.

And I still love JealousJim.  The Ryan stuff isn't bothering me at all - not sure why, because I sorta kinda want to claw Karen's face off every time she gets anywhere near Jim. 

I was really fine with the dance, feeling like Pam deserved to feel wanted and protected (the way dancing can make you feel), and then she looked at Jim, and my heart broke for them both because it feels like they are right back where they started - she's with someone she doesn't love and he's trying not to watch. 

Then, J&P in a confined space - always wonderful.

Wow I love this story!



Author's Response: Hee, Kelly would totally keep calling :) Glad you liked that part especially because it was one of my favorites too! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 01:41 pm Title: I love girl talk

So will you think I'm stalking you if I tell you that your story is now the MTT highlight of my day!  Seriously, the little email in my mailbox telling me you've updated makes me so happy.

 

This is such an awesome chapter.  I loved Karen and Pam eavesdropping, and the cover up story was very funny.  It was heartbreaking to know that Pam feels like she cheated on Roy.  I think that's true, that she feels guilty about it along with being sad she's not with Jim. 

 

I don't really have words about the dance with Ryan.  Um can I dance with Ryan?  "Mr UNC would you mind if I danced with Ryan on a cruise ship?"

And the closet!!!  I like that she is giving all the anger and hurt back to Jim, he sort of deserves it.  And I'm glad she left when he didn't say anything.  These two have to talk prior to the inevitable liplock......So make my day with another update.......



Author's Response: Oh stalk away!  Hehe, and I'll stalk you right back because seeing that you've left a review gets me very excited! And, can we all dance with Ryan?? That's pretty much all I want in life at the moment, is that sad?  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 01:14 pm Title: I love girl talk

Wow, DinkinFlicka, this is so good! I NEVER thought I would get butterflies at the thought of even a flirtation between Ryan and Pam, but you've gone and done it. I am VERY excited to see where this story goes!

Author's Response: Hee, thank you!  It means a lot since this is a primarily Jim/Pam shipping site that so many people have been enjoying this!  Seriously, thank you!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 12:41 pm Title: I love girl talk

Hahaha, I love the Ace of Base stuff. And the close dancing made me feel all awkward and squirmy... as did the hiding in the closet scene. But in a good way.

As a side note, it always amazes me how different people from different areas play games differently - I've played "Fuck the Dealer" but never with those rules! Interesting... And playing "chuck, fuck, or marry" among coworkers *about* coworkers went surprisingly well considering how dangerous that concept seems...



Author's Response: I've noticed that too! There are so many different ways to play games like that, its hard to keep up.  I had never heard of the "up Jenkins" game until watching the Cocktails episode though, and me and a friend got an entire bar into a huge round of it on St. Patty's Day, it was fantastic.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 08:24 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

two things, I haven't even read the new chapter yet so it isn't topical (I've somehow conjured up enough willpower to avoid this story until it's done) 1. I just read Clash of the Titans and LOVED It, i love the list especially, and I would totally hide under a desk too. 2) one of my friends is going to a wedding this weekend where the best man is BJ Novak. I thought you might get a kick out of that.

Author's Response: What??? HOLY CRAP!  That is awesome, I wish I could crash that wedding, even if I got kicked out by Dwight.  BJ in a suit = love. I mean, he's just going to have to face the facts that we're are meant to be.  Its only a matter of time ;) Thanks for saying that about Clash of the Titans! Hee, that was a fun story to write :)

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 07:07 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Ellen Pompeo annoys the crap outta me too!!!

Author's Response: Haha yes! That's the one thing I can't get past on that show, otherwise I would probably watch it.  Although, I happen to find Patrick Dempsey kind of annoying too... so maybe if they just cut out that plotline entirely I"ll be on board :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 01:15 am Title: I love girl talk

You DIDN'T just leave us all there in the closet!?!  And I love that Jim is the one who can't say anything, for once.  (Hee, he is all hot & bothered over Pam & Ryan!!  Is that mean?)

Author's Response: Oh yes, lisahoo, I did ;)  And its not mean!  Its fun to piss Jim off, hehe :)

Reviewer: angie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 12:43 am Title: I love girl talk

WOW. I just read the whole story (so far). I'm in the Jim is a jerk camp and think that Pam should have some fun with Ryan. I liked the part where you said that she didn't think that Jim looked that good in sunglasses.

Get to the smut already! You're killing me! 



Author's Response: Haha, just the thought of Jim wearing sunglasses feels... unnatural to me for some odd reason, haha.  Oh don't worry, the smut is coming :) Maybe soon...

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 10:22 pm Title: I love girl talk

Oooh-kay.  You are obviously not taking seriously my very serious objections to any possibility of "cookie" between Pam and Ryan.  Those two are never allowed to dance together again.  Also, Karen the skanky ho is not allowed to push mini-skirts on Pam for the purpose of impressing Ryan.

Finally, when Jim says "Just. Wait.", and Pam says "For what?", Jim should say something like....

"Just wait for me to get this condom out of my pocket.  I've been sleeping with a skanky ho and don't want to give you some disease." or...

"Just wait and I will truly will give you the best sex of your life." or...

"Just wait while I run find Karen, drop her ass like a hot potato, and... hey, are those shorts crotchless?"

And, I know you are working out for our cage match, but I'll have you know I'm not afraid to bite and kick.  Furthermore, I am going to remain unflinchingly rigid (TWSS) on the whole "no cookie for Ryan and Pam" thing. 

