Date: April 04, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Three
Yay! This is my favorite so far (big surprise, right?). This is my favorite line: "Her eggs might be released erratically, but his sperm refuse to swim at all." That's really good!
Imagine 3 Jambabies coming into Dunder-Mifflin to visit. Yikes! Put away the Foreman Grill and lock up the paper clips, the Halpert triplets are coming in!
Love it.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! That would be a great episode!
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 04:25 pm Title: Three
That was so incredibly sweet - I felt so bad for Jim because you know he feels like he's let her down (though of course it's NOT his fault)! I loved the other two chapters, but I'm too much of a Jam fan to feel totally happy that she wasn't pregnant by Jim in the other two!! Really looking forward to 4 and 5, though I fear you'll find other fathers! (no!!!!)
:-)
Author's Response: Don't worry too hard! I felt horrible about her not being with Jim in the first two, and I wrote the bloody thing!. Thanks for the review!
Date: April 04, 2007 04:13 pm Title: One
I LOVED THIS. sorry i'm not more eloquent today, but you totally conveyed the heartache both must have felt and all those failed tries. Loved it!
Author's Response: eloquence is overrated, and you did just fine. Thanks so much!
Date: April 04, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Three
she's pregnant!!!!!! :) *huge grin*
is it wrong how much i care about fictional characters - or in this case fictional fictional characters!?
Author's Response: Story of my life, Jess. Story of my life.
Date: April 04, 2007 06:58 am Title: Two
this is great even though its not jim/pam babies. i felt so sorry for both jim and pam at the first one, the crying in the car. and then meeting in the hospital here. gah! poor jim. poor pam!
Author's Response: I know, these two crazy kids! And don't worry, there will be Jim/Pam babies aplenty. :-)
Date: April 03, 2007 11:35 pm Title: Two
Oh, weep! That was so bittersweet. My heart was just aching for Jim.
Author's Response: Bittersweet is one of my favorite emotions to write- thanks for the reviews!
Date: April 03, 2007 11:32 pm Title: One
That is just perfectly what Jim would say. Poor Pam!
Author's Response: I love Jim, and I wish he was real and split into a million bodies so we could each have one. :-)
Date: April 03, 2007 11:24 pm Title: Two
I'm one of those people who normally skips Pam pregnant stories but I'm so glad I read this! So unique. so ready to read some more..
Author's Response: While I love the fluff, sometimes I like the non-fluff, too. I'm glad you like it!
Date: April 03, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Two
I'm really enjoying this story so far, great job! I actually really enjoy how it's not just a Pam/Jim baby everytime (although you've gotta have couple!), and this:
he feels a strange sadness because there was a time where he couldn't get this image out of his head, for all it promised of the future
and this:
the part of him that wishes he could just erase a decade and go back in time scares him
made me tear up a little. The thing that upsets me most in fic (and in life) is that feeling of nostalgia and regret and lost chances - and you've captured that really nicely. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Two
GAH.. this is even more depressing than the first! and i STILL love it!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 08:33 pm Title: One
OUCH!!! And the title had given me such hope for fluff! But I loved it. Because sometimes, life really bites.
Author's Response: There will be fluff, I promise. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Two
Sigh... more grief bone punching.
Good job!
Author's Response: Ha! That's an aweosme way of putting it, thanks!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:43 pm Title: One
Oh my god, no! No Roy-lets!
I love this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The first story freaks me out, too, and I can't figure out what Pam would do!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Two
Heartbreaking! But still really good! Can't wait for the rest!
I love your Jim, sad but happy, supportive and loving no matter what.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I do love the Jim...
Date: April 03, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Two
Wow. This is so sad, yet I love it. I think you know that I can't handle too much sad when it comes to these two, so how about some nice fat Jam babies soon? Please?
In all seriousness, this was VERY well done and I am proud of you!
Author's Response: Thank you, Ray! The Jam babies will be the fattest and the cutest, don't you worry....
Date: April 03, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Two
Those first two stories are so good. It's interesting to consider all the roads Pam's life could lead to. Looking forward to the other possible Pams!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you for the blue ribbon! It means so much to me that it's nutty! I love thinking of how their lives could intertwine and diverge.
Thanks for the review!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Two
Back in time! Back in time!
Hey, where's my Jambaby? Didn't you promise me a Jambaby? Didn't you swear on a stack of Bibles there'd be a Jambaby? What? My imagination? Yeah... it's pretty good.
Author's Response: Hee, I promise for real!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Two
Oh I expected mindless fluff but this is sooooooooooo much better. More please!
Really- love it! Great job
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be writing the next part tomorrow, so you won't have to wait too long!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:02 pm Title: One
Oh, waah! Wrong dad!! But sweet that Jim will help. I like these lines: "it had been so shaming for Roy and for Pam, and even for himself. Now things were rockier than ever with Karen, and he can't blame her for being wary of practically anything." It does seem to me that all 3 of them would be embarrassed and ashamed of the mess! And of course Karen (if she stayed with Jim) would be watching like a hawk and not trusting anything.
I hope some of the 5 are little Jambabies...! (Is there something you want to say about the baby? (/Ryan))
Author's Response: Don't worry- I like my babies Jammy, too! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: April 03, 2007 06:55 pm Title: One
Aw. That would be terrible for Pam. If only it were Jim's......hmm. Lol <3
Author's Response: Oh, just wait. She'll have plenty of Jim, if you know what i mean...
Date: April 03, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Two
i need the other three right now! i thought it would be like five ways she puts a note in his lunchbox but this is way more exciting! love it
Author's Response: You'll get the other three as fast as I can write them! I'm going to be the best employee ever this week.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 03, 2007 06:49 pm Title: One
wow. these first two are brutal. I guess kids in my mind just puts the final nail in any relationship coffin. I guess that's what's so heartbreaking. and you're breaking them my friend, you're breaking them.
Author's Response: I know, I know, it's so mean, but I really wanted to write something not fluffy. Stay tuned, though...