Date: March 28, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
Stop making me like Ryan so much!!!!!!!!
Screw Jim, hottest in the office will alway trump tallness or whatever!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm loving this story, awesome job!!!
I put to many exclamation points in this review
Author's Response: Heehee, I love the !!!!! Thanks for that ;) Hottest in the office indeed!
Date: March 28, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
Ooh, this is interesting! I don't like what Ryan is doing to Kelly, but it fits with the show (I don't like what he does to her there either). I think Pam just appreciates someone filling the Jim void but if things went further I don't know how much I'd mind... just don't make Jim overreact or get physical or anything because I hate the stories where Jim is like "GET YOUR HANDS OFF HER" and throwing punches and stuff. Also I think he's being a little harsh. But I still like that it's subtle!
I'm rambling; good work!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I'm not really a big fan of Jim wigging out and "throwing down" either, so no worries there. Also, Ryan and Kelly are my favorite office couple, but I'm using a little free license in the name of fanfic ;)
Date: March 28, 2007 03:27 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
I'm not so much split as I am curious which direction this will eventually go... If I had to commit to one specific scenario, it would be of the Jim and Pam screaming at each other on the deck of the boat in the middle of the night until their anger turns into... well something else. Something naked else. Huh, what? Yeah. But Ryan is being very charming and sexy. Mainly I'm loving the snide comments Pam and Jim keep throwing at each other. Could this review be more discombobulated? I don't think so. Love this story!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm plenty okay with a discombobulated review! Thanks for all the helpful comments!
Date: March 28, 2007 03:26 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Actually I'm changing my review (can I do that?) i don't like encouraging Karen's bad behavior (getting in the way of true love is not cool in my book, bad karen, bad!) if she's miserable in the end I'll be happy with anything you do. If that includes a hot three way with jim, pam and ryan- so much the better.
Author's Response: Hahaha, this cracked me up, thanks for re-reviewing ;)
Date: March 28, 2007 03:18 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
I'm totally intrigued with this story! Ryan and Pam flirting is something I've never seen before, and I have to say I'm really enjoying it. But I should say only to the point that it forces Jim to make a move. Because I wouldn't want Pam to hurt Kelly that way, and because Pam/Ryan would be at best a fling, IMO.
But it's awesome to see someone appreciating newly-single Pam's fun, sexy, flirty personality, even if it isn't Jim...yet.
Author's Response: Thank you for being intrigued ;) I think Pam needs someone outside her little love trapezoid to finally break her out of her shell and make her appreciate herself. I feel like she and Jim need to grow a lot more before they can be ready for one another, because they still lie to themselves way too much. Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
yes, i love this story! jealousy rules! you do a very good job with all the characters, and it's always fun when they are all there. Oh and I loved all the secret telling! I didn't expect some of those!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you liked the secret telling part. It seems like there are already a ton of secrets in this office so there is bound to be plenty more where those come from, am I right? Thanks!
Date: March 28, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
Wow--This Pam and Ryan thing is pretty crazy! I really can't wait to see where this is going next!! You have me on the edge of my seat! --CH
Author's Response: I'm glad that I've sucked you in! :) Hope you enjoy the rest.
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 03:09 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
I really like this. It seems like a plausible situation and I liked Ryan taking over Jim's usual role, very cute! I like stories that keep things subtle :) Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping to keep things a least a little subtle, so I'm really glad it came across that way to you.
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
First of all, don't listen to the naysayers! This is different, interesting, funny and most of all...kinda hot. I'm all about Jim and Pam, but it's been done to death /Elaine Bennes
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for saying that, seriously! It made me so happy to read because I do worry that there might be some naysaying involved with this fic and where I end up taking it :) Glad that you're enjoying it!
Author's Response: Oh, and quoting Elaine warms my heart ;)
Date: March 28, 2007 03:03 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
Oh my. You have outdone yourself this time. This is all kinds of awesome. Never did I think I would enjoy anything Ryan/Pam but I am loving this and I also love jealous Jim!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that! I wasn't expecting this story to get quite such a big response (at least for me anyway) so now I'm all nervous about offending everyone's JAM sensibilities. I'm happy to hear that you're on board :)
Date: March 28, 2007 03:02 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
bad Ryan! you love Kelly, silly :( She *would not* be happy with you.
Pam needs to remind Ryan of his girlfriend.
Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm a huge Kelly/Ryan fan myself, I really am. But, it is fanfic so I might have to bend that rule just a little ;)
Date: March 28, 2007 03:01 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
Oh, my, Ryan has moves we have never seen!!! And ha, Jim should be jealous!!!
Author's Response: Heehee, yes, yes he should!
Date: March 28, 2007 02:45 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
can pam make sweet love to jim AND ryan. Is that a little whorish? who the hell cares it's fanfiction, make it happen. I have faith in you. Don't break kelley's heart though, I have a feeling the poor little thing would explode in a burst of pink flames
Author's Response: Just so you know, this left me with a huge evil grin on my face ;) And I also love Kelly, she is too adorable to leave heartbroken!
Date: March 28, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.
“Sure you won’t be back with Roy in a few months?”
Ouch Jim. Very Ouch. That line reminded me of the line "Well at least I didn't leave you at a high school hockey game." He sure knows how to hit below the belt (twss)
I just have to say this is such a great story. Everyone's voices are amazing and I really want to know what direction you're heading! As much as I don't like the Ryan/Pam relationship, you're making me like it! :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah I definitely see the parallel between those two lines as well! I don't think he says things like that on purpose, but since he knows Pam he knows how to get a good shot in. I'm so happy to hear that you like the voices (which is a huge compliment). And I can't wait to hear more from you!
Date: March 28, 2007 02:10 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
owwwww this is gonna get good isn't it?
Author's Response: I hope you think so :)
Date: March 28, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
*Bell rings* In right corner stands smart ass temp, Ryan Howard and in the left corner stands lovable paper saleman, Jim Halpert! Now lets get it on!
Seriously, I can't wait to see where this is going!
Author's Response: Heehee, I feel like that comment should be the actual story summary!
Date: March 28, 2007 12:08 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
Hey, is it too much to ask that people will be "makin' love at midnight"? You know, after all those Pina Coladas and stuff.
I'm sticking with you. I really like Ryan being more likable, and the interactions between Pam and Ryan (so far). However, Pam and Ryan should not makin' love at midnight. At least, not with each other.
Author's Response: Maybe not the first night... but they will be on the boat for a few days ;) Stay tuned my friend. I hope not to disappoint!
Date: March 28, 2007 12:08 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
Ah! I live in Baltimore. Hahah. That makes me laugh. Loving this chapter. Loving this story.
Author's Response: Then as a fellow Maryland resident, I'm sure you also know the horrors of the Baltimore Harbor water :) So glad you're enjoying it!
Date: March 28, 2007 09:37 am Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
Flirting slightly with Ryan to get to Jim a bit? Oh Pam!
I am enjoying this story so far... Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Hope I don't disappoint!
Date: March 28, 2007 09:35 am Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
this is delicious itself so far!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so!
Date: March 28, 2007 08:27 am Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
Ok, as long as you will reward us. Nice or at least somewhat likeable Ryan is really interesting. And I am at least liking that Pam isn't just a martyr in this. Let Jim be jealous. (I'm not mad at Pam for Jim's squirming in S1&2, for some reason). As long as the angst spurs some freaking action, I'll come along for the ride, er, cruise!
Author's Response: Well, hopefully you'll be pleased with where this is going, even though it might be kind of a twisted ride, hehe. I'm tired of Pam crying and I'm ready for her to take some action ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 05:52 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Yay !!! This is so GREAT ! .... Wow Ryan being nice ,love it. Oh please update soon !
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it so far! I'm trying to keep a good chapter-a-day pace.
Date: March 28, 2007 04:34 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
I love it to death. More please?
Author's Response: I'll definitely post more today when I get home from work, so glad you're enjoying it!
8 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2007 11:04 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
Very cool. I like the black eye (Hilarious!, I'm soo evil). I'm looking forward to where this one goes. Props!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought the black eye added a little extra funny as well (as twisted as that might be)
Date: March 27, 2007 10:39 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic
Hey do you think it'd be alright...if I could just crash here tonight...hey jealousy....hey jealousy...teehee. I'm hearing the lyrics to that song as I read this. Perfect title by the way, because Jim and Pam are so green with it they can't even see straight. I can't wait to see what happens when they finally come to their senses!
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah jealousy is going to be like the common undercurrent of the whole story. Hopefully everybody will get a little slice of it ;)