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Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 08:02 am Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

Wow...that was... intense. Why have I suddenly become very interested in reading about two fictional characters first night of sex? lol...Well, when it's well written like this it can't be helped. Now, I have to wait many hours until I can jump my wife's bones. Thanks a lot... lol...

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 06:29 am Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

Awe- great ending.  I'm going to trust that it worked out positive for Ryan/Kelly, because I just couldn't have it any other way.  ;)  Great story!

Reviewer: Jimpong Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 12:39 am Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Really, really good overall, you brought it home, really enjoyed the epilogue, way above average.  Nice job.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

I completely agree about the telepathy!
And that is just brilliant advice to Kelly. Love it. And I trust it will turn out similarly for Ryan and Kelly as Jim and Pam. Nice.
Great idea. Very fun! Loved it all. And nice ending!!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 11:36 pm Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

*applaudes* WONDERFUL!!!! love the epilouge. love everything! this story just... wow. and i think you just set yourself up for writing the kelly/ryan version... hehe..

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 10:03 pm Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

*thud*  Head hits desk.  I was hoping you might reward my insomnia with something luscious!!  This has been an awesome read.  Totally.  You have won a tiny Dundie.

Reviewer: Pam Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

Oh, what a perfect ending!  Although, I don't want it to end.  Maybe, you could write a sequel.  If not, then I'll be happy to just keep re-reading this. 

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 09:21 pm Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

haha, very sexy.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 08:45 pm Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

FAWOIEFJ;OIM;VIEO;JAFWOIEJ!!!!!!!!!

So happy right now.  I'm officially back in favor of marriage.  Well, for Jim and Pam anyway.  :)  Such a great ending to a great story.  You da bomb, snakes.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

So she does the hyphen thing, huh?  I guess I could see that.  Goodness, I don't know where to begin with the gushing.  You're one of the best writers around and to have you working in my preferred genre of smut laden fluffly-ending jam has been a real treat.  The story was a delight from start to finish and deserves all the recognition it has received.     

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

Yay!!  Jim couldn't have really thought that would get it out of his system but I'm so glad he did because it finally brought them together!  And yay! for you having such an orignal way to have them end up together  (hot too!)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

Niiice.  I'm glad there's still a little more to go!  I'm enjoying this so much.

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 03:33 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

GAH. that has got to be the weirdest, funniest, SEXIEST confession ever. never would have imagined jim declaring his love for her quite like that, but sh*t, you make it work. (i think it's worthy to note that i try to stay away from smut, and i try not to cuss. proof that you indeed broke my brain!)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 07:29 am Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

Awesomly hot fic. And why I decided to read it at work, I'll never know, but wow. Guh.

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 06:04 am Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

*sigh*

Just perfect. 

Loved Jim's description of how his body parts are feeling -- and how now that they all KNOW, that there's no going back.

Very, very well done. Can't wait for the epilogue. 

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 04:28 am Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

Aw that was so cute!! Great job, really loved the story!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 11:25 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

The Jim's body part conversation was perfection. And, well, the rest of it too. Nice work. Sad to see it's over! Enjoyed every minute!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 10:38 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Wow! Just caught up on all of these...um...HOT. Kitchen scene was my absolute favorite!

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

aw, I loved it!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

Hooray!!!!!!!  I was so excited to see another chapter of this!  (Well, not as excited as, say, Jim...)

I think you're missing a -lutely here, though:

“I mean my eyes can’t ever look at you again with out remembering how abso-fucking perfect every last bit of you is..."

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

HA!  I love that Jim talks like a 'guy-guy'!! Love the BoG shout-out, too!

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

I loved the call out to Blades of Glory.

This chapter made me laugh my @ss off, but it was also very endearing.  How in the world to get rid of Karen though??

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

I HATE that this is over! Thank you for a wonderful story--very interesting, well-written, hot, and fabulous. Great job!!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 02:00 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

Do I wanna know what Jim is thinking?  Absolutely I do!

Wonderful chapter. 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 01:36 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

Well, I'm pretty sure I can guess what Jim is thinking, but I'll be more than happy to read your take on it :)

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