Other than those objections, of course I am enjoying this greatly. 



Author's Response: Hahahaha, you're right.  Jim should have said those things.  But not one of them, all of them!  And then Pam would get totally weirded out and run straight into Ryan's arms! muahahaha!  And as for the cage match, you should know that there will only be 2 punches: Me punching you and you hitting the floor. 

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 10:14 pm Title: I love girl talk

aww, I want them together so badly. I like how Ryan is the new Jim and all, but I'll always want them together in the end. Keep writing please!

Author's Response: Hehe, I will definitely keep writing and thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:44 pm Title: I love girl talk

This was awesome as usual. I can't decide which I liked more: the dancing or the supply closet. I really never thought I'd be torn between Ryan and Jim like this!

Author's Response: Hehe, its fun isn't it?  I'm slowly turning you all into Ryan fans, muahaha.  Seriously though, thank you!

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:36 pm Title: I love girl talk

Wow, I REALLY loved this chapter!  I mean, you had me laughing out loud with Karen and Pam crawling along the floor spying on the guys playing "hide and seek" and then you had that intense scene with Jim and Pam in that closet!

 

It's a roller coast ride of emotion!  I LOVE IT!



Author's Response: Hee, thank you!  Glad you like it :)

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:33 pm Title: I love girl talk

This is fun.  My favourite part was Angela's

“We’re already drinking,” she sighs. “Let’s not mock Jesus while we’re at it.”

I'm sure that the Holy Spirit can fit into the inter-atomic spaces.  So dance as close as you like.

I'm also somewhat ashamed that my hide-and-seek technique also includes having to pee as soon as I find a spot as well.



Author's Response: I know that happens to me every single time I have to hide!  Its like clockwork!  Um.. not that I play hide and seek all the time... um.. yeah.  Haha, just kidding, my little cousins are always forcing me into it.  I'm glad you liked the Angela line, hehe, I'm seriously considering having her get a little sloshy in the next chapter just because that would be... fun.

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

By the way, if you watch Greys Anatomy, this is the perfect thing Pam should tell Jim:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cK4UKD2dzMg

Seriously though. He DID leave her.

Author's Response: Ooh, I don't watch Grey's Anatomy (most because Ellen Pompeo just annoys the crap outta me for some unknown reason) but that is kind of fitting huh?  "You don't get to call me a whore, Jim!"  Love it.  And you are right, he totally left her, AND chose Karen.

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:03 pm Title: I love girl talk

Another great update...I'm loving the suspense and playfullness

 

Can't wait for more!! 



Author's Response: Hehe, thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JinRain Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 08:59 pm Title: I love girl talk

I am ADDICTED to this story! You write with such detail and clarity that it is so easy to visualize, and thus, get hooked!! Necesito más! :)



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  That is a wonderful compliment and its great to hear that you're able to visualize what you are reading.  More soon!

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 07:52 pm Title: I love girl talk

OOOOH I likes!!!!!

Dwight remembers when he and Ryan had post (non)sale drinks!!!!!!!!!!!

Really really good!!!!

yay updates! 

 



Author's Response: Haha, I love when Dwight and Ryan went out drinking!! I couldn't resist :) Thank you!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 07:49 pm Title: I love girl talk

Oh you can't end it like that. More please the suspense is killing me.

Author's Response: More soon! I promise :)

Reviewer: BoBerin Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 07:30 pm Title: I love girl talk

reminding them constantly to “Keep room for the Holy Spirit." Hahaha I did not expect you to add that! Good times.... Absolutely love the additions...but that ending! Oh man, you're killing me! Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Hee!  All your doing my friend ;) Hopefully I'll have something for you tomorrow!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 07:30 pm Title: I love girl talk

This is going to be completely insuffient but GUH, the cliffhangers!! Long chapters, yes, but CLIFFHANGERS. And I still have no idea where you're going with Ryan/Pam. I like Kelly, too, OK? Not as much as Jim/Pam, but I like Kelly, and Ryan/Pam will kill off both Kelly and Jim/Pam and that is...not very nice. 

I can't believe how much you've made me like Ryan/Pam, though - I won't kill you, maybe just be a bit mad. Pretty mad. Do not see that as encouragement.

It's surprising how in-character you seem to have kept Ryan - I love that. He's different but you can still put those feelings and gestures and expressions and voice and statements to the same person/character/face, and that takes a lot of talent, I believe. ;) 

Great job, as always. Update quick before I find the need to run after you. I have your [e-mail] address!!! 



Author's Response: Thank you so so much for saying that about keeping Ryan in character, I've been really hoping to keep him as true to his character as the show as I can, yet still making him somehow nicer so you have no idea how great that is to hear!  I'm sorry about the cliffhangers (ok, not that sorry ;) )  I hope to update soon... don't come after meee!!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 07:20 pm Title: I love girl talk

No!!!  Jim didn't kiss her!  Why didn't Jim kiss her!!!! You are evil with the cliff hangers!  (But I absolutely love this story!!)


Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you're loving it :)

Reviewer: lit_glitter Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 07:14 pm Title: I love girl talk

Guh.

Amazing.  Just, really really amazing. 



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 06:49 pm Title: I love girl talk

Since they're already in the closet together, maybe the next game should be Seven Minutes in Heaven.  Mmmmm...in the closet with Jim...


Author's Response: Haha, ohh 7 minutes in heaven...with Jim or Ryan? Either way, yum.

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